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Reviewer: KassyJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2019 11:31 am Title: Chapter 11

Ohhhhhhhh shit. This went from 0 to 100 real quick! 



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is that good or bad?  

Reviewer: KassyJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2019 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1

New reader here. Can’t wait to begin this journey! 😁



Author's Response:

glad you come along for the ride.  i hope you enjoy the trip.  thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2019 01:38 am Title: Chapter 11

Hopefully Becca is telling Jack right now the man who just left is his father or maybe Jack figures out himself 

 

Still mad at Rick,  I wouldn't be able to forgive him but I'm not as forgiving as Michael 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

they will have to be careful how they tell him especially not knowing what they will end up doing.  You are orrect, Mike is very forgiving but he is a priest and preaches forgiveness.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: love_deeply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2019 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 10

😭😭😭😭😭 I was so happy to see new chapters were posted! ❤️ These last 3 chapters were a lot to take in. Hopefully, Becca will talk more about what's been going on with her, and I understand her feeling guilty. But her trying to take herself out wouldn't have filled in their son's or Michael's void after the fact. I see Mike saying he's not upset with her, but he will eventually have to vent out his thoughts and feelings. And then their son and how he feels... 🤦🏾‍♀️ Just send everyone to therapy please. Lol.

Mike will have to be patient with his son. I figure that he's gonna be holding onto a lot of resentment towards everyone who made it a point to keep the secret, and Becca isn't in the condition to deal with that since she was only doing what she felt best. Then, towards Mike since he probably feels like he was abandoned. But, once everything is out in the open, I imagine that he and Mike will have a bond that would'be been there from the beginning.

I think when the time comes for Becca to go back to the States, Mike will follow behind. Possibly leave Italy and pick up ministry when he gets there, which isn't a bad idea. He will have his family and his calling.

Hope to see you update soon. This as well as all of your other stories are beyond great! Keep that creative spark! ❤️❤️❤️ 

And Happy New Year! 😊🎉🎇



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to leave such a thought involking review.  i truely appreciate it.

Reviewer: Badgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2019 01:18 am Title: Chapter 10

Thank God And Michael  Becca  has heald. Michael for the love he  feels from the  beginning for Becca will decide not be  a priest anymore. 

I use  the translator because my language is not English 



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no problem about your english.  I am very thnakful you are reading and taking the time to leave a review.

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 08:42 am Title: Chapter 10

So glad Becca is okay.  Mike is very forgiving, but I believe that is because he has loved Becca for so long.  

I guess with guidance from the Bishop and Tony Mike will be able to make a decision one way or the other.  

Im sure that Love will win!

 

 



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love always wins otherwise it wouldnt be worth it :) thanks for your support!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2019 01:51 am Title: Chapter 10

Can't wait for the moment he meets Jack who hopefully will be happy to see him once he knows the truth about his mother (and the rest of the family) not telling his father about him 

 

 



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it will take time for Jack to absorb it all.  it will be a change for all when they get things straightened out.  thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2018 11:44 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh my god poor Becca, I really feel her. To imagine how heartbroken she was over the years. Hoping that he would come back only to realize that he wouldn’t. I can totally feel her pain. This is such a sad love story. I sincerely hope that Michael will have a change of heart and will find another profession and be with her. Heal her. Make her dream come true and be together with her, forever. Great great chapter. So emotional

Author's Response:

No worries I write happy endings (well except for one story) so things will get better.  you have to have drama to get to the good stuff.  thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2018 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 9

Mike has a son!  Becca tried to kill herself. Oh no!  So glad she made it.  Maybe now Mike and her can heal. And perhaps raise their son.  But will he leave the seminary?  

Will he be able to forgive Beccs an her family?

 

so much to look forward too!  



Author's Response:

the roller coaster continues.  but maybe it will level out now for awhile.  thanks for reading

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 9

Yes chapter 8 really shocked me but this one even more my heart breaks for both of them, hopefully Becca will be ok and Michael gets to meet his son, who hopefully won't think he abonned him, he didn't know he existed  

 

 

Still shaking my head at Rick for not telling Michael, you just don't keep something as big as a child away from your bestfriend who considers you like his brother calling or not he deserved to know

 

 

Hopefully if Becca is recovering and working on herself for the attempted suicide Michael will get to bond with his son so they could be a actual family one day (if he can forgive her and her family specially Rick for what they did) 

Reviewer: misskish Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 9

That is so heartbreaking caring this secret around for so long that she was drowning in it. Mike all the emotions that he is going through. I don't know how he's going to handle everything when everything settle.



Author's Response:

they will certainly have alot to discuss and decide where their future falls.  Thanks so much for reviewing

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 06:14 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh that’s so beautiful. All the while when this woman was in the booth confessing, I thought it was Becca. So, what’s next? I am very happy about this. They love eachother and I am sure that Michael will find a way to be with her. I truly hope so. Great chapter. Poor Becca. She stayed celibate, too over the years, I guess. How romantic

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  I've envisioned this chapter from day one.  Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: xxHollywoodTonight798xx Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 02:22 am Title: Chapter 8

Omg, what just happened?

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I know right?  bet you didnt see that coming.  Thanks so much for reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 12:44 am Title: Chapter 8

I did not see that one coming 

 

They're both still inlove with each other 

 

 

She should've told him sooner tho, she knows he loves her and he would be a wonderful father and if he knew he'd stay 

 

Dissapointed with Rick too if it's true he's his best friend he should have told him, think about the child for once who deserves to know it's father 

 

 

Hope he finds her before she leaves the country 



Author's Response:

Caught you off guard didnt I?  actually, this was the very first chapter I had in my head when I thought of the story so I couldnt wait to get to it.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2018 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 8

This chapter shocked me to the core..... THEY HAVE A SON TOGETHER?!?!? I’m upset that she got away. Only if if tiny didn’t stopped Michael, he could have gotten to her 😭😭😭😭😭 please let him find her and talk to her. 



Author's Response:

So glad the chapter conveyed what I was hoping.  the whole story revolves around this chapter.  thanks for reviewing

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