Penname: agnosticofgod [Contact] Real name: Elizabeth
Member Since: Oct 21, 2018
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Age: 16-18
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Summary:

 

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" I know that his music touched me. And that's all I know."


Of course, it's not all she knows, but those fibs are irrelevant.

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, HIStory: 1995-1999, This Is It: 2006-2009, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11026 Read Count: 6297
[Report This] Published: Feb 26, 2013 Updated: Feb 26, 2013
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: When, When, When

*jaw drops to the floor* WHOA.

But seriously, whether you care about analyzing Michael’s relationships with people like Sieda and Tatiana or not, this work is phenomenal. The syntax, the subject matter, the pictures and videos scattered within; it’s just a sublime mixture that breathes life into the whole thing. It’s a shame and all that some of the photos and videos have since been taken down, but even still, the power of your fic remains. Thank you for writing something this amazing!

Summary:

Done by Androclese! Thank you!

 

This story is complete!  Thank you MJFiction readers for all your support!  I love you!

You never know as much about yourself as you think you do. That's what Michael Jackson discovers when what he thinks will be an ordinary pizza dinner reconnects him with someone he thought he'd never see again.

 

Chris was an clumsy, pimply, hopelessly romantic 18 year old when they last met. But 30 years does a lot to change someone, and Michael can hardly believe that gawky teen turned into the handsome, charismatic, fashion-designer he now knows.

 

Harder still to believe is that Chris still remembers the one night that a condescendingly straight Michael said yes to the world's most awkward date. He swears he fell in love all those years ago, and never got over it. Now he's back for a second chance, which makes no sense to Michael at all.

 

Why would the world's up-and-coming star of fashion still be head over heels for a aging, traumatized, needy, demanding, and straight pop-star?

 

Michael has no idea. That's why he's so surprised when Chris' gentle strength and presence begins to turn his life inside out. Never has he found someone who could accept him so completely and make him question everything he thought he knew about not only sex, but also about love.


Categories: This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Romance, Slash, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152148 Read Count: 31583
[Report This] Published: Jan 07, 2014 Updated: Dec 22, 2014
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed
Date: Oct 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh. This is actually really high-quality writing, I’m impressed! Only one teeny discrepancy: Angry Birds didn’t come out until December of 2009... otherwise, you’re off to an amazing start!

Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Oct 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

UURRRRMPH THAT ENDING WAS SO DANG CUTE!

Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Oct 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Owch. Granted, I’m sure Michael needs this reality check really darn badly, but it still hurts! And yeah, thank you for reminding us the mental toll helping Michael and Kevin would realistically have on Chris. This is amazing! Literally my only complaint: I’m an autistic person and I’m a little uncomfortable that you chose to use the word “retarded” when “stupid” would have worked just fine. It’s just a kind of gross slur against people with mental disabilities. Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Oct 28, 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Somebody give Jackie a Side Character Of The Year award for handling the...side effects...of Mike’s withdrawal. Also this probably should have gone in the last chapter, but HECK YES MIKE’S CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!

Summary:

improved

Semaj is 17 with big dreams and goals but meeting 21 year old drug dealin', shit talkin', trouble makin', Michael Jackson was not planned. Her life turned a full 360 after the night she met him.

 

Not your average bad boy meets good girl story but see for yourself!

 


Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Neglect
Series: The Gangsta Lovin' Series
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 238258 Read Count: 62178
[Report This] Published: Sep 07, 2014 Updated: Nov 04, 2015
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Can't Turn A Dog Into A Husband

*squeals in delight at the fluff*

Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Can't Turn A Dog Into A Husband

*squeals in delight at the fluff*

Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Can't Turn A Dog Into A Husband

*squeals in delight at the fluff*

Summary:

 

Janus is the God of beginnings, and because he has two faces, he is also the patron of actors, spies, and all those who lead more than one life.

 

Michael Jackson is brilliant, talented, and troubled.  Is it drugs? Mental illness? The stress of his upcoming marriage?  Or maybe it's all because someone is making some nasty death threats. No one knows for sure, but something is terribly wrong with the King of Pop, and Nic Gabriel is supposed to fix it.

 

Nicholas Gabriel is a psychologist, and a genius at fixing broken people.  When he's hired to uncover what's gone wrong with the world's most controversial and bizarre pop star, he thinks the job will be simple enough.  It's drugs.  Because it's always drugs.  But what Nic doesn't know is that what he discovers will challenge his medical genius to it's limits, and maybe in the end, cost him everything.


Categories: This Is It: 2006-2009, Mystery, Romance, Slash, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Rape, Self-Harm, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185020 Read Count: 25776
[Report This] Published: Dec 31, 2014 Updated: Dec 17, 2015
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Nov 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

I’m still impressed with your quality of writing, and it’s some of the best I’ve seen on this site. You did an amazing job with grey morality (a theme in your previous works that I notice you’re skilled in representing) and characterization. Michael, especially, was incredibly spot-on, even with the traits of his you did tweak. (I even started making some traditionally-drawn fanart. If I finish, I’ll figure out how to get it to you!)

Nevertheless, I do have some small complaints. I have no qualms with a character like Eve existing, but I’d really rather she’d have been a white woman. Making a white woman the main villain would have been an interesting commentary about black/white and male/female victimhood, which I felt like you tried to imply, but the fact that she (and her co-conspirator Tony) are people of color just comes off as a little racist. I don’t like that Mrs. Tarantula pulls the “sassy Mexican housekeeper that speaks little English” trope, either. (Disclaimer: I’m white, and this is the sort of the stuff I’ve had to learn to keep out of my writing, too. And I’m not calling you an evil or bad person. It’s a matter of unlearning what a toxic society has taught us, and representing a diversity of personalities, of all races, rather than the same cookie-cutter stereotypes each time.)

But you still did an amazing job with writing, characterization, and creating an appropriate sense of mystery. Honestly, I was so impressed by how well you kept the audience guessing about Michael’s condition and January’s identity without losing any sense of excitement. I read Kind Of Like Faith before this, and I’m confident in saying that you’re one of the best writers in this fandom. I’d love to see you improve more as a writer.

Summary:

Ever wonder what would happen if Michael Jackson did the ALS Ice Bucket Challenge? ;)


Categories: One Shot, Family, Humor
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 907 Read Count: 1025
[Report This] Published: Jan 10, 2015 Updated: Jan 10, 2015
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Oct 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Michael Jackson's Ice Bucket Challenge!

Ok, this is one of the cutest MJ fics I’ve ever seen. Man, I miss Michael. And you know he would have done the Ice Bucket Challenge if he was still around. Thank you for writing this.

Summary:

"Everything was gone to me; it had disappeared and faded into bittersweet, soft, and nightmarish nothings.
  That light was gone, and then there was me."


Categories: This Is It: 2006-2009, One Shot
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1048 Read Count: 813
[Report This] Published: Jun 10, 2015 Updated: Jun 10, 2015
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Oct 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Inside His Mind

This is soooo so sweet, but it hurts... Poor Michael.

Dreamwalker by Ema21 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

The soul is a stream of consciousness and the beings we touch we forever become a part of.


Categories: Award Winning, Family, Fantasy, One Shot
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1455 Read Count: 906
[Report This] Published: Jul 24, 2015 Updated: Jul 24, 2015
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Oct 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: DREAMWALKER

This was so beautiful and artistic and YES. I can see why it won an award. And yeah, I can see why people would want this fic to go on, and its concepts explored in greater detail. But keeping the work brief like this also works, in that it doesn’t feel incomplete. And that’s a tough thing to do with any work without the “I should want more of this” being too on the nose. Applause to you, dude.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for this lovely review. I'm glad the story felt complete to you, it feels complete to me too. I won't deny however that there's another side of me that wishes I could write the sequel I imagine: of Michael's adventures in other bodies! I think it would be so fun! Definitely more humorous and much less poetic. The thought of it enchants me, and makes me happy if I dream about it, but I really don't feel like writing that kind of story, not my style. hahaha. So yeah, this is all this fic will be. :) Thank you for liking it! :)

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It's not typical for an angel to protect humans, not directly. They work beyond the red curtain. Beyond cameras and cathedrals they loom as invisible monoliths; runaway shooting stars. 

Angels maintain order. They support the flow of souls, they fight spirits drowning in inky darkness. Angels anchor life and destroy the damned. 

By keeping spiritual harmony in one dimension, angels allow mortal creatures to flourish, to exist in another.

Heaven is a planet that only thrives in the spirit world. It floats millions of light years from the Milky Way Galaxy, nestled in a ring of stars. Even if a human managed to witness it with their own eyes, all they'd see is a crumbling wasteland.

But the angels are there. And Michael will cross over for the first time. He will remember what he craves and find it. He will love.


Categories: Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Sci Fi, Slash, Supernatural, Thriller
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2406 Read Count: 127
[Report This] Published: Nov 06, 2015 Updated: Nov 06, 2015
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Gravity and Feathers

Wow, this is incredibly detailed and well-written. I appreciate that you let Michael forget the worst of his life on Earth, because let’s be honest, the press turned that into a mess. Not to mention it opens up opportunities further down the line for plot points should you decide to dust this off and write some more. I can’t wait to take a look at any other works you might have posted!

Summary:

An act of defiance, to Joseph, shows Michael what is most important of all.


Categories: Jackson 5: 1965-1975, Drama, One Shot
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2446 Read Count: 604
[Report This] Published: Apr 25, 2016 Updated: Apr 25, 2016
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was an especially sweet and well-written oneshot. I really liked that you went out of your way to explore a facet of Michael’s personality (empathy and humanitarianism) that wouldn’t surface in the public eye until the eighties. And in the same breath, you managed to convey, at the very least, a respectfully-handled piece of the complicated and often-controlling relationship between Michael and his father. Converting both aspects of Michael’s life through something as small (but not worthless) as a $50 bill is utterly brilliant. Phenomenal work!

Michael by RavenAngels Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: After millennia of welcoming infants unto the Earth, an angel is humbled when met with a new soul - Michael.
Categories: Family, Pre-Fame: 1958-1964, One Shot
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 891 Read Count: 857
[Report This] Published: Feb 09, 2017 Updated: Feb 09, 2017
Reviewer: agnosticofgod Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Oct 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Oh man, this was short, but sooooo good. I’m not a religious person by any stretch of the imagination, but I do love me some stories with biblical mythology and THIS does it UNBELIEVABLY well. Quick question: why did you choose to call Michael’s mother Katy and not by her full name? Did you just want to shorten it for the fic or was it actually something she’s called IRL? Either way, this was a mini-masterpiece and it tugged at all of the good feels. Keep it up!