Penname: Beatit777 [Contact] Real name: Mary
Member Since: Apr 16, 2017
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hello all...I'm a life long fan of Michael's who loves writing fan fiction, and sharing my love of Michael with others
Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

"Friendship may and often does grow into love, but love never subsides into friendship."

-       By Lord Bryon.

Can two friends see how much they care for each other?. Wanting to be more than Friends?.

 

Michael and Amber have been friends since the tender age of ten, spending time together but as they grew and are in High school, can Michael finally admit his feelings for his best friend and can Amber finally see it and care for him as he does for her?

 

Find out in..

   'I Found that Girl'


Categories: Jackson 5: 1965-1975, Drama, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence
Trigger Warnings: Child Abuse
Series: A/M Adventures
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38558 Read Count: 16546
[Report This] Published: Oct 12, 2015 Updated: Mar 01, 2016
Reviewer: Beatit777 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Ch.7

Hm...maybe Michael thinks Marlon will spill a few 'beans' about what's going on in their family...

Look forward to finding out what's really going on :)

Author's Response:

Perhaps so he really doesn't want Amber to know his crazy life behind closed doors and she will find out eventually lol. Thanks Mary <3

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Date: Jun 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Ch. 22

Whoo HOO...finally Miss Crazy Horse gets what's coming to her...she sure was STUPID to think she could traumatize Amber and have there not be reprucutions

Wow...Chris sure was blinded by family loyalty, but that's typical...family members usually can't see people for who they really are

Wow...Michael handled Angelina with CLASS...perfectly

No, I think Miss Crazy Horse will be back, people like her are just too stupid to get it, their egos are too big...

I have no idea which song it is...though i would probably go 'Oh yeah' if i read the title lol

Author's Response:

she really is crazy and yes michael finished her with class doing his thing without violence.  I do agree Chris was blinded by her fake sweetnessa needing something to get her way somehow. maybe she'll be back who knows smh lol. the song was just a little bit of you by mj lol. 

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Date: Apr 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Ch.4

LOL, love reading about Michael's playful side. Nice to see the two made up.

Hm...wonder if Joseph is the reason Michael doesn't want people visiting his house?...

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

That could be the reason with how tight Joseph's leash on the family is. Mj loves playing around lol.

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Date: May 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Ch.9

Wowwwww....

Hell of a secret to have to keep...

Let's hope Amber will forgive Michael after she lets it sink in WHY he had to keep this particular secret...

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

indeed it is lol. let's hope she does but for now she's allowing her emotions ride her judgement. thanks mary <3

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Date: Jun 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Ch.17

Let's see what words come to my mind...Hm...STALKER...sociopath...NARCISSIST...the B word...LOL...CRAZY... Ms Jekyll and Ms HYDE

Michael and Amber are gonna need a team to get rid of Angelina...impo smh LOL

Author's Response:

Ah so many words that describe her craziness heck they are going to need the damn army to get away from the crazy girl! Lmao.

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Date: Jun 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Ch.19 - Christmas Parti

Wow...sounds like Michael really 'tied one on' as they say...LOL

Wonder if he'll remember the night before ...:D

Author's Response:

Mary who knows if he will or be left with a wonderful headache lol

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Date: Jun 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Ch.16

Oh yeah...she's delusional alright...lol
Sounds like a girl who won't take 'No' for an answer.

Am looking forward to seeing how Michael and Amber deal with her...and what the outcomes are...

Author's Response:

She's crazy and spoilt with a dash of delusional OK the side loll. Let's hope they can cope. 

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Date: Jun 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Ch.15

YAY...they made up! :D...whew, finally! LOL :D. Even if it took Marlon and Chris to make it happen, with the 'let's lock them in the room, and not let them out til they've made up ploy :).

Yes, they are a cute couple :).

I agree, Amber's apology was more sincere :)

Author's Response:

At last we finally got there with a good nudge from my helpful idiots lol. A childish tactic but it worked thankfully. I agree lol. 

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Date: May 13, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Ch.8

Wowwwwww....no wonder Michael is trying to hide his family from Amber

Joseph is acting like some sort of mob boss or other...

Maybe it's time for Michael to warn Amber, secrecy is not always a good thing, impo

Look forward to more :)

Author's Response:

I cannot blame him one bit. Joseph is crazy and obsessed with moment. It could be time to tell her about it but we won't know how she will react when she finally finds out the truth...lol. 

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Date: Jun 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Ch. 21

Hm...I don't think Chris knows how crazy his cousin REALLY is

Having Miss Crazy Horse show up after a Christmas holiday of getting unintentionally drunk is the last thing Michael and Amber need...smh lol

Some of those drinks are deceptively POTENT...lol

Author's Response:

He's blinded by her cutesy image smh. I love the new nickname you gave it's perfect for her. Also they need to get out every now and then even to be drunk lol. 

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Date: Jul 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Ch.31

Considering the outcome...not a smart move. Although Marlon meant well to try to stop Joseph from being nasty and insulting...

Author's Response:

Well yes Marlon sometimes doesn't use his brain at times but he did mean well. At least there wasn't too too much violence at least. 

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Date: Apr 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Ch. 2

They're in the same class in school...talk about a small world :) lol.

Love imagining them playing together :)

Author's Response:

hehe little rascals, they are just adorable in their own right lol.

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Date: May 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Ch.11

I'm imagining this conversation LOL... Chris sure thinks highly of himself doesn't he?...LOL No, seriously he's cool :D.

Will be interested to see what type of girls this 'fine glass of chocolate milk (I love that description, btw :D)' is able to attract...LOL :)

Author's Response:

Let's keep that secret between you and I we don't want his ego to get Eben more inflated lool. The fool will have several at his beck and call. Typical lol

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Date: Apr 17, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Ch. 1

I always enjoy stories where Michael and the original girl are kids :)...those are my favorites :)

Very enjoyable...sweet interactions :).

Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response:

heeey! i love them as much as you do lool, and they are indeed! enjoy the rest <3 

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Date: May 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Ch.10

I could see Chris in my mind too LOL... He's one of the good ones, MJ's lucky to have him for a friend :)

Nothing like a good friend to help a person take their mind off an unhappy situation :)

Author's Response:

Chris is handful but he means well lool. He really is and he arrived in the nick of time to do so.with all his craziness and all lol