Penname: zezinha [Contact] Real name: Mary Sonmor
Member Since: Jan 07, 2017
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Age: 21+
Gender: Female
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Summary: Past Featured Story

In life, Keisha Devin has to wear many hats: Twin, Lawyer, Best Friend, Daughter, and many more.  Her life has always been in order and she has always been control of her destiny, but what happens when a handsome superstar comes along and rocks her world in more ways than one? 


Categories: Romance, Song Fics, Adult
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190119 Read Count: 105133
[Report This] Published: Jul 19, 2010 Updated: Oct 03, 2011
Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

This was so beautiful! Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story
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It's been almost a year since Jessie and Michael's two-year relationship fell apart, and since she walked out of his life. Yet after Michael publicly releases new songs from his Invincible album, blatantly trashing her for thier break-up, she finds herself back at the one place she fled in tears, and back to the one man who broke her heart.

Michael still loves Jessie, wants her back, and will do anything in his power to bring her back home to Neverland. But will thier love be enough? To last through anything?

Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Adult
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 143 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 848855 Read Count: 394809
[Report This] Published: Aug 31, 2010 Updated: Oct 01, 2012
Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Mar 05, 2017 Title: Chapter 143: Epilogue

Beautiful story. Loved everything about it

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 60

Beautiful, simply beautiful!

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

First let me say that I am really enjoying your story. But I don't understand, why are they so upset about Jackie and Natalie getting together? If one of them was married, ok, but neither is so what is the problem with them being together. Maybe I'm missing something.

Summary:

I decided to come out of retirement for a little while, and write a sequel to the previous Mike/Keisha story Rocked Worlds.

Michael Jackson and Keisha Devin-Jackson have everything they've always wanted, but what does change mean for a couple who thrives on consistency?  What happens after marriage and kids?


Categories: Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131032 Read Count: 43871
[Report This] Published: Nov 04, 2012 Updated: Jul 04, 2014
Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Keisha and Michael's Epilogue

I haven't reviewed after each chapter because I'm wan't sure if you would still be checking or not. But this series was absolutely amazing. I loved every word of it! I cried like I was reading Michael's true life story, at the end. It takes a wonderful writer to do that to a reader. Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

“I'd lie for you and that's the truth
Do anything you ask me to
I'd even sell my soul for you
I'd do it all for you
If you'd just believe in me.”

It is the year 2006. Michael Jackson is trying to find peace of mind and normality after the traumatizing trial. He goes to Ireland.

Amanda Sanchez follows her mother from native Spain on a wild dream of finding the unnamed man who, 24 years ago, fathered Amanda on a beach in Ibiza. They move to Ireland.

What happens when two disenchanted people meet accidentally? Could they redeem each other and restore their faith in humanity?

 


Categories: This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113480 Read Count: 30675
[Report This] Published: Nov 05, 2013 Updated: May 04, 2019
Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Beautiful. I do have unshed tears tho, it saddens me that he may have truly felt such low self esteem away from his stage world.

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Whew, okay, she is taken by Michael's aura...that's better. lol

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Just curious, do you not think Michael was handsome or is your writing based on his perception of himself? Just curious. I have read many stories that describe him as unattractive and I just don't get it. Except for maybe a period between 2001/03 I thought he was stunning!

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

I always have such mixed feelings when I read beautiful love stories like this. I can't seem to separate myself from the real Michael and so wished that he had someone like this in his life. Maybe he did, he did like to keep his personal life secret. One can only hope so.

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don't imagine he came across too many people who weren't 'star struck'. I imagine they would have been intriguing. Very well written. Liking this very much!

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Okay...that was the most romantic thing ever! Loved it!

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! Reading Michael's POV felt like I was reading his autobiography! So realistic as we know from the information 'out there'. Excellent first chapter!

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, she has a heart of stone. Poor Micheal.

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

That is one amazing statue of Michael Jackson, captures him so well. I have seen so many wax figures of him that are so off. Excellent chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you for all the comments so far, I am sorry I cannot reply or update my stories faster, but I am trying my best with my workload,

Reviewer: zezinha Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

A perfect combination of sadness and laughter!