[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2016 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 5: Make Up Time!
aw poor michael i can just picture what he was going though! what he was going though was just part of puberty now if Joseph could only see that though his thick skull he was a teenager himself once geez! he needs to pipe down and let the boy grow he will grow into his body over time! my goodness no wonder mj turned to plastic surgery and what not to feel he wasn't beautiful in his own skin grr. my rant is over for that part of the chapter lol.
aw those girls reminds me when young girls like getting into their sister or mother's make up lol. I hope it's nothing to bad for her at home. Great chapter hun <3
Author's Response:
Haha thank you for the review. And thank you for the compliment on the chapter. It means a lot. And I agree 100% with what you said about Joseph. Although, I do think some of us Moonwalkers don't give him enough credit to how much work he actually put into making the boys as big as they got to be. Even though he was a nasty selfish person, Joseph Jackson was one hell of a genius - maybe that's where Michael got his ways of being a genius from - he got his charming personality from his mother. Hehe okay I'm done. Thank you for reviewing, hun <3 xoxo
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2016 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Perfect Family
I am getting to love this story l would like hear Michael though keep it coming
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking your time to review my story :) It means a lot to me. I hope you enjoy what I have in stall for you all. <3 xoxo
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2016 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: What did he say?
Decided to come out of my silent cave and give my comment! Lol. I'm liking your story so far! As usual Joseph is the pain in the ass as always smh but luckily they escaped his wrath but for how long? Besides that Ari might be developing a crush along the lines. Also I know how you feel on the comments as well we all have em silent readers.
#Authorsunite 😜
Author's Response:
Oh my, thank you so much for that review. These types of moments just remind me why I write lol. I very much appreciate your comment and it meant so much to me. I hope you enjoy what I have in stall for you all <3 Hope you stay with me along the journey of this story :) Love yoou <3 xoxo
Date: Aug 05, 2016 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Perfect Family
Well aren't you the modest one Ari lucky for sure lol not to brag on yourself but anyway great surprise her dad gave her a trip to the studio to see her hero we should all be so lucky.Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you for taking the time to review <3 One thing very few readers tend to do hehe xoxoxo
Date: Aug 05, 2016 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 3: What did he say?
Wow I wasn't even in the room and Joseph scared the hell outta me lol,but how sweet is Ari seems like she got a lil crush on Mikey haha. 'Michael is my hero'... loved this chapter looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Aw thank you so much <3 That means a lot to me. I hope you enjoy what I have in stall for you. My main aim for this story is to build character and to create INTENSE emotion on the reader, so this one is going to have slow updates. But I still hope you stay with me the whole journey to the end, whenever that may be hehe <3 Thank you for reading xxx
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2016 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Sleepover
Omg Joseph is something else that man make so piss lol but l love the story keep it coming girlðŸ‘ðŸ‘😊ðŸ¸
Author's Response:
I will keep it coming :) An update every two days for the next 2 weeks actually lol â¤â¤ Thank you for the review <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2015 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1: The Jackson Concert
please continue
Author's Response:
I will :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2015 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Jackson Concert
Love love love it!!!! Can't wait for more girl!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm trying so hard!!