Date: Jan 04, 2014 11:53 am Title: Chapter 24: Part II (On The Run)
ughhhhhh jo'nee shouldnt have told the others she saw janice having sex.
as far as I'm concerned they are all pissing me off especially Sofia. I hope janice calls her out on her bs. I know they are looking out for Janice but she is a grown woman. She has to learn from her own mistakes. Mike and Janice are dumb as hell though. Duh some1 is going to catch you there are too many people around. Manface is a liar knowing damn well Michael didn't ask her to marry him in front of the fireplace. #lieshoestell ugh! Lol at Michael asking if the baby is his. I personally think danny is the real father.Author's Response:
No she shouldn't have... it wasn't her business but it was bound to come out becuse if Jon'Nee didn't witness it Sofia would have wen down there looking for them and they STILL would have goten causght
yes don't you just hate them, they will come together soon enough.
Hey that was a dumb move but they couldn't resist you know how it is the more dangerous it is the more thrilling it is to do it.
Ahh don't count out Lisa staements just yet just because she said it that way didn't mean it didn't happen just may have happen slightly differnt not how SHE has portayed it in her favor
is the baby his is the baby danny's hum who knows you'll find out soon enough
Date: Jan 04, 2014 11:31 am Title: Chapter 23: Part I (On The Run)... Mines
ok so Sofia is getting on my freaking nerves. like she needs to have a stadium full of seats and mind her business. she is so messy. Joe is an ass. lawd, all those people in that house something is bound to go down. ugh and michael done got manface pregnant. smh.
Author's Response:
Yeah Sofia is getting to be a bit too Much... but she has her reasons she ses her friends pain she sees what being with him is turning her into she doesn't Like it and she HATES him for doing that to her, Tamar Braxton seats LOL
Sofia calls her self helping it willl all come to a head soon enough
Yesh Joeis an ASS he was perfect to keep the tention high on all cylanders
Did he or didn;t he get Lisa pregnant, questions questions
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2014 11:09 am Title: Chapter 24: Part II (On The Run)
this is a great story I hope you make it that the baby is not Michael's that it is someone eles babay. I hope this is a game that Lisa is playing to keep Michael to herself. Michael needs to tell Janice the truth about everything or he will lose her or she won't turst him. I think Quint is just trying to protect his sister but they also got to understand that she is an adult and if she want's to be with Michael then they need to let her.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your suport, I make NO promises on babies purturnity
in a way it is but shes not going to win but she will be around quite a while
Michael does need to put it all out on the table he does.... but could it already be to late yes No maybe who knows but these two are far from over more to come
yeah quint is trying to be a protective big brother... they will learn she has to make the Mistakes her own soon enough
they just feel Michael is wrong for her but until she realises it it would help her
Date: Jan 04, 2014 08:57 am Title: Chapter 24: Part II (On The Run)
wow!!!!!!!SO Intense, the drama just began... can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Very intense, tip of the iceberge these two are far from over yet much more ups and downs to come
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2014 07:09 am Title: Chapter 24: Part II (On The Run)
Man Heellll Naw, See Pregnant Or Not I Woulda Beat Lisa's Ass For The Stunt She Just Pulled. But Naww Though ,Uhmm Forget It EveryBody Know Now && Quint Bout Mad A'F. Is She Gone Question Michael??? I Mean Lisa Did Say That Michael Had Been Making Love To Her???
Author's Response:
HAhAHAHHA she reall did deserve to get the floor wiped with her ass and you do realize Janice didn't realize yet that Lisa is pregant
the gig is up and the secrets out what Now what the nex step
Janice is in a differnt head space right now she has lost herself in being with him she needs a reminder of who she really is which will come sooner hen you think
tTheree will be questions definately you can only ignore things that stare you in the face as long as you alow yourself to be blinded she'll wake up sooner then you think
she will wake up no matteer how much she really wants to stay sleep
Date: Jan 04, 2014 04:46 am Title: Chapter 24: Part II (On The Run)
I love this story sooooo much, it got me on my toes. I wish everyone would just stay out of their budiness, and let them be. I love the way you have Michael being such as badass in this story. You are good writer, keep it up.
Author's Response:
Aww I apreciate that.... it takes so much time and emotions to write these chapters it make me feel good to hear how much Love is out there for my work it's that love that keeps us writters writting
No story should be predictible
yeah they do need to stay out there busness but on the other hand they mean well... they ar adults they can make there own decisions and a love like there is destented to burn if they don't start treating it better
Michael is bad in a sexy way though
Thanks for the complement I will
Date: Jan 04, 2014 03:59 am Title: Chapter 23: Part I (On The Run)... Mines
Excellent!
Author's Response:
Thank You *Bows*
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2014 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 2:Mission Impossible - Pt 2 Do We Have a Deal
Wow that's alot to get to MJ xD but they did what they had to do to get to him but im wondering sense mike has trust issues with people will he trust Janice after this?? He now finding out about her thru candice & sense mike isn't stupid he could feel that this was all set up to & I nnoticed how he kind of flirted with candice a bit knowinh she had a boyfriend lol but Mikes a regular red blooded man xD anyways they finally meet BUT... still could Michael trust her? Even tho she said she believes he's innoccent? But think Mike should hear Janice out first before he shuts her out even tho she just popped up randomly & mutually thru candice lol
Author's Response:
of course it would be alot to get to MJ if it was easy he would be doing it wrong
yeah he is a smart Man but he was enjoying himself, him and janice are interesting you will see what happens there you will seencoming Chapters
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2014 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1:Mission Impossible pt 1
Wow I like how candice is being playing Noemie Lenoir when she is really her in real life lool that's cool how u did that but yeah I like how there plan id turning out so far but im nervous for Janice lol but anyway good chapter girl!
Author's Response:
I thought that would be a cute little inside joke... believe me that plann was off the cuff just came to me
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2014 04:56 pm Title: Prologue: The Next Move
Good start & I like the characters they fit good also & I wish Janic look on her journey getting to Michael lol this gonna be a bumpy ride I see & her brother is cute lol Michael Ealy his name is in real life I think I spelt his last name wrong lol but any I enjoyed!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl I though of those characters before I even set up the story, well she works that... of cousre it's going to be a bumpy ride, wouldn't be good if it wasn't,
yes her brother is cute he was my first Choice, yes I know his name and you spelled it right,
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2014 10:52 am Title: Chapter 22 What You Don't Know
They Sneaking Around. && I Dont Think It sound Right, But Its Better Than Everybody Being In They Business I Guess
Author's Response:
yes they are sneaking around, they like the Danger of it.... oh there some not right things going on you'lll find out, for them it is better becuase they know they wrong but it feels right to them
Date: Jan 02, 2014 03:36 am Title: Chapter 21:The Tipping Point
I know manface, I mean Lisa is not catching feelings.honey yalls marriage is fake.
oh sweetness janice really flip the script. I'm happy that she let michael explain himself and they finally told each other how they feel. lawd they was gettin it in!
Author's Response:
HHAHAHAHA!!! you called her man Face love it, you will see what's happening with that.
yes Janice did flip that script
she was running out of options she need to stop the voices in her head even if they were right, YES they did get it in
Date: Jan 01, 2014 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 21:The Tipping Point
Well damn I got everything twisted. I gotta read it again when I get home then. A1 means top of the line. Excellent in your case.
Author's Response:
you did but you willunderstand as it goes... Thank you for clearing that up I though it ment that it was really good But Top of the line Exclent works too
smiles and claps, Now if all my othere readers were kind enough to coment i have at least 100 reads a day and two only say something you and sky I don't get it
but I'ma keep writting, if I got more reviews I would stop bumping it during the day but i do that becuase I think people have missed it oh well
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2014 08:50 am Title: Chapter 21:The Tipping Point
Your love scene was A1 ma. I thought her tearing up the contract was actually a dream (maybe I'm reading too fast b/c I'm at wrk). Something don't feel right tho! Seems like she has a surprise for Mr. Jackson motivated by hurt.
Author's Response:
What is The A1 Mean
Oh so you didn't get that scene, The while First hald of the Chapter took place two weeks AFTER the last half Chapter so Janice was already screwing Michael when she walked in there
I wanted to divert you attention to make you think she was only there for the contract but she was actully there to screw him that why he was smirking the whole time she was talking he KNEW something like that was Proably under that trench I mentioned the trench coats she normally wore as a divertion so that you would think she was just there for work until she took it off
That scene was suapose to make you ask the quest HOLD UP they was in a bad place now she's fucking him what happened then at the end you find out what happened to cause them to start having sex
the Chapter was supose to be two Difernt Chapters but i felt it would have been too short to have them separate so i just put them together because Nothing was happing ithe first half of the Chapter so to keep it spicy I put them together
and no she not up to anything all she is DICKWHIPPED
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2014 01:46 am Title: Chapter 21:The Tipping Point
Mannneee First Things First, I Hope Lisa Dont Call Herself Falling In Love With Him. Bhudd If She Did She Can Only Blame Herself, Like How T'F You Gone Bring Yo Kids Around Your Temporary Man??????? Have You Lost Yo Mind???? First Mistake.
Anyways Girl No Worries Yo Sex Scene Was A1.
Idk What Janice Asked Marcus To Do, Why Don't You Just Tell Me. Jk, Lmao.&& As To The Looking At The Jet Cover Then No Actually I Was Wondering About That But Wasn't To Sure.
&& You Is Evil All Them Pictures Of Them. You Mad Me Sad For Janice = (
Author's Response:
Lisa Oh Lisa You are gonna see what's gonna happen With Her, There is still a bit of something you don't really know about what happened with Michael and Lisa because we aren't exploring there side of the story, but it was hinted at
yeah she can only blame herself but hey who wouldn't fall for Michael
and of of course she was gonna bring her kids around him how else would the roose work if they don't look like a loving happy family
Okay what does A1 mean never heard that before
Oh I was actually supose to ad the scene in this Chapter But I'm going to addi it in the Next of what she assked marcus to do but think about it like this How would Janice get a contract Made to do Michael PR when SOFIA is her contractual worker without ALOT of explaing after all she just went through with Michael
don't be sad for Janice look a what she just got from him she aint worred about that woman