Date: Mar 25, 2012 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
OH.MY.FUCKING.GOD..
I seriously positively think, no excuse me, I KNOW u should continue this AND make it a sequel! I've been waiting for somebody to make a story about them for so long, that I made one myself, but yours is freaking beast. I love your writing style, I envy it. But yeah, you should continue this, and I think I'm speaking for 3/4 of authors on this site, CONTINUE!!!!;)
Author's Response:
Awww! Thank you! I think I will continue--I have a couple more ideas I want to try out! So thanks!
Date: Mar 25, 2012 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1
you should keep going really. I like it i like it alot
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: Mar 25, 2012 07:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Your writing is very original and interesting. It has a lot of simplicity but really is meaningful. It's different in an extremely good way.
I say, you should continue but make it a sequel to this short story because as a short story, this is perfect.
Can't wait to read more!
<3 Mrs. Maraj-Jackson
Author's Response:
Oh, wow! Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I think I will continue it. Not as a sequel but it will still be a short story. I have some more ideas for these two.
Thanks for the suggestion!
Date: Mar 25, 2012 02:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Definetly keep going If you like, I love your style of writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I appreciate it!
Date: Mar 25, 2012 01:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes, keep going. I love it doll <3
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you so much!