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Reviewer: lifeofamoonwalkermj7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 06:15 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

i loved it

 

Reviewer: Makayjuliet Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2014 10:32 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

I love this story so much :) also I'm wondering how you made your cover picture. 

Reviewer: Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2013 03:19 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger

Why have I never heard this Michael Jackson song before? It's so hauntingly beautiful. Made me wanna cry. This story is very good also. (:

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2013 11:55 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

I'm scared for next chapter lol for one the end is near and two I hope Mike is truly happy. I'm glad sean adapted to Michael and his fam well. But I hope he adaptes to MJJJr And the story of Billy and Michael doesn't repeat unless the ending is a good one and not as tragic as their father's.

Author's Response:

Awww the last chapter is now up. I will truly miss this story and reading the reviews for Annalissa and Michael. Thank you so much for all your lovely reviews and for taking the time to read my little story. xoxo

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 03, 2013 07:41 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

Damn that musta been hard for Michael to do, to kill your partner in crime, you best friend. Is hella hard but he had no other choice. At least.Anna is there to comfort him.

Author's Response:

Yeah, it was. Michael has a good heart. Good thing he had his wife is right. Thanks honey xoxo

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Date: Jan 28, 2013 04:42 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

This is great!

Author's Response:

Thank you!! <333

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2013 04:25 am Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

 the last words he muttered??? I dont want Michael to be dead. I want a real happy ending to this story.... :(



Author's Response:

noooo he's not dead. I meant the last words he muttered about the situation. He is fine. More to come xoxo thx for the review

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 09:25 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

I'm still here, you should know how much a love this story and your work. Now is the best part when things get intense. I'm sad that this story is coming to an end soon. Is there gonna be lost chapters of the lost chapters?? 

 

Lol I fell inlove with these two!



Author's Response: Lol awww ty so much for ur constant support on my stories and hmm....maybe. anything is possible. Xoxo

Reviewer: HumanNature24 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2012 01:26 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

Nooooo i dont want this story to end. it's too good. And girl, I am still here. I have been reading this since day one. I even read it again twice lol. Please dont update soon lol



Author's Response: Lol eveything has an ending *sigh* even it kills me to end it but thank you so much for the support. I'm glad you have enjoyed this story so far. Xoxo

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2012 08:54 am Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

That's not true I love all of your stories your also one of my favorite writers and you know this man lol.

Author's Response:

Photobucket Aww thank you, honey!! It kills me to end this story but everything must come to an end. I wasn't sure if ppl were still liking it but I guess everyone is still here :)) and LOL at your Smokey moment XD

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2012 08:32 am Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

girl please, i could never lose interest in this or any of your stories. im just sad that its almost over, so this will be the first time i ask this........update slowly lol. i dont want it to end.



Author's Response:

LOL ok, then is my imagination. i thought ppl weren't reading anymore. :/ I'm glad ppl are still here. and LOL I'll try to update as slowly as possible XD

Reviewer: vinaya595 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2012 09:18 am Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

I jst dont want Michael to die. I am going to cry if he does.. (lol) I really wish to see the typical fairy tale, HAPPILY EVER-AFTER END.



Author's Response:

New chapters are up so you'll see MJ is recovering :) thx for the review

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2012 11:39 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

Girl it's not a happy thanksgiving after reading this.. Lol jk But damn I did not see this happening idk what to expect. I hope Mike makes it.. I've missed this story!

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL I'm sorry. But either way I figured I should wish it. It wouldn't be polite otherwise LOL. I hope you had a good one. Thanks for reading! xoxo

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2012 12:53 am Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

Wow. I never would have thought that Laura would do that.? Since Billy is dead and Laura is dead as well who's going to take care of her little boy? I hope Michael is okay too. BTW I understand why you didn't update. Hurricane Sandy hit Connecticut too. (where I'm from) I'm just glad your okay.



Author's Response:

Laura was very dedicated to Michael. She was never meant to be a bad person. She was just misguided by Billy. Ah, the little boy! If you have read the latest chapters then you know the answer to that question. Sean (Laura's son) is in good hands.

I'm glad to hear that you are ok. That hurricane Sandy was no joke. I guess people thought it was going to be. We all learned our lesson. xoxo

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2012 05:24 pm Title: The Captivating Stranger - The Lost Chapters

Girl this is fantastic please more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Susan. xoxo

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