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Summary:

Boy Meets Girl.  Man meets Girl.  What happens when battle lines are drawn in the quest for the affections of a mysterious woman from New Orleans?

 

*I suck at summaries. Dah well.


Categories: Angst, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 149061 Read Count: 12769
[Report This] Published: Jul 04, 2014 Updated: Feb 04, 2022
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Date: May 08, 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17--Red Vines

That promise will be broken.

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Date: Apr 30, 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

Michael really is starting to fall hard for her. He better catch her heart fast

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Date: May 20, 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19--Being Responsible

Taj picked both them girls up the same way. With lies. *facepalms*

Author's Response:

Yep!  LOL.  But I don't think Taj is a creep.  I think he's just scared.  People are crazy out here in these streets. lol

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Date: Apr 30, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I only read one chapter and I already love it :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  It's taken me awhile to update.  I'm slowly creeping out of retirement.

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Date: Jun 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23--Dropping Bombs and Babies

Why is Taj always pressuring her into doing something she obviously doesn’t want to? I’d take that as a red flag tbh

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Date: Jun 05, 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22--Butterflies

Keisha girl wtf. You can’t have your cake and eat it too. She is also in the wrong, I honestly feel like it’s worse than Michael and Taj.

Author's Response:

Is she worse than Michael?  Taj is innocent in all this.  Granted he lied, but Keisha and Michael are doing too much.

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Date: Oct 21, 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31--Oshun.

Taj you in her business. Don’t do that.

Author's Response:

I mean, it's Taj though...LOL

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Date: Aug 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29--Closing Doors

Did she really just say that at the end..... after all she was saying about “we can’t do this”....

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Date: May 05, 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16--Hi.

Oh hush Roxy the plan is to marry Michael NOT taj.

I love how Keisha calls them shaggy and Velma lmao.

Author's Response:

You really think the plan is to marry Michael? LOL.  I'm going to address this in the next chapter.

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Date: May 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20--The Beautiful Ones

Keisha may not be drunk off alcohol but she is definitely drunk in love.

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Date: May 24, 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20--The Beautiful Ones

Keisha may not be drunk off alcohol but she is definitely drunk in love.

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Date: May 25, 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21--Distant Lover

Wonderful chapter :)

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Date: Sep 28, 2020 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30--Star of a Story

Did him saying that at the end ruin the love making that was going to happen (T_T)

Author's Response:

Nope.  It wasn't going to happen...at least not then and there.  I think he ruined it by saying that he wantd to give her what she deserved...ha ha.

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Date: Aug 03, 2020 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28--Fly Me to the Moon

I wish she would just stop running away every tine there’s some progress being made.

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Date: Apr 30, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--A Kiss To Build A Dream On

This was so cute, I hope they meet again soon :o