Penname: MichaelBeMine [Contact] Real name: Gabi
Member Since: Feb 01, 2015
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hello !


My name's Gabi and I've been an MJ stan since the second grade ;o lol.


Starting writing fanfics about 5 years ago, then I stopped. Recently got bit by the writing bug so I'm just seeing where it takes me!


I'm a student, finishing up my senior year in college.


Things I enjoy:


Movies


Reality tv


Music ( I'm always listening to music or singing)


Writing :D


Gifs :DDD



Beta-reader: No
Gender: Female
Age: 21+
Real Name: Gabi
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Reviews by MichaelBeMine
Summary:

http://www.upscalehouston.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/05/Ola-Ray-Jackson-300x251.jpg

For no mere woman can resist the beauty of the thriller...

Ola Ray once said that she fell in love with him during the making of "Thriller." That she wishes now that she had told him so. That their relationship was close and intimate, but never romantic.

This is my version of a what-if, if MAYBE things had gone a little differently. If she had the courage to tell him how she felt. 


Categories: Romance, Adult, Angst, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24087 Read Count: 10991
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2011 Updated: Dec 22, 2013
Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: May 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The First Time

You write so beautifully. You really captured the essence of Michael. I would love to read more of their story. 

This Is It by Dreamer Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

Never in a million years did she think she'd ever work with him. Yet, she was hired to assist on his comeback tour. Wanting to make this the best thing to ever hit the planet, she, like the others, always put her best foot forward.

What she didn't know was that this opportunity would lead to an extremely complicated friendship, filled with indescribable events.


Categories: This Is It: 2006-2009, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Anorexia, Death, Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17945 Read Count: 3836
[Report This] Published: May 27, 2014 Updated: Jul 19, 2015
Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I cannot describe how much I love/hate this story. I love Dani and Mike's relationship and I honestly wish/hope he had someone like that in his corner during those days. This story is eerie because there is so much foreshadowing and I'm not talking about the trial. I'm talking about just the conversation between Dani and Mike. There's words left unsaid and then he confesses to her. And I can't help but be filled with hope for these two. Despite knowing they will not get the happy ending they deserve..

Absolutely fantastic writing.

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Aug 03, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm missing this story dear!

I thought about it whilst listening to "Angel of Mine" by Monica. 

Again, you're fantastic at what you do girl!

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really love where you're taking this story. I think its very realistic. And even though no one wants Michael to die in this story, the impact would be diminished. I love Dani's character! Maybe you can include more moments between the two cause I really love them together. All i can say is that I don't want it to end anytime soon!



Author's Response:

It won't end anytime soon girlie, at least I don't think so. 

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Also!The whole time I'm reading this chapter, I'm like mentally yelling at Dani. Like don't leave! Don't fall asleep! Fuck your cousin shit is serious right now! Like omfg this is your last chance, go to him before its too late!!!!

Yeah, that's how wonderful your writing is.



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, thank you

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Jul 20, 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh, this chapter was wonderful.

Sitting here, trying to hold in the tears.

I've had to visit someone in hospice before so reading this kinda brought me back.

I love that Dani has been accepted into the family and that she still cares for the kids like they're her own. Despite Michael's condition, she hasn't just abandonedthem. And her talking to him...that's what really got me choked up.

But there's improvement! Maybe there's light at the end of the tunnel...

Please update soon :)

also, my story , tow has been updated :)



Author's Response:

Hey! 

Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I've actually gone through the hospice thing too with my great aunt. She's the motivation behind this chapter. Everything I witnessed in this type of situation was from her. I miss her dearly. I miss all of my great aunts. I only have my grandmother now. Although we bicker, she means a lot to me. :) 

 

I promise to update soon and btw I love TOW. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Michael Jackson is an award winning screen writer who has just written a book called Cradle To The Grave.  Though it is published as a work of fiction the subject matter mirrors events in his own life.  He grew up poor in Gary Indiana with his best friends Kenneth Bertrand Grave and Kamaria Bello. As they grew older distance and time eventually made them drift apart.  When Michael reunites with Kamaria it's bitter sweet.  Love lost and found, betrayal, lies, deceit and eventually death steps in to rule the day.  How will Michael cope.  Will he move on with his life or will he be haunted and emotionally trapped forever by his past.

 

This is a story of pure fiction I do not own any images used in the dipiction of this story.  No copyright infringment intended.

award winner   award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 124143 Read Count: 15277
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2014 Updated: Jun 12, 2016
Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 26: When A Stranger Calls

I don't think she forgave him too easily, she made her point and Michael knows now not to ever keep anything like that from her again, especially when it could potentionally cost her safety! Plus, they need to be on one accord to deal with psycho Kenny.

Kenny is really a creep. He kept Ria's heart? Someone put him in the nearest insane asylum.

And I do think it's best to turn the case over to some new detectives, Canton has too many personal feelings and it's getting in the way of the story.

I also get the feeling that Ria kept it a secret....

Please update soon :)



Author's Response:

Yup Michael has learned a hard lesson with keeping things this pertinent from Marley. Especially since one of her what ifs came true because Kenny was all up in their space. He did keep her heart and he deserves to be under the jail. Canton's dislike for Michael is beginning to out weigh his like for Marley so it's time to move on from them. I'll update as soon as I can<333

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Feb 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Questions And All Manners Of Curiosity

#teammarley this my fave story on here. keep up the awesome work !



Author's Response:

Awwwwe thank you so so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. So much more to come. #teammarley! <333

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Aug 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Secrets So Untold...

Yay~ I always love seeing updates

And yes yes yes they should have moved out of town, at least they can create some space between themselves and kenny cause obviously he knows Michael's place inside and out. But for some reason I have a feeling this won't be the safe haven they hope'd it be.

Should've kept it to themselves...when it doubt always keep it to yourself...

And never too intense, but I watch alot of of crazy shit.. murder shows/48 hours/TWD/GOT so this is perfect! haha.

 

Can't wait for moreeeeeeee <3



Author's Response:

I'm glad it's not too overwhelming with sadness and craziness. Lol. I love crime shows too!!! 

Leaving town was the best thing for them to do at this point. It will give them a break from Kenny's craziness. But you're right how long will the sanctuary last? <333

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 19, 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Bye Bye Love Hello

Oh boy! What an update! We finally see what happened to Ria and goodness that was tough. The part with Ria/Mike/Baylee was so sweet, almost perfect and then in contrast you have her sudden death. Her life ripped away from her just as her new life was taking shape. 

Honestly Im worried for Mike n Marley.. I love them together so much and I hoping they can all get through this in one piece. Marley is so understanding and caring. Michael did the right thing by letting her know that she is his future. I think that will give her reassurance moving forward.

Baylee's so cute ;3 I want to see her again :P

Great chapter, I got so hype when I saw the update :D



Author's Response:

Kenny is always the other shoe waiting to drop and when it does drop there's shit and all kinds of nasty debris on the bottom of it. Michael and Mar are safe for now don't worry we will see more of Bay and get to know more about Mar's life in upcoming chapters. A lighter side of life. Thank you for rocking with me through this rough patch. It was long and far from over but stick with me!! <333

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Assurances, All On The Table

Me when I see CttG updated:

Im so glad we got to learn about Mar's backstory, her ex and "bestie" aint shit. I wonder are they still around... 

And I thought it was priceless that Baylee already knew something was up between those two. Children are so observant. 

I love this little family. <3

I just want to enjoy this peaceful moment before a certain psycho ruins it all!

More please?

And Nobody Loves Me Like You Do has been updated!



Author's Response:

Lollll. I love that gif. Man those white pants? Girl don't get me started. You saw them from the back right?!?? Lol 

yeah she had a little triangle of her own. Fortunately it didn't spawn a psychopath. I love them as a family too!! <333

Summary:

Michael Jackson has found great success as an OB/GYN and owner of his own medical practice, but has neglected his wife of 7 years, Aundraya, in the process. 

So she decides to take matters into her own hands to set their love life straight.

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Categories: Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8408 Read Count: 1770
[Report This] Published: Dec 17, 2014 Updated: May 30, 2015
Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: May 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

-rubs hands together- Alright Mrs. Jackson. Get it however you can girl !



Author's Response:

I'm sayinnnn, lol! Thank you for reading/reviewing! That gif killed me 😂

Btw, I looove  "The Other Woman". You're amazing! Sorry for being a silent reader, I'll do better lol! 

 

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: May 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love this and loved that you used Ms. Tae Heckard as the main girl. Keep up the good work

Summary:

A look at my life and all that good stuff. Come here to also view all kinds of story news and thoughts, plus my little rants. I also throw in some shoutouts too!


Categories: Journal
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9404 Read Count: 129903
[Report This] Published: Dec 31, 2014 Updated: Jan 16, 2016
Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Aug 17, 2015 Title: Blog Of A Short MJ Fan

I don't think you should let something so small and honestly irrelevant get you so upset. It's just a fanfic site you know? Most of us are writing for leisure and a way to remember Michael. Honestly I write cause it make me happy and while reviews are great and all. It's not the end of the world. And just keep writing and practicing, figuring out how to make your work stand out. Sometimes it's the littlest thing that will get someone to read a story that will get some one to open it like a banner or catchy summary.

Stay positive :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. And i also pin MJ pics on Pinterest to remember him. And i know

Summary:

 

Michael is fed up with his PR marriage with Lisa and wants out. One day Michael's business partner introduces him to his strip club in hopes that Michael will be a co-owner. However, something else catches Michael's attention. Michael is blown away when he meets the most gorgeous woman he has ever seen.  Does a one night of flirting turn into obsession, love or a chase? See what happens when lies, lust, and temptation get the best of us.

 


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 215737 Read Count: 30815
[Report This] Published: Jan 29, 2015 Updated: Feb 16, 2018
Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Drink From The Well Of Yourself and Begin Again

Mike definitely is being extra. It's not right to give aissa such a hard time on this, when its ONE NIGHT. He's being selfish now and I do think Mike has something up his sleave.

And aissa is way better. she needs to stay that way when she faces Mike.

Lawd, hope she's not pregnant. ~_~



Author's Response:

Michael is definitly doing to much and he is not perfect in this matter himself so he needs to chill out! Aissa is improving and bettering herself which I am so excited about! I am so proud of her in this chapter! I hope she is not pregnant either!!! Thanks for review!!! xxx