[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2018 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: Return
I don't really know why she's back. Maybe for getting closer to someone?...
Author's Response: Hmm, not really. But we'll see! Much love xxxx
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2018 09:35 pm Title: Prologue
Your English is flawless. I like your writing style and I'm curious about the upcoming chapters. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: You're really too kind! I wouldn't call myself flawless though, haha :) You're very much welcome, and thank you for giving me your time! Much love xxxx
Date: Jan 01, 2018 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 3: Family Love
Can’t wait for them to get together again! Awesome job!
Author's Response: I'll make it very eventful, haha! Thank you very much though, much love xxxx
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2018 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: Hell Days
Another great chapter! Keep it up! Awesome portrayal of LMP!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! You're too kind, really! And I kinda go with my instincts and knowledge about Lisa, like, "What would Lisa do?" And that's where it comes from! Much love xxxx
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2018 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: Return
Can’t wait for you to add more! So glad we are getting more Jacksley writers.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2018 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: Return
Can’t wait for you to add more! So glad we are getting more Jacksley writers.
Author's Response: I'll be here as frequently as possible, you won't be getting rid of me anytime soon, haha! And yes, in my opinion there should be more! I love them both and respect them both equally, and seeing Jacksley writers inspired me to do my own thing! Much love xxxx
Date: Dec 30, 2017 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 3: Family Love
Love lisa and priscillas dialogue her and her own inner monolgud about her mom and that relationship would be interesting to see like why Priscilla as you wrote tried to meddle in her and MJ’s relationship.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Of course I will, that will be included in a later chapter! Much love xxxx
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2017 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 3: Family Love
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Date: Dec 28, 2017 11:16 am Title: Prologue
Looking forward to when Lisa and Michael meet up. Nice chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Date: Dec 28, 2017 11:16 am Title: Prologue
Looking forward to when Lisa and Michael meet up. Nice chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: It's gonna be a bumpy ride, so hold on tight! And thank you very much, hope I don't disappoint! Much love xxxx
Date: Dec 28, 2017 08:32 am Title: Chapter 3: Family Love
I am liking this so far. Looking forward to reading more
Author's Response: I'm elated that you are! Thanks a bunch, hope I keep up to your expectations! Much love xxxx
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2017 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: Hell Days
Beautiful, please continue. I’m over how sensitive you are handling the matter. Great honest work so far. And thank you for portraying Lisa nicely. She doesn’t deserve the hatred.,
Author's Response: You're really too sweet, thank you so very much! And yes, I like her a lot, and I believe she never deserves all the hatred, so I'm trying to convince others of that :) much love xxx
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 2: Hell Days
Wow this was really emotional and great job at capturing this internal monologue. Btw thetes nothing wrong with like well there is but theres no shame in being suicidal and having those thoughts doesnt mean a persons a coward or a bad person hell its understandable af for like anyone in that situation so yea. Great chapter something to keep in mind i dont see him being that ableist about like not self harming because it sets a bad example.. i think it sets a better example to admit shit like that and that u struggled thru it and found someway to come out of it or continue to deal with it. Just a suggestion. Cant wait for the update:)
Author's Response: Why thank you very much! I appreciate it a hell lot, you're too kind. And yes, it's quite understandable, but what I meant is that he doesn't want to be promoting the idea; like he wants everyone to understand that suffering doesn't always have to go down a dark road if you have enough faith in yourself. He doesn't want to promote the idea of intentionally harming one's self to youngsters. I'll update sometime tonight! Much love xxxx
Date: Dec 26, 2017 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1: Return
Lovve this chapter. And shed be Ms. Presley btw. Loved how u wrote lisa here:) and how everything fit into a suitcase type symbolism.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! And yes, she used to keep her surname whenever she got married, so she used to go with it, but she's divorced Lockwood, she's told Sammy to call her by her first name instead to avoid confusion. And thank you, I'm glad you caught the suitcase part!
Date: Dec 26, 2017 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1: Return
Promising. Please update :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I just updated. Hope I don't let you down! xxxx