Date: Apr 05, 2015 10:12 pm Title: Watching Eyes And Baby Cries
Poor Baylee. It's clear the subject of her mother is tough for her and Michael. Really curious in finding out what happened to her.
Marley and Michael? Still neutral on the subject. Again, looking forward to more, and more I will read.
Author's Response:
The subject of Ria is very delicate where both Michael and Baylee are concerned for sure.
As you read on everyone has seemed to take a liking to either Michael and Ria or Michael and Marley. Some have switched lol. Looking forward to see where you end up on that front. <333
Date: Apr 05, 2015 09:45 pm Title: Heart Of Gold
Kamaria and Michael are so sweet. Kenny's cool too. Lol
I love how you switch from time periods and your writing and grammar are on point. Something that admire in writers.
Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I appreciate the sentiment. As you read you will get to "know"everyone so speak. It's an interesting ride for sure! <333
Date: Apr 05, 2015 09:21 pm Title: Chocolate Pudding And Paint It's All Creative
I should have started reading this story sooner. Baylee sounds like a joy btw.
Author's Response:
Baylee is the cutest. Very charismatic you will come to see. <333
Date: Apr 05, 2015 09:20 pm Title: The Interview...
I'm liking this. I'm liking this a lot.
Author's Response:
Hey there!! Welcome to the story. Thank you for giving it a chance!! <333 :)))
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2015 12:25 pm Title: Divinity In Motion
Kenny/officer dude really needs to go somewhere. Go to China! Go to Africa! Go to Brazil for all I care! Just go! I am, however, intrigued to see what he has in store for Michael.
Their lovemaking was exactly that, lovemaking! Whew! Girl when I tell you that scene with the music made ME feel things, you did a damn good job lol
i can't blame Mar for asking michael when they are gonna tell Bee about them. That little girls wants this more than they do I'm thinking lmao but I can't blame michael for wanting to wait either. It's still new, fresh. And tbh, dangerous so I can understand him not wanting to bring his baby into it just yet.
Author's Response:
Lmao Brie!! He's looking into your window!!! You'll see.
Wheren't the soft and yummy? I love how romantic Michael is and how commanding he is at the same time. A perfect mix of both to crest pure sexy!!! Swoons. Yes you're right with the things happening in their lives has to be with Baylee's wellbeing in mind. <333
Date: Apr 04, 2015 10:06 pm Title: Divinity In Motion
Can't say Kenny has lost it bc it obvious he hasn't been entirely there all along 😟 it's kinda disturbing yet intriguing lol.
bUT THAT MIKE & MARLEY DOE
She melted in his arms like an overly stimulated rag doll. SAME.
haha 😩 .. I am so glad mike has truly let himself give all of him to someone even though he's kinda holding off on telling Baylee. It's like he's putting all his cards out yet still protecting his hand. I don't blame him though. Just step by step, in due time. Unless Baylee starts to notice the change in them 😂
So I'm guessing things are brewing up with ken, Mike & ria? I'm curious what Kenny is up to. Mm, we'll just have to see! thank you for updating!! I can't wait for inked as well!! <3 😄
Author's Response:
Yeah Kenny's been gone. Yall will see why in the future.
Yeah he's giving his all but he's still carefull with Baylee. He doesn't want to get her hopes up being that she really wants Marley to be her new mommy.
My up Kenny pokes his head back in the picture. Now it starts! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2015 09:22 pm Title: Divinity In Motion
These two... <3
You're sex scenes are always so vividly on point!! It just got like 50 degrees warmer in here after reading that.
And aww at Michael being nervous... 'haven't had sex in a while'
The beginning of this chapter has me worried, like what exactly is this dude planning?! Michael and Marley are like so so so perfect together right now, it has me worried that something is going to happen to screw it all up...
Continue soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you BB. I'm glad my words could grab you by the collar so to speak lmao.
Yeah it was cute him being a nervous at first but Lawd if he didn't take charge!!!
Homeboy has a lot planned. He wants to make his presence know for sure. <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2015 09:09 pm Title: Divinity In Motion
I think Baylee could start noticing things. I mean, she was always trying to get them together, so when she no longer has to struggle, she might start asking questions.
Michael had a very romantic set-up planned! How long have they been dating, now? I'm curious if she's going to want to back up a bit simply b/c of Kenny's insertions and the fact that it brings Michael back to Ria so much. Will she get her own apartment so that they can date like normal couples, first?
Looking forward to your next Michael and Marley segment lol. I like Ria, but girl, you know I have my favorite.
Author's Response:
I think she will start noticing to. You know how kids have this kind of sixth sense? She may have already noticed how the are with each other. She's a smart little one.
Michael is old school romantic. It's endearing. They've been dating a little over a month or so. Not so long. Kenny coming in is definitely going to throw cogs in the wheels. Ria is a sore subject that Michael forces down but unfortunately it can't be like that anymore. It will start to show a little. There may be something that does cause her leave but with the danger of Kenny out there it won't be safe for her on her own. Concessions Neil have to be made. You'll see!!! Yeah quite a few of you guys have your favs!! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2015 08:49 pm Title: Divinity In Motion
Reading the beginning of the chapter like
Mothafucka try it if you want to. Let me fight him! I'm serious. Put me in, Coach! Let me do this for the team. I can make you proud!
This picnic, Michael. Let me just
It's not corny at all. It's sweet and she deserves it! There's nothing wrong with that old school romance at all. I think the draws will get wetter from that. I'm just sayin!! Pick 90 picnics if she likes em and they make her happy and he's all about doing that. So you go, Mike!
You know Cruisin is one of my all time favorite songs ever in life and in the world and the galaxy and the milkway of such that is life it is perfect and no one can take that away from me
Michael's singing it and I'm just omg
I love him so much for that. It's the jam and I'm gonna go wake him up and make him sing it to me right now
He put a hurt on her and he talkin about his back. Boy, please. She finna be thinking about this night til she dies. And even then in the after life, she gon brag to all her friends in the grave yard.
But they're all officially official and I'm so happy but also worried because I know how life works too, Michael and I know that anything is possible and I just don't know
I'm happy and worried but also happy
I can't wait for the next update!
You are sincerely bae and you know that!
Author's Response:
Michael and his romantic ass. He can't help it if he wanted to, he can't help it nooooooo...! Lmao. Crispin is such a bomb song. It worked so perfectly with the scene. I listened to it the entire time tbh.
As for Kenny. Is crazy is boundless man!!! Abyss level! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2015 07:49 pm Title: Divinity In Motion
I'm not to sure if it's the right time to tell Baylee about them because all though she may like Marley that doesn't mean she accept her having a relationship with her dad exspecially if she's still not over her mom's passing. She's so young I think that it might confuse or bother her a bit.
Author's Response:
Baylee is very young and since Marley's been with her since she was an infant she often confuses her role. She's always asking if Marley is her mommy and it makes her sad that she isn't and her real mommy is in heaven. I agree Michael and Marley are pretty new in their relationship so we'll see what they decide. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2015 08:36 am Title: Nervous Wreck
Oh wow. I didn't see that coming. But I do however think it's a good thing for Michael and Ria's relationship.
Author's Response:
It most definitely gives Michael and Ria some reprieve from what Rhoda would have become in their lives. I know Rhoda wouldn't have made it easy for Ria at all. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2015 07:09 am Title: Nervous Wreck
I'm just sitting here shaking my head. I actually feel bad for Rhoda but it seems like she finally got it. Michael is not hers and was never really hers to begin with it.
It's sad that she lost the baby in that car wreck though... just wow. You wrote that portion of the chapter WONDERFULLY (of course, the whole chapter was awesome, but that part really pulled at my hearstrings).
I genuinely felt her hurt and pain in that hospital though. She is right, Michael was indeed off the hook because she lost that baby... but we all know Michael really didn't want things to end like that.
Rhoda's dishonesty and all, he really wanted to be a dad.
Man, this was a good chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad I could convey just how Rhoda felt. She did some stupid conniving things in the name of love and now she's lost it all. It's devastating. Michael is off the hook but he didn't want it to be on such terms at all. Losing the baby was a harsh blow. Thank you so much for reading as always Tree Bb!!<333
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2015 06:19 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
Rhoda Rhoda Rhoda!!!! :( Damnit she upsets me but Im glad shes okay. That sucks she lost her baby but then.... UGH The confusion you put me through, woman! lol goodness.
I'm glad she has, for now, accepted that her and Michael are over but I have a feeling this isnt the last of her. She was too bitter to him at the hospital for it to be the last. I wouldnt be surprised if she hooked up with Kenny to bring turmoil and tragic to Michael and Kamaria. Did I already mention that?? SMH
I'm proud of Kam for staying by Michaels side though. She has pretty much always been an adult about his situation. She respected him.
Im mad I was late on this update though! Glad I didnt miss it!
Author's Response:
Lol sorry BB. I think I had everyone on the fence with this one. Jam is sticking by her man for real. I'm mum on everything else. It will all unfold. ;) <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2015 09:57 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
I completely forgot to leave a review this morning!! 😩 anyways, I don't know how to feel either way. @fenderjazzkid has it pretty much covered. I actually thought she would lie her way into "getting mike back" but I guess she really was pregnant.. man. that still sucks how it had to happen this way but I can't say it really bothers me too much. You have created a cold heart within me, my love lmao. long term wise, I think it's better off this way.
Rhoda one more time? 😕
i love mike playig around with Ria & his crude little jokes. That boy is something else lol 😂 and I can't keep my eyes open any longer but it was really good!!
Author's Response:
Ohhhhh noooo. Not a cold heart BB!!! 😩😩😩 I understand though got to keep that guard up cause you never know what I will throw at you. Lol. Yes Rhoda one more time. Michael is a little sly ass. <333
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2015 08:07 pm Title: Nervous Wreck
Nervous Wreck LOL
Oh my my my... I don't know whether to be happy or devastated. I mean Michael just lost his baby but damn thank you JESUS he lost the chains Rhoda tried to tie him down in. Girl how many times do you need Michael to tell you he DON'T love you!?!!
Ria's a lady because if that let Rhoda tell ME to pack a bag... Uh-uh I'd be snatchin' her up by her hair pregnant or not!
I love the Michael and Ria pairing. They are so adorable together.
More soon!
Author's Response:
Lol. Everybody is torn between relief and grief. The baby is gone but so is Rhoda now. Bitter sweet. Ria is standing by her man for sure. <333