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Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 29, 2015 10:04 am Title: Chapter 13

Ommggg u havve to continue THIS. Its SO HAWT

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2013 07:57 am Title: Chapter 8

omg this fantasy is so amazing but so sad

Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2012 08:16 pm Title: Unexpected Visit

Hey! Okay, I haven't actually read this story, but I think I will because it seems really interesting! I just wanted to say I was checking out your profile and OMJ! That little clip from the HISTory Tour was fucking SEXY! MMMMM YUMMY! That clip made my day and I just wanted to tell you that. Haha! :DDDD

Reviewer: Jrmspfingston Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2011 08:41 am Title: Chapter 10

That's kind of a bittersweet moment there but I think its kind of sweet that he remember's Jade but it also sad that he doesn't remember his family. Can't wait to read the next chapter I want to see what happens :)

Author's Response:

Yeah it is isn't it....

and next chapter should be up real soon :)

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2011 04:02 am Title: Chapter 8

ufff...... I sooo hoped that we has SOMEHOW alive, good , good , gooood ...

but oh no , it seems really that he lost his memory :0 OMG, i hope he will see Jade again and remember who she is.. but ... he just knew her a day or so. they could start over again :)

Ok well.... he's injured very badly and all... DAMN, I wonder how this goes on !!

Author's Response:

haha i had to make him be alive otherwise they'd be no more story really...

and yep he has lost his memory! :( just gunna have to wait a see if he remembers Jade......

I'll update asap!

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2011 03:57 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh my gosh , so damn damn damn damn DAMN DAMN !!!!!!!!! I sat infront of my computer and thout to myslef also No no no !!! can't be true, fuuuuck !!! :(((((((((((((

If I were Jade I would jumpf off the balcony or something :((((

What  a mess ... :---(((((( Ok fuck... this is just  a story, just a story.... calm down

nooohohoooo :((((

sorry, you write just very good, I absolutely love your stories , they cant be better

Author's Response:

Awwww i wanted to cry writing the damn story haha

but yes it's just a story!!

and gosh THANKYOU Sarah! Ur so sweet!!!!! but i think that other people write better than me :/

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2011 08:10 am Title: Chapter 6

You know I LOVED this story, but yeah... don't know how it should go on, IF it will go on I will slap myself of happiness ofcourse :D haha - BUT it would be a good end if you dont want to write more.

You could start a new one :D I will read every story of you and I'm sure also others will :D NERVER STOP WRITING, otherways I could jump of a bridge :C


;) Ok what I wanted to tell you, we spoke about his underwear ( haha stalker we're so stalker fans :D :D :D )

and you said you saw PICS OF HIM and that he wears boxers, COULD YOU GIVE ME THE LINK or something , I never saw there kind of pict OMG.

Yeah and I think boxers are more what he wears not normal underwear :D haha he's the king, don't forget :D And yess your gif in your BIO, I nearly fell down the chair, DAMN I LOVE HIStory tour, tight gold pants, I think thats his best invention EVER !!!! adn the video IN THE CLOSET, adn ripping his shirt on stage, and the bad outfit with the belts... *.* and and and and and and and :DDDDDDDDDDDD

Author's Response:

Awww thanx Hunnie!!! i think i'll go a litle further then end it.......but thankyou so much!!!

haha yes well i don't know where i saw the pics but can send ya one i have i need your email! sorry haha i know u've given it to me already but i can't remember it :P

and yeah me too, but the thought of him not wearing any underwear is such a turn on haha yes goldpants are so sexy! and don't even get me started on In the Closet! DAMN!!!!!!!!!! haha everything about his is super sexy :P LOVE HIM! 

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2011 05:42 am Title: Chapter 5

*.* traumatized

*.* still traumatized

*.^ fanning myself

^.^ catch breath

o.O back to consciousness

: o try to speak


:D :D :D :D normal again :D ok what I wanna say - you gave me a totally new idea, perhaps mike didnt wear underwear onstage !!!! Haha, could be really true... ( I'm not at all staring at his crotch no no!! ) cough cough

* yess :D could be really true !! haha, what are u thinking abaut this ?

Author's Response:

hahahaha u crack me up :P

and yes i believe he didn't wear underwear on stage, it moves around so damn much haha and well i DO always stare at his crotch haha (Have a look at my Bio, there is a VERY sexy gif of Mike thrusting in his goldpants! will faint haha)

but yes i don't think he wore underwaer on stage but i'm pretty sure he wore boxers not underwaer coz i've seen heaps of pics where you can see his boxers haha i'm such a perv :P

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2011 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 6

awww no dont let it end. a few more chapter of then togethere one more time. 

Author's Response:

ok haha :) thanx

Reviewer: loveforever Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2011 02:36 pm Title: Unexpected Visit

Tehehehehe.... I love my fantasy that you made for me :)

Author's Response:

glad ya do hunnie!!

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2011 10:28 am Title: Chapter 2

Yeeiii priya - just reading this story of you and its gorgeous !!! hhahahaha sista, so lucky to found you here we just think SIMILAR - cant belive this really !!! Your so good at writing <3

Author's Response:

heehee well this story isn't about me :P but Thanx!!! glad you like it!!!

and yes we are very Similar :P

Reviewer: Eminemprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2011 11:59 am Title: Chapter 5


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Reviewer: briarae92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2011 01:53 am Title: Chapter 3

Lawd have mercy LOL <3

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Date: Nov 28, 2011 01:32 am Title: Chapter 2


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Reviewer: briarae92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2011 01:08 am Title: Unexpected Visit

Lawd, where's my damn fan at?! LOL. This was VERY good :) Don't stop, continue please <3

Author's Response:

hahaha THANKYOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!! and ok i will feel free to suggest any ideas! :)

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