[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2013 07:51 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow.
This is brilliant.
The plot reminds me slightly of "fever" by piziedust in the way the two never could seem to TALK about what was going on.
And then you tok the story to a whole 'nother path, forcing the feelings out and bringin them to this point in time, and I have no words for the sadness that ocmes with this being the end story, knowing that deep down they have real feelings, but everything else in their lives won't let them keep something so beautiful...
(sigh)
Amazing story.
Date: Dec 20, 2012 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sequel PLEASE !!!! I had read a snippet of this on a blog site months ago & couldn't find it. Now i've finally found it & got thru it & im like WOOOW !! You did an awesome job on this & i would REALLY love to read some more of it !! Whitney is my girl, my love, my all time fav & i love me some Michael so reading this was exciting. If you needed a sign that you should write some more, this is it girl ! lol. But all in all, great job on this :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2012 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Even though you're probably not going to continue this, I still want to say you should really think about it. Cause you're the best writer on this site!
Lots of other authors think so too! So I hope you'll really think about it.
Oh. Could you check out me and backpackkk's story Ain't It Shocking What Love Can Do? You know when you get a chance.
But anyway, please think about it. :)
Date: Apr 13, 2012 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Will you make a sequel for this story? Ever?
Author's Response:
Haha! I might. Not sure though...but it's a possibility!
Date: Mar 30, 2012 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
are there anymore MJ/Whitney stories you recommend?
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, I wish I did. That's kind of why I wrote this story--there aren't many out there.
Date: Mar 30, 2012 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Breathtaking ! definitely inspired me more for my new story on them. :")
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: Mar 30, 2012 05:02 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh so now I see why Michael was so hesitant about everything here, because of his history with Diana. It's kind of sad you know, the ending because like you said we know, at least we know the surface of what happened in the passing years.
This story was beautiful, breathtaking and heart tugging, And I enjoyed every minute...no second of it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you =')
I was sad when I wrote the ending because I didn't know that was going to be the ending. But that's where I felt like it should stop. There might be a sequel in the future but I'm not sure.
I'm just glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2012 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nooooo!!! Even though I know it hurts inside that you're ending the story here, I have to understand cope with the loss of never reading a Whitney and Michael story ever again. So I wish this farewell my talented friend. Maybe sometime in the near future, you'll write another story of them. But I hope I'm the first to know. Jk. But anyways, this was truly a great experience and I'm glad I got to enjoy it every morning. Thank u sooooo much!!
Author's Response:
Haha! Maybe I will do a sequel to this story down the road. Who knows? LOL
thank YOU for reading and I am soooooo glad that you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2012 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awwwww this was a really cute story and I'm really sad it ended. They do make a really cute couple. Thanks for writing this cute and sweet story!!
Author's Response:
Aww, thank YOU! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2012 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved every single moment of this, even though this chapter had Diana in it, I still loove it. I really mean it! Keep it up!!!;)
Author's Response:
Hehehe! Thank you!
Date: Mar 28, 2012 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is.......AAAAMMMMMAAAAZZZZZZIIIIINNNNGGGGGG! PLLLLLLEEEEAAAASSSEEEE CONTINUE! :)
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! =))
Date: Mar 28, 2012 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
Omg, I was searching so bad for a MichaelxWhitney fanfiction! And here it is! Well-written, full of emotions... I really enjoyed every single chapter of it. I really like the idea of Michael and Whitney being together! Is just that through all the story I felt this sadness, melancholy spreading from each word... I wish this fanfic could be happier. But we know that Michael and even Whitney were not truly happy at all :(
This last chapter got me so angry and sad for Michael... Diana acts like a real bitch. She doesn't deserve him. Glad to see he at least understood this.
I'm adding your story to my favorites. Can't wait for the next chapter!
P.S.: sorry if I made any mistake in writing; I'm albanian :)
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I am sorry as well that it's not really a happy, romantic fanfic but this is how I imagine an encounter between the two of them would be like.
Thank you so much for reading! I love hearing your feedback!
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2012 10:22 am Title: Chapter 5
Ahhhh!. So Diana is the reason he's like this.. DAMN DIANA! Lol great update! :)
Author's Response:
THANKS so much!
Date: Mar 27, 2012 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this so far you HAVE to continue. I want them to get together. I've always wanted a Whitney & Michael story. I love that this is so long and detailed, keep it up. I can't wait to read another chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far!
Date: Mar 27, 2012 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
As always.... Wonderful!
Author's Response:
Thanks!