[Report This]Date: Mar 04, 2015 06:07 am Title: Chapter 26: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part I
beautiful wedding chapter you had me crying when marie came back into the picture im really looking forward to another awesome chapter keep up the amazing writing
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! I'm so appreciative that you took the time to read and review it.
I've been waiting for someone to rate this chapter for 3 days now. It really means the world to me.
Aww, I'm glad you liked when Marie came back. I think a lot of my readers were afraid that she wouldn't return. I'm glad I surprised you. :)
There are only two chapters left! I'll be posting one more sometime today hopefully.
Thank you again for reading! :)
Date: Mar 03, 2015 05:57 am Title: Chapter 26: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part I
Lol I loved the photo sessions, so happy Marie came back, how sweet of her parents to give Ana away
Love the outfits (both Michael and Diana)
Can't wait till they see each other
Aww just two chapters, gonna miss them
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Mar 03, 2015 01:20 am Title: Chapter 26: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part I
Awwwwwwwww this is soooo cute mannnn **cheesing** marie is back yasssss!!!! And Emmanuel is almost thereee mj and Diana outfits were cuteee!! 😹😹😹👏👏👏 can't wait until the wedding!!! I almost cried lol😂😂
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) There's lots more to come!
Date: Mar 02, 2015 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 26: Born as Two, United as One: The Wedding Part I
well, it's refreshing for Jermaine to not be a villain in an MJ fic for a change and all the joking around I loved.
It's a relief Marie was there..I was kind of worried when reading her parents couldn't find her and the wedding happening after all is a pleasant surprise..
Author's Response:
Yes! I noticed that every fic made him into a monster. I wanted to be the one to make him somewhat normal, haha.
Everyone wanted Marie to come back. I didn't know how to write her back in without sounding predictable so I made it seem like no one knew where she was and then surprised everyone with bringing her in.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: Feb 26, 2015 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 25: Dancers, Dreams & Decorations
Girllll I got it !!! And I'm late srry😩 I got my dress and everything lollll😹😹😹😹 I shed one tear lol I'm cheesing so hard it hurts 😂😂😂 I can't wait i gotta bring tissues cuz I cried at the last wedding I went to cuz my mom was walking down and it wasn't her wedding 😂😂😂😂
Author's Response:
I'm glad you got your prize. There is still one more left! Be sure to read about it! ;)
Hope you enjoy the next chapter! :D
Date: Feb 26, 2015 02:48 am Title: Chapter 25: Dancers, Dreams & Decorations
I can't wait for the wedding
Loved the chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
I love hearing from you.
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2015 12:01 am Title: Chapter 25: Dancers, Dreams & Decorations
great chapter im looking forward to the wedding chapter keep up the great work on your writing
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you very much! :)
I guarantee you won't be disappointed with the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2015 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 24: Sex, Sausages & Strippers
lol loved the ending of this chapter i am looking forward to the next great chapter i truly love this series of stories keep up the amazing writing
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you SO much! That really means a lot to me.
I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
I feel like I've lost a ton of readers but I'm still grateful for the few I have.
I'll be updating again tomorrow, hopefully! :)
Date: Feb 24, 2015 07:44 am Title: Chapter 24: Sex, Sausages & Strippers
wasn't really laughing that much only slightly at the part with the sausage..reminded me of when I couldn't stop laughing whilst writing about the Arviso boys showing bad table manners and Davelin being grossed out..
btw Michael did drink occasionally in real life and get a load of this got wasted on a few occasions..rare though..shocking I know...still getting used to the idea of that..
Author's Response:
I'm sorry it didn't make you laugh. :(
I know he did drink at times but during the late 90's he wasn't really into it that much, or so I've read.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D
Date: Feb 24, 2015 03:42 am Title: Chapter 24: Sex, Sausages & Strippers
Lollllll I'm weakkkkk and especially the sausage part😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Author's Response:
I'm glad I made you laugh.
PS - I'll be sending you a prize in your email soon! :)
Date: Feb 24, 2015 02:37 am Title: Chapter 24: Sex, Sausages & Strippers
Lmao this was too funny
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2015 03:36 am Title: Chapter 23: A Glance into the Future
i look forward to seeing who michael will work with on his big project keep up the great writing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Date: Feb 23, 2015 02:14 am Title: Chapter 23: A Glance into the Future
Lol I love Michael being secretive lol
But really who is it?.lol
Love Mrs J
Hopefully everything will be fine between Michael and Diana and she doesn't have second thoughts about the wedding after the game
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Oh yes he's very sneaky, hehe.
You'll find out who it is very soon! :)
Katherine is very lovely.
You'll find out soon if things will be ok or not! ;)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I love hearing from you! :)
Date: Feb 22, 2015 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 23: A Glance into the Future
I like Katherine being funny!
As for what will happen, I dunno..another huge argument?
Author's Response:
Yes, she is hilarious.
You always assume the worst, HAHA!
Thanks for reading and reveiwing! :D
Date: Feb 22, 2015 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 23: A Glance into the Future
Awwwwwww😂😂😍😍😍😍 cuteeee!!! Lolll I wonder who is working with hold up I got a guess but I'm not going to say😂😂 lol sooo cute got me **cheesing** and thx for deleting em😌c4;
Author's Response:
No problem. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)