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Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2013 07:49 am Title: Chapter 12 -The Temptation

More more more!! Love this!!

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2013 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 10:A fight she can't win

can't wait for the next part!



Author's Response:

already up and depending on how early I fininish the next chapter how earily it will be posted

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2013 09:31 am Title: Prologue: The Next Move

You know your a good writer and have a good story. When you have several chapters without sex in any if them. Trust me you had me hooked from the conception. Love this story.



Author's Response:

THanks For saying such sweet things I need to here them this isn't actually my first go round on this site I left my other aacount alone after being Critsized and humliated by a set of readers on someone else story so in order for me to keep writing and feel comfortable I created this second account because they were saying that i couldn't write and said so many NASTY things about me, and by you know saying that and not knowing my first Identity let me know how Wrong the others had been for that (Can.You. Feel....)me (*winks*) 

I will proably return to my old account after i fish this story but sense i posted this here on this one i wanted see it through..... thanks I need to hear that can't ro see you later and hear more of what you think by

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2013 04:00 am Title: Chapter 9:What Happens in Vegas

I Don't Know Can She Resist Him???? =) But On Another Note, He People Watched????? Uhmmm Wouldn't He Be Bored????



Author's Response:

Who COuld He's Michael Freaking Jackson, Born to seduce a woman, yeas he People wathced

your looing at it from the wrong persective we as normal everyday people would find that boring but think about a man that CRAVED to just blend into the crowd and not be noticed to sit on a bench and have a conversation and find out something REAL from a person without them being inammered by who he was and only wanting to talk about him

Michael has said many time that he wished he could just be one of the crowd

and think about it at that time all he wanted to do was blend in where it would have been Dangerous for HIM to stick out a man that has just been accused of child moslestation sitting in a amusement park around CHILDREN you know he was risking ALOT doing that if anyone could have recognized him 

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Date: Dec 09, 2013 12:36 am Title: Chapter 7:Drawn 2 You

Iiight, I Think I'm Straight Now,That I Reread Both Chapters. But LowKey Did The Thing With Radio Station Really Happen??????



Author's Response:

the saint louis radio station yes it did they refused to play his Music and the NAACP got all up in there asses for it that is why I felt i need to add it it was a little know fact, all the fact that you see me post well most of them come out of the book "Michael Jackson: The Visual Documenty"

the Next chapter is up it's short but important tomarrow a new chapter I know i said sexual content but I'm building the base line for it when it starts it will be ON FIRE but I love how everone is drawn to this story without it

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2013 05:56 am Title: Chapter 7:Drawn 2 You

I love ths story. And I agree with you people shouldn't be writing romance fics about him and a minor. I read one chapt of him being 24 and the girl was 13 and I was done and literally grossed out. I am thinking that whoever is writing stories like this is either a minor themselves and don't know that its wrong, or someone has a sick mind. There is nothing entertaining about reading a story of a grown man having a romantic relationship with a child. Its disgusting and disrespectful to Michael. And I would think that people on here, knowing his past with being lied on about being a child molester. Would at least have the decency to not even write a story like that. And even if it wasn't in his past. Writing a story like that is still sick. I think stories like that should be banned from this site or taken down. 



Author's Response:

AMEN sister

I think anyone that writes sick stories like that Must have been UNDER A DAMN ROCK for 1993 2003-05 

It is discusting and disrespectfrul to Michael and people have had the gaul to say "What's wrong with it" I and i would look at my computer like you Must be OUT YOUR DAMN MIND if you DON'T know what's wrong with it, go read a book on what happen to this man and then ask me WHAT IS WRONG WITH IT watch a documentarty on youtube on on what he went through and ask me again "WHAT IS WRONG WITH IT" don't wwrite about something you don't understand

Michael having a friend ship with kids is NOTHING WRONG with that that IS what he was about want to be his friend at 13 sure write that I've writien him being friends with kids MANY times but romnce that where i draw the line and there is NO defending a reason WHY you should be doing that and the admints need to make that a NO TOLLRANCE policy I mean ccome on look how far we have come for his FANS to wrote shit like this if Michael knew about this he would be discusted and feel disrespected  

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2013 02:59 am Title: Chapter 9:"We Have Offically Arrived..."

excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for mooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!



Author's Response:

Thank you... can wait to see more of you

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2013 01:11 am Title: Chapter 9:"We Have Offically Arrived..."

So His PR Team Just Been Making Up They Own Stories. && What You Mean Things Are Going To Cahnge From This Point On??? (Yesss Michael Finally Got Me Back In InTunee) I Be Soooo Conflicted. lmao I Swear I'm Wishy Washy. Kmsl =)



Author's Response:

Okay Michaels PR team hason't been making up there own stories they Just haven't been going at it as agresivly as was need, Michael is coming off at his team like he doesn't trust them he's angry and frustrated, Not that they don't know what they are doing but they aren't doing what is need to fight FOR him like Janice is think about it if they were WHY would janice be need you have to be able to create a flaw for a character to come into fix... so if his team is screwing up then he's not getting all HE needs from them. Janice comes in with her own team to save the day and learn more about her self

things are going to Change because depending on what Chapter your reading Michaels Life is changing due to the blow back of the allegation His life can't be as it was before he was accused. if your looking at it from the groups point of view i meantioned, They aren't just some New york people looking for a break in there Jobs they working for a SERIOUS business man that is iving them a shot to prove themselves this transition for janices team makes there life a change from what it was before they started working for him a drastic change

did you read BOTH chapters let me know what you think after the second and newest one

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2013 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 6:Game Time... anyone here like games

THIS STORY IS FREAKING AMAZING!! I mean I am hooked and every chapter is extremely captivating!!! I'm in awe I can't wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2013 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 6:Game Time... anyone here like games

I've Got No Words. I'm Straight Speechless.

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Date: Dec 05, 2013 01:47 am Title: Chapter 5:Counting down

Man The More The Story Starts To Fall Into Place I'm Starting To Feel Bad For The Boy. Cuz Michael Seemed To Have Wanted It That Way. He Was Just A Little To Cocky(Sleeping With Somebody Else's Wife In They House). && As For Latoya I Feel Soo Bad For Her, She Was With The Wrong Person. Buuuuuutttt Then Again I Don't I Always Felt Like She Thought That The Fact That She Was Getting Beat By Her Husband Was The "World's Best Kept Secret"&& In Reality EveryBody Knew. I Was Just Starting To Love Her && Her Knew Show To Though. && How Michael Gone Get Mad At Shawty For Speaking Her Mind Its A Free Country She Shoulda Walked Out On Him. && Its Not Like She Was The One That Betrayed The Little Boy's Trust He Did That. Who Sleeps With Somebody's (That Supposed To Be Yo Friend)Mama. Michael Just Turned Me Off Low Key.

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 12:20 am Title: Prologue: The Next Move

One Quick Question Who Made Yo Banner?????



Author's Response:

simple ansewer ME

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 12:19 am Title: Chapter 4:All for 1 and 1 for all

Alright I Saw Your Response To My Last Comment && Imma Get That In Minute. But First I Gotta Say That I Feel Soo Bad For Michael He Going Thru The Most. && Actually With All This Going I Found New Different Type Of Respect Him Than Before. Buuuuuuttttt Back To Yo Comment That Did Clear Things Up, Thanks. (LowKey What Family Guy Reference(I Don't Watch That Show)Kmsl)



Author's Response:

yeah i can see why you feel bad for him i wanted to go from a different point of view on this story no one has ever dug in deep to Michaels termoil at that time and not from this perspective it does change your view on him doesn't it 

Glad My comment cleared things up for you

OH Lowkey was the first to make th'Like a Boss' reference

the  Jiggy thing I thought you got that from fromaily guy because a character on there always says either that or Giggity... <y bad I got my referencences confused 

actually isn't jiggy from will Smith way back corect me if I'm wrong but yeah... don't mind me and refrence confustion My skull feels like it's splitting at my jaw line now a days because i have problems with my wisdom teeth.

Thanks for reading hopfully the next update will be up today

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2013 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 3:Uncovering The Truth

I'm Glad That Janice Got Michael To Say Yes, But I Thought That It Wasn't A Very Good Idea For Him To Bring His Mother Around Her Without An NDA Being Signed. But Aye I Liked The Way Michael Told His Story,I Always Felt Like That's What Really Happened Between Him && June . (Jiqqyy) AnyWays This Was An Incredible Chapter.



Author's Response:

Yup it was alway the plan for him to say yes but I need to make michael feel like he wasn't as sweet and kind as everyone was use too so it made Michael look like he wasn't going to agree, I saw a documentery on michael once and in it they said Michael would ALWAYS observe and test people that he was around to see if he could trust them so it was imprtant for me to use that esment in here

this was a point in time where he would be HIGH on guard with everyone around him I need him to feel a bit cold at this point in time and soon he would warm up to her later.

Now the Point of his mother being around her, His mother and liz were there for HIM, this was not to long after the accusation was made Public so it was a bit crazy at the time for him it will be explined what going on him in that respect in the next chapter i'm working on now. Michael Had his Mother and Liz there too test her, see how uncomfortable there precense might Make her if she was infact Bull shitting him and Katherine and Liz were there to Read her, women can read people better then a man might and woman can read other woman even better That what he had them there for. 

and in reverence to the non discloser she stated ON TAPE that she would infact sign one and they agreed on tape, with witness that they would not disclose anything that happen sense meeting michael, Legally that wasa VERBAL agrement with witness and tape to back it up that would hold up in ANY court of law she covered herself and Him. 

Yes one to his story, Now the one place i can say you get confirmation that michael was sleeping with june is if you read the book by Aphrodite Jones: the Michael jackson conspiricy(s) the part where tom Mesueru was questioning June chandlar and they made a point of bring up her braclet that was the Ruby braclet michael bought her when time questioned her he got her hemed up when he said "Michael was coming to your house" she said "yes" he was rapid firing questions at her and he last said "he was coming to see you" and she cgot discomboulated and said "YES"

so THAT is what broke that case funny enough the one thing shedin thought he was doing to MAKE his case Broke it wide open, because one everone found out he was screwing with June it was all over and a Friend of mine who Talks to William wgner a coirt reprtor on line and on his twitter found out ffrom him that story that Michael told of what happen in this story, WAS THE TRUE STORY that came from Williiam Wagner himself who was overseeing BOTH Mj cases 

LOL i love how you use the Family guy Reference LOL

hope that cleared up everything for you

 

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Date: Dec 02, 2013 02:32 am Title: Chapter 2:Mission Impossible - Pt 2 Do We Have a Deal

Omqqeee She Did Kill That Like A Boss. I Just Hope He Accept Her Proposal.



Author's Response:

Of course she did  (Tamar Braxton reference LOVE IT) Where the hell did the saying 'LIKE A BOSS' come from i just noticed everyone using it and it stuck but who said it first... and I'm sure by Now you already know the answer to that purposal.

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