Penname: Mirla [Contact] Real name: Vivian Ta
Member Since: Mar 02, 2011
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Within by KiyaSama Rated: MA starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: [AU] With a hint of reality; where a younger (Thriller-era) Michael gets to visit the eccentric & mysterious stranger in the neighborhood; a man who reminds him of someone a little too close to home.
Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, One Shot, Slash
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5902 Read Count: 469
[Report This] Published: Apr 25, 2016 Updated: Apr 25, 2016
Reviewer: Mirla Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Mar 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The strangest story I have ever read, but it was so painstakenly beautiful and it really made me empathize with both characters. You are an incredible writer and just so great at capturing the essence of his pain. As twisted as it sounds, I'm happy that Michael's tormented soul was able to find "release", but I was also hoping for more insight into the older Michael's thoughts, as I felt that the POV was more focused on the younger Michael. I hope that there would be a sequel/second encounter coming soon.