Date: Apr 01, 2014 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 49: I Want You (Pt) - 2
HONESTLY, I WAS TRULY DISSAPOINTED OF WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO DIRTY KAYKAY. SORRY NO OFFENSE.
WHY I SHOOT AND SCREAM THIS SHIT ON YOU BECAUSE YOU HAVE NO RIGHT JUDGING A PERSON'S STORY LIKE THAT AND MAKE THEM DISCOMFORT OF YOUR SAYING. IT'S NOT NICE, I'M TELLIN' YA!!!
YOU SHOULD SUPPORT ONE ANOTHER AUTHOR. IF YOU FEEL THAT YOU ARE THE 'BEST' AUTHOR, DUH.... MAYBE YOU HAVE YOUR OWN PUBLISH BOOK AND MAKE SOME PROFIT OF IT OUT THERE. BUT, YOU DIDN'T!! YOU STILL HANGIN AROUND IN THIS FICTION SITE. SHAME ON YOU, GIRL.
DIRTY KAYKAY WAS THE BEST WRITER, OH NO NO, SHE WAS THE SUPERB AMAZING WRITER (YOU CAN FIND HER STORIES HAVE THE MOST READERS AND REVIEWERS COMPARE THAN YOU) AND SHE WASN'T ARROGANT AS YOU WERE. SO, DON'T JUDGE THE BOOK BY IT'S COVER.
DIRTY KAYKAY WAS THE HALL OF FAME
AND YOU WERE THE HALL OF SHAME
Author's Response:
Jruby2
I'm going to say this and then I am done I have apologized to DirtyKAYKAY... My intention from the get go was NEVER to make her ERASE her story or want to delete her story
I ALWAYS wanted her to continue her work I wanted her to continure CARTWRIGHT, the way i came off may have seemed conceded and Brash that was never my intention.
and I never thought my comment would have caused so Much of a ISSUE seeing as I didn't curse her or say she couldn't Write, which I have OBVIOUSLY got in reponse, I think she is a good writter, I NEVER said I was better, and I never said she was the best either, there are only a hand full of writers I hold in that slot
I know I'm not the best writer, and I'm sorry if I sounded conceeded it wasn't my intention I tend to put my food in my mouth like that ALL MY LIFE i try and apolgise and get hammered for it
I have apolgized TO HER, she can choose to do what SHE WILL from this moment forward... When I'm Wrong I say I'm Wrong. amd I am done with this at this point.
I have apologized and if ANY FURTHER harasment is made towrds me I WILL report anyone that says any more about this TO ME OR ON MY PAGE
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2014 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 48: I Want You (Pt) - 1
this is good I hope Lisa doesn't do anything to Janice because she won't get away with it. But then again Lisa maybe drunk and not thinking so clearly, but she better not hurt those babies. I would be okay with a sequal to this story because I really don't want it to end it's really that good.
Author's Response:
Lisa is Smart... you will see how that plays out in the Finale part of this Chapter... you gotta think Lisa not NUTS and she's Not trying to go to jail,
Yes lisa is Drunk and shes Not thinking clearly and you will find out in the NEW Chapter why shes so reved up
Thank you for letting me Know and I"m already working on the optline for the new story as we speak, you know you want to Know where Michael and janice end up 5 years from now or longer... more to come.
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2014 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 48: I Want You (Pt) - 1
Man Quint && Candice Make Such A Cute Couple .
&&Quint Asking Mike For Advice,I Never Thought That Day Would Come. It Was So Touching Lmao.
Even Though I Don't Like Cliff Hangers I Still Liked Chapter.
Awee Though Cutting SomeBody Don't Really Seem Like Lisa's Style.
&& I Would Love It If You Made A Sequel To This Story.
Author's Response:
Don't they... they are adorable
Yeah i though Of that at the last minute to have Quint ask for advice from Michael and even you can tell Michael was shocked Quint asked
see Lisa to me seems Like shes got that Bitcheness about her and remeber when we first met her she was arther take no shit Bitch character but after she got hooked in with michael she calmed down and became more vendictive, I see her cutting someone i don't see her SHOOTING someone, or getting into a slapping fight with nobody
Working on the outline for the sequel as we speak... you know you want to see how janice and her team would handle 2003
Date: Mar 26, 2014 10:22 am Title: Chapter 47:A Woman... Worth (Pt) - 3
I Was Thinking Last Nite && I Forgot All About Derek ,(Cuz Like I Was So Happy Janice Was Pregnant) I Love How Michael Described His Suit && His Attitude. That Made Me Laugh. But I AmGlad That Derek Found Him SomeBody To Be With
Author's Response:
yeah Michael was slyly Putting him Down at that Fact He WISHES he was as FINE as Michael But Michel got on hsi Game at the end Notice that he came in there with Flowers right Derek made him step up his game
Date: Mar 26, 2014 06:28 am Title: Chapter 47:A Woman... Worth (Pt) - 3
I'm really happy, I was hoping she was!
That's a beautiful chapter bringing lot of hopes for both of them, finally.
Thanks!
Author's Response:
Everyone shocked me I did't Know you all wanted her Pregnant all this time.... NO ONE TALKED TO ME if yall said something i would have been able to INCOARATE
Thanks for the Chapter love'
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2014 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 47:A Woman... Worth (Pt) - 3
Man this was great loved the fact that she woke up. I am glad that Michael finally broke down to his mom. Everyone knew he needed to but he wasn't willing to do it he just wasn't ready to say what he needed to say out loud. Great that they are going to have babies not one but two. With all this good stuff going on I am not ready for Lisa I just not ready. That chick is evil on so many levels I have a feeling she had something to do with what happen to Janice. Maybe at first but maybe she couldn't take it back after she finally realized that her and Michael was over for good. I guess wishful thinking that maybe Lisa can have a redeaming quality in her left and be a grown up and be a child. Just wishful thinking not likely to happen.
Author's Response:
She was always going to wake up, Thanks for the Love.... Yeah he finally Broke Down i always planned on him doing that it was important you saw all the memories going through his head good and Bad thoughts about her it stood to reason he need to get that out
No he wasn't Willing to Break down because he felt he deserved to carry that pain after all the pain he caused her he nedd to feel it back he need to live in it and understand it it was cleasing for him to feel it finally
Yes, Babies, it was the The Twist though everyone should have know it was coming if the word PREGNANT was a Drinking game everone would have been Drunk, because that word been said like a zillion times leading up to This Chapter in the LAST 7 Chapters.
I know your not ready for lisa to come back but she is so sad But she is, But you will enjoy what happens to her... and Things are going to be interesting for the next few Chapters But she only has a few more Chapters before shes Done.
READ TH NEW UPDATE
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2014 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 47:A Woman... Worth (Pt) - 3
Doggone it l knew she was preggers! U was tryna be a tad bit tactful by throwing us off the imagery. I can't wait for her to tell Mikey!
Author's Response:
I Know THANK YOU.... it was a Distraction I used the word MONITORS plural in the first par of the Chapter on perpose everoyone though it was a miss spelling but i did it on purpose i let you know that Fetal monitor was in that room from the get go
The Revveal is coming in the a few more Chapters More to come New Chapter is on it's way now
Date: Mar 25, 2014 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 47:A Woman... Worth (Pt) - 3
Omg!!!!! Babies! <3 🐣
Im here alive and semi well.
just been bumming around and what not trying to figure out how to continue my story and keep it interesting.
Wow lady, I gotta hand it to you. You sure know how to crank out a chapter. This IS sooo looooooooooooonnnnnnnnggggg phew. It took a minute.
Author's Response:
YES BABIES I alway Knew this was going to end uup happeing YOU all just didn't.... I alway make him have twins i guess because prince and paris were so Close and look more like Farenal twins instead of two diffent kids I always think of Twins
Good to Know your here
Don't give up on your stries Write what you want to write if you want to write about sex then write about sex, but take a page from my book as substance to it
Even if you Write Michael to Be a Play boy and ONE girl take shim off the game and have him s sleeping eiwth every woman that is Goregos and can walk give it substance
I crank out Chapters this hard because most of the time I'm not doing anything, i don't have a Job i'm one those unemplyed people and Writting keeps me from going Crazy.... so i can write a 20 page Chapter in a day easy, and these three parts were nothing because if you rember all these flashback were scense that already happen i just had to edit them to make them michael POV, so that made it even Faster for me..... long Chapters take a minute but they move the story along Very well
I admit i hate long Chater stories that are like soap opera's and you went through all that and it still take 5 LONG Chaters to reach the end of 1 day, i just couldn't do it, it's to much detail in it for me I would get bored. can't wait to here what you think of the next Chapter and the Red Alert
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2014 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 47:A Woman... Worth (Pt) - 3
First Order Of Business: These Chapters Still Had Thee Emotional Twist , ( Keep Calm)
Answer To Your Very Sarcatstic Question: Yessss!!!!!!!
I'm Bout Geeked As Ever . . Lmfao I'm On Cloud 9!
Alright Last One: It Seem Like We Aint Never Done With Lisa Marie (Her Name Is Soo Pretty To Me && Now Looking At Haa She Really Wouldn't Have Been That Ugly If SomeBody Would Just Do Her MakeUp Rite lol) I'm Happy That She Wanna Leave With Some Dignity, Cuz She Like She Ain't Never Want To End It With Michael.
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But How She Gone Tell Michael?????
Ohhh!, I Bet It Be Cute. :)
Date: Mar 25, 2014 10:02 am Title: Chapter 46: A Woman's... Worth (Pt) - 2
Okay So I Was Sleep Last Night Thinking About This Story && I Realized Something VeryImportant,
Nobody Ever Said Weather She Was Pregnant Or Not???
&& Then I Was Wondering What Else The Doctor Had To Say To Janice's Mother?????
Author's Response:
I REFUSE TO ANSWER THESE QUESTIONS.... read The New Chapter, and the SPECIAL coment to you at the bottom
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2014 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 46: A Woman's... Worth (Pt) - 2
This is such a good story can't believe that it will end soon. It took me a minute to catch up but I am and all the things that Lisa and her mother have done is just crazy. I do hope that Michael and Janice have there happy ending. You can't go through all of that and not get the win. Keep it coming going to be on pins and needles.
Author's Response:
thank you, to bad not many other people are willing to say that.... yeah it will be ending soon but don't worry you still got about 5 good chapters you lucked out the last three chapter were extra I had to throw in to Break up the Minotany of the Drama of the 1 I orginally planned then it got LONGER and LONGER then the next thing i know it was 3 parts.
yeah lisa is Crazy, but if you thought we were done with lisa you are SORROWLLY Mistaken.
Believe me i have something SPECIAL in Mind for Michael and janice, know that i got you they will be taken care of understand i just might cry when this one ends because i feel like i been in it for two years like the Characters and it's only been 4 months
more to come
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2014 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 46: A Woman's... Worth (Pt) - 2
Ommmqqee I Totally Get What You Was Saying About The Beep Sound That The Machine Make, Uqqhhh I Hate That Sound. It Make EveryThing That Happens In The Room Seem So Much More Dramatic.
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&& When Michael Had Was Dreaming. I Just Wanted To Cry For Him. Like LowKey He Almost Seem A Little Lost Without Her, But Then I Guess It Be Like That With SomeBody You Truley Love.
Author's Response:
I know don't it make it MORE Dramatic, it's a sound we all know too well.... if we heard it on TV or happened to be in a room with a family member on those machines they are memerable sounds.... i had to hear them when my mother was in the hospital
Yeah michael Dream, I was throwing him a bone, he need to feel that connection with her even if it wasn't real, janice has been present in every chapter of this coma but still Not there it's there thought of her that kept her Present though she was in bed unmoving until she finally did return to them for real...
Yes it's like that because when something happens all you want is to see that person look at you smile and assure you there okay and they just can't, and it made it even more nerve racking because they had the knowledge she could die of Pulminary embolisum with NO WARNING and that had them all on Edge. all he wanted was for her to be okay, and even just seeing her in a dream it made him feel OK.
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2014 12:33 am Title: Chapter 45: A Woman's... Worth (Pt)- 1
I'm Like So Hurt Rite Now. Janice Done Had Some Major Surgery. Even Though I Didn't Cry I Still Felt All The Emotion.
I Just Hope She Be Okay.
Author's Response:
I Know, It's so painful but it need to be that way sorry.... you need to feel that way for Janice and it also gave you the reverse dynamic of what happen to when janice was in the hospital looking for Michael and couldn't get to him... he ended up stuck in flight and in a car when he wanted to be next to her and couldn't
yeah she had major surgery but she was SHOT near the HEART do you would rather have her go through MAJOR surgery then be DEAD, it's emotional but she will heal.
I'm glad I touched you like that hope you willl enjoy the NEXT chapter
Date: Mar 21, 2014 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 43: Stay and Fight..... The Beginning of The End (Pt) 1
Okay NeverMind Man I Was Drunk Earlier, When I Was Reading This Lol.
Author's Response:
read more carefully next time...LOL next chapters up
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2014 09:50 am Title: Chapter 44: Stay and Fight... The End (Pt) 2
I Can't Feel For Nobody Else So Fuck Lisa Rite Now. That Break Up Had To Happen.
Ooommmmqqqeee
You May Not Be Scared But I Am. Shoot I Dont Want Her To Die Her && Michael Just To A Good Place In Life.
&& More Inportantly Why Would AnyBody Wanna Kill Janice???
Author's Response:
No one feels for Lisa and she got a FIRE storm to deal with when she returns which is her thing, it had to happen and atleat she had enough dignity to not countinue to fight and hand him over the paper work and let them walk away amicably instead of prologing it like th pulling teeth like she has been doing.
of course no one want Janice to Die WHO WOULD... am i going to tell you what happens NO, you just going to have to feel it out with them and deal with it until is goes down
you don't know why, how can you not see why anyone would want to kill Janice, it's VERY obvious, it staring you right in the face go back and read the parts of these last two chapters only focusing on the parts NOT dealling with Lisa and Michael, and keep this in Mind Janice is going after a industry that tried to SHUT DOWN a persons career with Lies, Lies that she cut through to the truth, and made her crusade, she in turn is waging a WAR against THE DAUGHTER of a Music ROYALITY DYNASTY... Janice is the APITUMY of a THREAT... and you can't see why they want to KILL her
I though it was obvious let me know what you think