All I can say right now is:

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!

She's PREGNANT? Oh God! If only this goes well... She has to tell Mike though! and her momma... Not her friends. They obviously don't understand their situation and have to keep out.

As Much as I do love em, this is something Michael and Keisha have to figure out together. That's all that rlly matters.

Damn you Joseph! How much further is he gonna go to try n seperate these two?

I'm growing so tired of his cold, domineering ass! Why can't he just wish his son happiness instead of making him work all the time like some stage-robot jus to fill his pockets?

And now sent him off to a diffrent school and everything....

Like really! Luckily Michael is so certain about his love for Keisha.
I wish she would be more certain too and believe that their love will triumph anything.

Cause only if she refuses to see that, it might just be harder to survive these rough moments.

Of course they're gonna miss each other but I'm sure they'll find a way. They always do.

Besides, I'm praying for them so they'll just have to x'D

I hope you update soon it's been awhile.

Damn things just got BAD, I hope they work it out and prove everyone wrong! They need to no one believes in them, so they have to make it work and for their baby.. I Michael Mike and Ki could do it, they just don't need outside influence.

Honestly if I was Ki, I would stop freaking out and just make it work with the man I love! Man like him don't come around...

damn this is getting worst

Damn

Girl, I know I've got nerve having never really commented, but I've finally decided to come out of my whole. I can't say how much I love this story and all of the passion you put into it. It's like the flow of an ocean with how you'll tense up their relationship and then let it go or how you'll have them submerged in the water when they're together while the madness that is their lives surges above.

The characters you write are real and tangible, like you could write a whole other with just them and no MJ (but you could never get rid of our Mikey, now could ya! ;]). Roxy, Aubrey, Kenny, and Zafir. I have to say Z and Roxy are my favorite and could have me giggling on my computer day and night. Rocked Worlds is my favorite story on here and without a doubt the Best story on this website and I love how you've chosen to explore the possibilities of the characters with an AU. With this being MJFiction it's like an AU in an AU, because I feel the MJ fictions that really capture Michael's life and his essence are almost like AUs of his own real life.

What I love more than anything else about this story is your writing and how rich it is. It's wistful in someplace but heavy in others, all the while with that same undercurrent of wistful, heady passion running through it. I love the culture of the Creole people you've chosen to add as well. I'm not some who's in love with modern America and the way life is today and it's always refreshing to come into contact with people who are different - old souls you could say - even if it's just in story format.

Ahh!! Your writing always has me eager for more, not just of this story but whatever you're willing to share with us on here. I remember this story was dwindling on chapter 4 for months and you've just recently started updating regularly again. My guess is that you spent that time writing out most of the story?

Whatever it is you're doing please don't stop - It's breathtaking. amazing. Phenomenal. Passionate. Real. Life. Breathtaking.

Thank you.

Jazz

L.O.V.E.