Reviews For Broken Vows
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Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 8

WOW did not see that one coming! That was very clever how she ended up announcing it to him. Hopefully he will find her and make things right!

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 7

Im really loving this story. You can feel Michael's physical struggles, poor guy! lol

As for Becca, I'm sure she's still missing him, but maybe the high of her new career is making up for it. Probably, when and if she hits a low, her feelings for him will come back to life. 

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 11:29 am Title: Chapter 6

That was beautiful, intense and heart-breaking all together. I felt the sting in Mike's letter. I'm very much looking forward to see how this develops. 

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 10:51 am Title: Chapter 5

The title of the story is getting clearer now. Mike wants to be a priest but will he break his vows for Becca? can't wait to find out! 

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 10:32 am Title: Chapter 4

I love how they are getting closer I'm really interested in finding out how Michael feels about her. 

Reviewer: Kareen1303 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2019 10:06 am Title: Chapter 3

I've been away from this site for a few months unfortunately, with the whole LN debacle I've been fighting for the man on youtube and twitter mostly. But I'm back and ready to plunge into new stories. 

I loved this chapter, the first part with the body discovering was quite funny and cute at the same time. I'm looking forwrad to seeing this friendship flourish into something more. I love some love story!

Reviewer: PaigesWorld17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2019 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ohhhhh. I since a lot of heartbreak and sexyiness in the future

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2019 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 19

Stupid paparazzi always putting their nose where it doesn’t belong!  Show photos of mike and Becca having sex it’s terrible. They don’t care who they hurt it’s all for money,

 

I think Mike is right beat them at their game give them their story with an interview. Unless they manipulate that!  

 

Enjoyed the updated can’t wait for the proposal 

Reviewer: love_deeply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2019 12:02 am Title: Chapter 19

Hey! Sorry about not commenting on the last chapter. I hadn't realized you updated, I've been beyond busy with school. But this week has been my spring break, so I feel like I can breathe...

Great chapters! I'm glad to see Mike coming to terms with his leaving the church. But it seems things have worked out with him meeting Father Joe. As for the tabloids, it's someone dangerously close to them. No way the gardener got that much detailed information in that short amount of time. Someone's been following her every move since she initially left in order for them to have pictures if Mike at mass...

Also, it's sad to see you saying you will be departing for awhile, but I understand. You are truly an amazing writer! And I mean that wholeheartedly! I wish there was a way for me to keep up with you in the mean time...

Waiting patiently for the next chapter! L.O.V.E. ♥️♥️♥️

Reviewer: alexandrita Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2019 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 19

I could feel that something bad was going to happen. ( i hate the media soo much!)  I hope nothing more spoils their romantic dinner, I really loved the chapter and look forward to the next one. Muchas gracias!    

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2019 01:13 am Title: Chapter 19

Good they won't let the press stop them from going to dinner

 

I'm sure Becca will say Yes when he proposes to her during dinner 

Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2019 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 19

 Love love love this chapter. Michael will be proposing soon! Can’t wait for that. I feel that their relationship and their son has been thrown into the limelight. Their privacy is finally broken. Hopefully they find out who told. 

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2019 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 18

That was a wonderful chapter. I am in heaven. Everything is just wonderful and it’s a joy to read how happy and serene they are. Please don’t stop writing. You are good at it. I enjoyed your stories so far and I am extremely thankful for everybody who is actually investing all this time blessing us with awesome stories to get lost in, to consume . I will forever greatly appreciate a good story at I know how much effort and time it takes to put it out there. So, in return for these efforts I am always commenting on each chapter of the good stories to show my gratitude and to give something back 😘 I am hoping that Becca is only seeing ghosts and that therefore nothing bad will happen to them. They deserve to be happy and to finally be together in bliss

Reviewer: mjsdirtydiana Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2019 10:45 am Title: Chapter 18

Yay!  They are going to the chapel and gonna get married!!!!  Maybe a double wedding with Rick?

 

So glad Jack was raised to be a fine young man, with manners.  He loves his dad and now his grandparents.

 

Great Update Tink. 

Yes it is sad that people don't comment!  There is a lot of thought and time put into each story and update!  Sorry that you won't continue to write. You do it so well!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2019 12:11 am Title: Chapter 18

It's sweet how they all are one big happy family, the only thing that could bother them would be if the media shows up 

 

 

I hear you, sadly people only read and don't review anynore these days 

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