Penname: DajahMykal [Contact] Real name: Dajah Nicholson
Member Since: Jan 30, 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
[Report This]
 
Reviews by DajahMykal
Summary:

UPDATED OCTOBER 18, 2018!!

 

 

 

 

I could never imagine Michael doing a show like The Bachelor, Flavor of Love, I Love New York, etc. no matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't. But if he did, I imagine it'd go something like this...

 

 


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Humor, Parody, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 489836 Read Count: 27226
[Report This] Published: Jul 19, 2013 Updated: Oct 18, 2018
Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 83: Episode 18b

Sasha has crazy eyes... just something I’ve noticed in her banner lol

Lmao, they all going awf and Michelle is getting her LIFE! I never understood how these girls (and guys) on these reality shows just swapped spit with each other one after the other. And once again Michael is a fool! ‘Sense of having my nipples pinched.... that’s important.’ I CANNOT with him!

Sasha is always starting some mess. Mari came to you as a woman yes, but you need to get over it. You can’t let any little thing that someone says to you bother you. If the chick said she didn’t like you, so be it. You said it yourself Sasha , you ‘didn’t come here to make friends’. So let that shit roll girl. Low key feel like she trying to start some shit to get beat up again (I’m commenting as I’m reading BTW, lol). SASHA CHOSE THE RIGHT BITCH TO PUT HER IN THE WRONG MOTHAFUCKING PLACE 😂 I cannot!!

Mari has a point.... is Michael being forced to keep this vile, barbaric and mental bitch around??? Mmmmmm

And I hate people like that! They get a crowd and act all bad and bougie (literally in Sasha’s case). They need to learn to let Sasha’s craziness go in one ear and out the other. But that’ll just make her crazier and take more drastic measures to get under their skin.

Side note: Tahiri Jose is just thebomb.com easily like the best looking woman out of all of them lol

Love the date he took Mari on. Very sweet and romantic. I think it says a lot that he trusts her enough to open up more about his pasta relationships. Maybe Mari, Michelle and Ava can handle his lifestyle.... hmmmm idk about Sasha. Seems to manipulative and she has a big mouth. Too spoiled and not in a good way.

Oooh, I wonder how the girls will vote! I’m team get rid of Sasha all the way, if it matters lol

Author's Response:

Girl, your observation about Sasha's eyes inspired some of the petty little comments in the next update, so thank you for that. Lol

As for the girls (and guys) on the reality shows kissing one right after the other, I was just as CONFUSED as you! I recently watched old episodes of Flavor of Love and Rock of Love (for the story) and there were parts where the guys would kiss one girl, then turn his head and kiss another. Like... wtf? 

Image result for disgusted gif

I was kind of iffy about writing that specific part to be honest, but decided to give it the go ahead since this story is supposed to be a parody of those shows and that's what they do. Just know I'm disgusted right along with you, boo, lmboo.

Sasha is hands down the messiest girl in the house. She doesn't get that all her little games are DEFINITELY going to come back and bite her in the ass one day.

Hmm... the producers and how much their input affects eliminations is something that will be addressed during the reunion. 

Tahiry IS gorgeous! I'm so upset she's not on that show I don't watch anymore *eyeroll*.

Glad you liked the date he took her on. I really want to do something like that, so Mari got my dream date, lol.

And I LOVE hearing who you guys love and hate, so yes it matters!  

Thank you for your insightful feedback, it helps loads! Have a great weekend, sis! <3

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Episode 13

That beginning was intense!!!

Wonder what went down....

Rocky is worried about the wrong thing. Everything is going well in Mari's and Michelle's world. You need to be worried about your world with Michael.

Mari keeps it real. I really like her.She actually makes sense when she speaks and nothing off the wall ever fly's out of her mouth when she isn't being provoked. She's just chill, but don't let that fool you! Mari'll have you shook in a millisecond!

The challenge was too funny!! From shitty diapers, tit gazing, vomit spewing mouths, and water guns and tickling!! My girl Mari has shown out AGAIN! Go on girl!!!

Author's Response:

Yasss honey, Michelle was very very VERY pissed in the beginning. You'll see everything unfold before the episode. 

Marisela is definitely the most laidback in the house. That's why Michael likes her... because he doesn't have to worry about her coming at him with drama (most of the time lol) 

I couldn't imagine anyone besides Mari winning this challenge. Like she said, she's a big kid! 

THANK YOU DAJAH FOR YOUR WONDERFUL REVIEW!!!

 

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Episode 13b

It's a party, it's a party, it's a PAAARTTAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!

Trick..... I can't stand Valeria!

Her little plan is soooooo gonna backfire! You got put in your place for being NOSY. Take it like a woman and pull your panties out of your ass. You WILL live girl. But no, she just had to run into Laurent (even though he meant no harm; he talks too much sometimes!!!lol) and now she has a little something, something up her sleeve. She needs to remember what happened the last time she tried to step to Michelle on that bullshit. Whoo baby, I can not wait for this!!She gon' get them paws put on her by Michelle.

I hope Valeria doesn't plan on acting on her scheme during the party though.....

Sasha is just being Sasha's ole judgmental self.

I can't believe how Christina is acting/acted right now though. Does she not know that she and alcohol are not as great of friends that she thinks they are?! lol, she should know what her limit is. Now look at her, nipples all out and throwing up in the toilet.

Michelle is a good one.

Mari, Michelle, and Ava so far are the only ones acting like they have some sense.

Author's Response:

Looks like Valeria assumed that Michelle was all bark and no bite. Something tells me that she'll be feeling a different way by the end of the episode.

LMAO@ "She gon' get them paws put on her by Michelle." 

 

Yes, Sasha's being Sasha.

And you think Xtina would've learned that her and alcohol are not friends when Michael sent her home the FIRST time. At least she ain't trying to have sex with anyone this time. Lawd have mercy.

THANK YOU DAJAH!!! MUAH!!!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Episode 13c

Seems like everybody has slept or was rumored to be sleeping with someone Michael knows. Small world.......

I need some kind of dirt on Sasha though! Noway she's in anyway type innocent.

Ready for this lie detector test

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Episode 13d

I think we all agree that Valeria had than ass whooping coming. Michelle went Hulk Smash on that ass!!! While I love that, I don't think that this is going to go in her favor at all when eliminations come around. Michael has a whole lot of shit to handle now.

Valeria is a hoe, though. How many guys has she slept with? How many hearts has she stomped on? How many minds has she played with? People don't change over night ( or apparently at all in her situation) so who's to say she won't do the same to Michael.

Lionel can just leave Mari alone!! I feel like he is trying to play some kind of mind game with her. Let her move on with her life!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Episode 13e

Each add just makes me hate Valeria even more. It's so bad cause she's a fictional character! Damn.

She's just so damn fake and CRAZY AS HELL!! This bitch got her ass BEAT just to get someone eliminated?! If that's not crazy, I don't know what is. Imma need the tables to turn dramatically come elimination time. Either Valeria goes home and Michelle stays.... or they BOTH go home!! Valeria was already let off the hook once!!!

'Least Michelle got to plead her case.... let god be with her now.

I hope Michael didn't fall for Valeria's crappy explanation. That shit don't make no sense, it was not good enough for me! Nobody attacks ANYBODY OUTTA NOWHERE LIKE THAT!! Michael better recognize. If he's not onto her game by now..... he's a dumbass!!!

But knowing him.... he did and he is.

Lol, at Christina sleeping with a pillow over her head because of the girls being loud..... I do that every single night!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Episode 13f ELIMINATIONS

I hate Michael!!! Lol

That's all I have to say.

I'm glad you are back!

Valeria and Sasha can go kick rocks.

Author's Response:

Hey Dajah!!! :)

Michael definitely had everyone fooled. Valeria's pissed and decides to get to the bottom of it. 

THANKS FOR READING HUN!!!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed
Date: May 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 79: Should I finish this story?

If you are up to it: YESSSSSS!!!!

But I am enjoying a sane mind right now lmao

Author's Response:

Hello, my Dajah!! Doll, these girls are bout to make you lose whatever sanity you have left, because I've been rereading the story and the inspiration is FLOWING right now, lol! I'm going to start doing regular updates in around two weeks, when my schedule finally clears up. Thank you for reading, supporting, and leaving feedback!! 

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed
Date: May 14, 2018 Title: Chapter 79: Should I finish this story?

If you are up to it: YESSSSSS!!!!

But I am enjoying a sane mind right now lmao

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 85: Episode 18d ELIMINATIONS

So much went the hell down... and I don’t have words (yes I do)!

Michael and Mari were just hot! They’re so compatible in and out of the bed!! I was actually surprised that they didn’t get down. I was ready and waiting (not ashamed) lmao!

But now to the good part: the elimination!! Like Michael was really like 5 different people up there. I was so SURE that Sasha was gonna be picked and get her crown, but knowing that she’s GONE!!! Wow, I didn’t think you had the guts to get rid of her! Lmao, I thought you would keep her till the very end just to fuck with us (assuming we all dislike her Lolol)!!!

The scenery/ backdrop for the elimination was definitely spot on. I should’ve know that it being stormy and overcast and borderline raining was only for-shadowing the hell Sasha is about to unleash on all them mofos!!!! First she cried in the car; now she might leave the Acqua Liana in fucking handcuffs!!😂🤷🏽‍♀️

Her picture at the end of the chapter TOOK.ME.OUT!!!!!! I had to put my phone down and damn near walk away!! I was dying laughing, and you petty as hell for it!! Thanks for the laugh of the century!!

Now I wonder what Sasha is going to do. I could not get through them shifting back and forth from her POV to the others! That chick is about to loose her mind and reaffirm Michael of why he had to cut that bitch off!! I am so here for the way she’s about to cut up!!

Sasha a prime example of how having literally everything don’t mean anything. She has a few screws loose and her admittance to the looney bin is way past due. Like she has no redeeming qualities that can pacify her shitty attitude and behavior (even for being on a dating show ala The Bachelor or Flavor of Love) none of those chicks went full in villainous like she did.

Whoo child,

Author's Response:

As much as I love writing's from Sasha's POV, I knew I couldn't keep her till the end :(. I DID toy around with the idea of keeping her til the top 3, but it just didn't make sense. I definitely miss her perspective though. She's such a bitch lol. 

Glad you caught the foreshadowing :). Sasha was not about to leave without a BANG.

Lmboooo, I'm glad you caught that Sasha shade with the gif.

Yes, Sasha is a PRIME EXAMPLE of the say "money can't buy happiness." I mean I'd like to find out for myself, but I digress... Sasha is unhinged when it comes to Michael and he's finally peeped it and stopped making excuses for it. As a a man in his position, it's great to have a girl with her own money, but at what price??

Whew chile indeed. 

 

Thank you, Dajah!! :D Sorry it took me forever to respond, new job kicking my ass! 

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 78: Episode 17 part d

Michael just needs to drop Sasha already. He's met her mother now; he see's how she is.... That's gonna be Sasha tenfold ten/twenty years from now. How could he be with a woman who thinks that everyone, especially those without money, is below her....?

Michael needs to really do some soul searching and get his act together because shit is about to get real, quick and real soon.

Author's Response:

"She get it from her mama" lol. 

Yes, money isn't everything. Michael comes from modest beginnings, so he knows what it's like to be without. Sasha, on the other hand, practically grew up in a castle with this woman feeding her delusions of grandeur every day. 

You are exactly right, shit is about to get real. 

Thank you, Dajah!!!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 80: Episode 17 part e

Still don’t like Sasha. Her behavior is neither funny or cute. She either needs to be on meds or in somebodies hospital! Lol, come on! Trying to buy your way into a party that you are clearly not invited to! Your family had their Day with Michael! Let these other girls get a chance! And her episode while talking to Michelle..... I have no words! Like, what’s up with that? When this thing comes to an end and Michael possibly doesn’t pick her, he and his new beau will have a potential stalker or something.

Also, I happen to find Rocky super boring! I know she is t meant to be, but she’s not memorable to me. Like when I read in the other girls POV (Mari, Sasha*ugh*, Ava, and Michelle) I can remember times where they made me happy, sad, mad, amused, etc. , but with Rocky I can’t. Maybe I’m reading to much into it (or not paying her enough attention lol)!

Wow, Michaels past with Eve was not what I was expecting. He basically used her. It’s good that she got out of that before she fell any deeper! I’m glad they cleared the air, even if it hurt to hear. But awwww shit! Now they HAVE to tell Ava. She’s seen too much!! Lol

I really think Ava deserves this... if she can get over her sister and Michaels’ past.....

Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, I love this. 

 

Chh... Sasha has no self-awareness. She is a mess and a half. I hate to think of her reaction if/when she's eliminated *shudders*.

I can see why you think Rocky is boring. She hasn't really been pulling her weight in this competition. Meanwhile, the other girls have been putting themselves out there, cooking this man meals, watching their competition like hawks etc.

Yea, one thing about Eve. She doesn't stay anywhere she's not wanted. I just wish more people in life could adopt this attitude! There really are more fish in the sea!

Thanks for your review, Dajah. It put a lot into perspective for me :D.

Summary:

 photo DD1.png

Diana is your everyday woman. Except for one MINOR problem. She is as beautiful as a rose in the spring time. But her soul can be as dirty as the bottom of farmer's shoe. She can be so malicious that she makes the Devil appear like Mary Poppins. When she demands her way, she will get it,no matter who or what she harms. From the very first time she meets Michael,she knows she wants him, for Diana will not rest till her wish is fulfilled.

Michael has the world in the palm of his hands right now. His Thriller album is at an all-time high, he has just won 8 grammys, knocked down so many records, its criminal, and he is on his way to recording another best-selling album. But most importantly,he has somebody special to share this glorious time of his life with. Annie. She has been his rock for the past 5 years. Their relationship is a match made in heaven. But all that may come crashing down the moment Diana slithers into the perfect picture.

 

*I know many stories hae been made with "Dirty Diana" because of the compelling song, however, each unique and creative in their own special way, mine is no different. This a twisted, dark, complex story about Diana and if she actually came to life. Fair warning. Please understand that this story is strictly inspired by Dirty Diana, which some real events; I just manifested it into a story. Reader's discretion is strongly advised. On a brighter note, Please ENJOY!!!!!!!

(Graphic video made by an awesome designer)

This story takes place over a period of years. We shall begin in late 1985. Post-Thriller Era;Pre-Bad Era


UPDATE: The ORIGINAL PROLOGUE is now been posted as of 10/07/2013!! This will help to understand the story better!

_____________________________________________________________

 

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Adventure, Angst, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 146911 Read Count: 34460
[Report This] Published: Oct 05, 2013 Updated: Aug 21, 2014
Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Characters

I'm just enjoying all of the fuckery that's going on right now because I don't know how to feel, lol. I'm so conflicted!! Karma's gonna come around ten-fold for Michael and Diana, and I am here for it!!

Author's Response:

Lol, fuckery indeed lol. It will be interesting to see what happens, really interesting.

Summary:

https://40.media.tumblr.com/4ebc783d984c6a5b9b82105c2647ca88/tumblr_noyov8rH471soe38io2_1280.png

"The day you came inside, I felt band new."
"So what am I to do now?"

We all know 1993 wasn't the best year for Michael, and the same could be said for Lena. When the love of her life, and father of her twins, walks out on her with no excues, she's left to pick up the pieces of her shattered world alone. That is, until she befriends Michael.

__ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __ _ __

Thank you guys for the 2000+ views & 50+ review I know it's not much but I do appreciate the love, even from you silent readers, thank you :)


Categories: Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42408 Read Count: 7467
[Report This] Published: Dec 27, 2013 Updated: Jan 16, 2016
Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed
Date: Dec 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Damn Jay what made you do that? Has to be another girl on the side.

I am loving this so far!

Author's Response:

I would tell you what made Jay leave but spoilers lol but I am really glad you like it.

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I like how Michael's kind of like apart of Lena's little family. And she has a crush on him! It was bound to happen.

Author's Response:

Yeah all of them are getting attached to eachother fast lol and of course it was no one can resist those eyes :)