Penname: Beatit777 [Contact] Real name: Mary
Member Since: Apr 16, 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hello all...I'm a life long fan of Michael's who loves writing fan fiction, and sharing my love of Michael with others
Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

Amber and Michael free from the clutches of Gary, head off to the sunny side of L.A hoping to follow their dreams but amongst the mix of finding where they belong...

they are blessed with a child and unknown shores of drama drop into their life which wasn't expected..

How will they cope?

Can they sustain their relationship though it all juggling with a child and their own dreams?
Find out in..

in the sequel to 'I Found that Girl'...

'California Dreaming'


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adventure, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: A/M Adventures
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83200 Read Count: 110693
[Report This] Published: Mar 04, 2016 Updated: Aug 22, 2017
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Date: Jan 08, 2019 Title: Chapter 51: Ch. 51

Wow...even Katherine...hope La Toya learns a valuable lesson from this...we'll see.

Author's Response:

Because she is not here for her nonsense smh! Let's hope she does but time can only tell. Thanks Mary 😁 

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Date: Aug 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: ::Ch. 10::

It looks like Amber may be willing to forgive Andy, which would be a good thing especially now Amber has moved on and is about to start a family of her own.

If she were to forgive Andy, Amber would be giving herself some peace, but Andy would still have to deal with the consequences of his past actions.

Author's Response:

Looks she might be and the little grandchild deserves her grandpa and if she does it's less stress and he will still have to do so nonetheless. 

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Date: Jul 22, 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Ch.37

Sounds like they had a nice evening together...even if the paparazzi happened to see them...smh

Amber refusing to dance made me think of "I Won't Dance, Don't Ask Me" sung by Fred Astaire...lol :D

Hm...Michael is showing the symptoms of something... Look forward to finding out if it's the Vitiligo or the Lupus...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

The paparazzi always find a way to ruin a moment lol at least they were far away and the pair could have some fun. Amber is not a dancer like her boo lol. Well either one could be right you will just have to read and see 👀. Thanks Mary 

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Date: Sep 15, 2018 Title: Chapter 42: Ch. 42

Katherine Jackson is a WISE woman...Michael is lucky to have her for his mother.

LOL...Look forward to seeing Chris' reaction when Amber and Michael 'kick him to the curb' as the saying goes XD

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

of course she is because mothers know best (90% of the time) lool. It might be the opposite of what you expected but I can't spoll it for you Mary you gotta read to see XD. thanks as always Mary <3 

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Date: Aug 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 13: ::Ch.13::

Well...Andy sure isn't one to mince words is he?

Good to see everyone is agreeable to Michael and Amber paying Andy rent.

Author's Response:

That's just how Andy rolls lol. I agree it's nice to see it was a pleasant arrangement and not drama filled (thankfully) lol

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Date: Aug 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: ::Ch.11::

Well...It seems Amber's gonna get to know her half brother whether she wants to or not...hm, lol :)

Sounds like Amber's baby is an ice cream fan...kid after my own heart...:D

Author's Response:

That's cause junior is just as stubborn as she is,They will get along eventually hopefully lol. Yep the little sure does love ice cream heh.

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Date: Sep 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: ::Ch.14::

Ooh...the suspense is building...Joseph is coming...

Marlon...Marlon...Marlon...how nosy, lol XD

Author's Response:

We shall see if he does come and sigh Marlon is too nosy for his own good. Poor Michael

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Date: Aug 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Ch.12

Well, Junior sure is persistent in wanting to get to know his step sister.

I think it depends. He cares about his sister, and her living arrangements. I think he should choose his words carefully, or Amber and Michael might think Junior and his parents are interfering.

Author's Response:

Yes he does care but like you said his actions can make the pair think he is being too nosey for his own good but we shall see lol

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Date: Sep 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 43: Ch. 43

The image of Amber with Nevada, and Nevada 'burping' is too cute...babies are adorable.

Wonder how long Michael will be able to keep the secret about Dani being here from Amber...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

it is so precious isn't it? let's be glad Neveda did not throw up on her mama XD. If mike can keep the secret for long with the way Amber gets susipicious quite easily lool. thanks Mary <3

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Date: Oct 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Ch.17

Grace and Marlon...how nosy! LOL XD

Can imagine what Michael must be thinking now he knows Joseph is dead.

Author's Response:

they are truly too nosy for their own good and don't care if they get in trouble XD. he won't know how to feel about his death.

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Date: Jun 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Ch.34

Sweet...Am loving the little moments of reconciliation between them

And Junior's reaction to Michael talking about where Nevada was concieved...you can just see Junior thinking 'Hey...TMI! lol DX

Author's Response:

aw i'm glad you are! the couple are slowly getting back to their groove. Junior just did not want to know it was awakard and uncomfortable for him to be in that situation! he has to learn about it someday lmao. thanks mary! <3

 

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Date: May 23, 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Ch.31

Wow...I've heard of women giving birth by themselves...

Hm...maybe after Amber stops being hormonal, she'll be able to forgive Michael for not being there with her...

Author's Response:

Let's hope she gets back to her senses and forgives Michael! Time will only tell. Thanks Mary! 

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Date: Nov 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 47: Ch. 47

Oh great...just what Michael doesn't need...smh...

LaToya is unbelievable, isn't she?...smh...hopefully, Katherine will be able to knock some sense into her...

Author's Response:

don't ya just hate annoying siblings? like Layota right now being a pain? slapping mike over money she did not earn typical but don't worry mama K will sort her out. thanks mary <3

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Date: Sep 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: ::Ch. 15::

Wow...good suspenseful scene :D btw

Wonder what Michael and Amber's reaction will be if and when they find out Joseph is dead.

Hm...what if Randy, Marlon, Tito, Jackie, and Jermaine start asking questions about their father...I'm guessing they might start wondering after a while...or maybe one of them is responsible for his death (just putting that out there, lol :D.)

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it. you'll see what happens in the next chapter ;)

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Date: Jul 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: ::Ch. 3::

I love that intro...it always puts me in the mood ;).

It's fun imagining Michael's and Amber's honeymoon in Las Vegas lol :D

Author's Response:

i'm glad you enjoyed it ^^

I had fun writing it lol.

they did have fun at least they won't be that broke lol