Date: Mar 27, 2012 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
Damn it Michael...Why you gots to be so stubborn?! *Sigh.* lol
It's ironic how we was the one to finally call her, ask her to come over only to get so terrified of himself again and drive her away. It's like, he obviously wants her to be with him but he doesn't know how to handle that feeling. So he masks it.
Lovely Update.
Author's Response:
Lol ugh...stubborn is the right word for him. But the next chapter might give us some reasoning as to why he is the way that he is with her.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I always appreciate the feedback!
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2012 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank u!!! But, not to be demanding or anything, but I kinda want another chapter....BUT TAKE YOUR TIME. No rush.:) Great chapter though.
Author's Response:
LOL it's coming. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2012 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
'What's yo name, what's yo number.' Lol. Very, very, VERY nice chapter! I'm serious! Another chapter!:)
Author's Response:
LOL!! Thank you soooo much!
Date: Mar 27, 2012 08:20 am Title: Chapter 3
They have a strong attraction towards each other. And they finally talked! This chapter reminds me of Whitney's song "So Emotional" Especially the spoken intro where she says "I don't know why I like him... I just do."
Anyway, Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh, yeah! It does kind of remind me of that now that I think about it. Emotional is the right word to describe this romance lol.
Thanks so much for reading!
Date: Mar 27, 2012 05:02 am Title: Chapter 3
Yay, He got her number! Wonderful chapter. I hope ole Jermaine won't keep worrying after Whitney though.
Author's Response:
oh, Jerms lol. I've got a feeling he's no competition for Michael...at all LOL.
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2012 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nothing less than I expected. Continue, I beg of you. I'm literally on my knees right now.:)Lol.
Author's Response:
LOL! Thank you! I will!
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2012 10:02 am Title: Chapter 2
Oooo, girl, this is the shit!!!
Author's Response:
Haha! Thanks!
Date: Mar 26, 2012 08:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Again, your writing has this gentle sort of flow that just captures you and pulls you in. I like how the details are a little faint, but you can still imagine everything in perfect clarity, including that glowing connection that Whitney and Michael are starting to wrap themselves in. There is more there than just the physical, and soon they will have to...TALK (Big gasp) and recognize it. ;)
Anyway, wonderful update...I'm eagerly awaiting what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you for that! It's very different than anything I've ever written before so I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2012 01:30 am Title: Chapter 2
I wasn't sure whether to read an MJ and Whitney story so I took my chance and I am glad I did.. Really love this story and where it's going. Looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you took a chance as well! I wasn't sure if I wanted to try an MJ/Whit fic, but I'm pretty happy I did! So glad you're enjoying it!
Date: Mar 25, 2012 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is great, girl! i really do love your style. very unique. keep it coming! xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you! I appreciate it!
Date: Mar 25, 2012 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
I wonder when they'll actually get together. But I like this wild side of Whitney. Keep updating!
Author's Response:
Haha! Thank you very much! I will!
Date: Mar 25, 2012 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Waaaay better than I could have done with Michael and Whitney! I love it!! Please continue!
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2012 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1
HOLY FUCK! O_O... I've been waiting for a good Michael/Whitney story.& I'm sure that this story is gonna be dope!! BRAVO! For the first chapter :) AH FUCKING MAZING!!!
Author's Response:
HAHA! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Mar 25, 2012 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1
AMAZINGG!! That's the best Whitney & Michael story I've read!.. Pleeeasee continue!
Author's Response:
Oh, wow! Thank you so much! I will!!