Reviewer: Paige Loren Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2015 08:30 pm Title: WHO'S UP FOR A CONTEST?

My guesses are

Frank Cascio (because I enjoy saying his last name hahaha)

Tatum O'Neal

Diana Ross

Paul McCartney

Author's Response:

HMMMMM...interesting guesses...thanks for playing! :)

Reviewer: super3o Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2015 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 21: Estranged but Never Forgotten

Awwwee so cute😆😆😆

Okayyy I'm not finna guess cuz I probably be wrong so I'll wait lolll 😂😂

Idk y Diana jealous of Madonna, Madonna ain't all dat lolllll jkjk she ight lol

Anyway dat mysterious person is wooooo idk who it is and imma be out of it imma wait lolll with the popcorn

Author's Response:

I'm having a contest so you can guess the mystery person in the next section!

I agree, she really isn't all that but when you're with someone as good looking as Michael Jackson, it's easy to feel insecure.

Good luck guessing who they are!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2015 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1: Business Consolidation

i usually will review and rate when i read any story and you are very welcome 

Author's Response:

You have no idea how much I appreciate you. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: super3o Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2015 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 20: Who Is It?

Awwwwwwwwww and OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH who is it ??? That's my song "is it my brother, who is it" 

Prince is so cuteeeeeee😍😍😍

Who is it ????

Is it Madonna or lisa or somebody else????

This touch me again Awww I'm rly cheesing 😄😄😄 😁😁 

Can't wait with my popcorn

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Nope, you're wrong about the mystery person. I LOVE THAT SONG TOO! Yes, Prince is adorable.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2015 04:29 am Title: Chapter 20: Who Is It?

Lol jasmine is ao funny 

Oh dear i hope that's not Lisa 

Maybe it's from Marie?  

Can't wait to see what happens next 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! :) You'll find out soon.

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2015 04:16 am Title: Chapter 19: Reliving the Past with Another Secret

this was an adorable read..the foodfight was funny and Pribce is soo cute! Finally things are back to normal between Mike and Ana!

Author's Response:

Yes, the calm after the storm has slowly started to arrive...but there may be one or two more....

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2015 05:08 am Title: Chapter 18: Dreams, Departures & Delights

The bonding between Michael and Prince was just what I anticipated..Michael would have never been the type to blame an innocent child for the mother's mistake in a situation like this..something we people sometimes forget..

lol at how Michael was when Prince imitated the crotch grab he should have mentioned beforehand to younger fans that some of his moves are for adults alone so they know copying it while as a minor is out of the question..

and oooo Joseph..he's on my last nerve..someone needs to tell him don't burn bridges..for the record I read where Michael really thought karma was rubbish..

I get that Marie feels she needs to clear her head but how hateful she was being was immature..there's a proper way to behave in the face of betrayal..if Diana had acted the same way if in the situation she would not be able to handle it, either..

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Yes, their bond was super cute. I wanted to keep it simple and not dramatic since there's always been a roller coaster of emotions going on.

A lot of readers enjoyed the dance scene. I thought it was cute to add that in. Glad it worked for the best!:)

Joseph will always be himself. I had no idea Michael felt that way, OOPS. Oh well, I guess it adds a little but of flair on my side. ;)

Yes, Marie was being hateful for sure. Jasmine put her in her place and she really does need time for herself. Who knows? She might be back.

Stay tuned for more! :D