Penname: CoconutDevon14 [Contact] Real name: Chriss
Member Since: Sep 25, 2014
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I live in Central America, i absolutely adore MJ and i do not aspire to be an author caz im a terrible writer who's addicted to sleep.


Beta-reader: Yes
Gender: female
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Reviews by CoconutDevon14
My Bully by AtMJsHouse Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 699]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Yahara

 

 

Yahara has always been a nerd in school. She has had many bullys and being teased is nothing new. But when she goes off to college she and her life starts to turn for the worst. Especially with the bully of all bullys picking with her. What happens when Yahara begins to fall in love with her bully? Will he love her back? Will it work between them?


Categories: Humor, Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 121316 Read Count: 164229
[Report This] Published: Aug 02, 2011 Updated: Nov 07, 2013
Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed
Date: Oct 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

PlZ continue thats all i ask... this mystery is really interesting...must.know..who...it is!!!love what chu doin. UPDATE.

You and I by AtMJsHouse Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

 

Jayden and Michael were inseprable as children. They grew up together in a foster home and had many stories to tell about it. But once they were seperated as teeanagers, they went their seperate ways and lived two completely different lives. So what happens when they coincidentally run in to each other? Will they be too different to remain as close as they were before. Read and see for yourself! =P


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32887 Read Count: 13860
[Report This] Published: Nov 01, 2011 Updated: Apr 09, 2013
Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed
Date: Oct 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I hope you still plan on updating this...constantly...even if it takes forever. This michael is really shy, to be honest just as shy as me so i think i can relate to tha brotha's struggles. And i see Jay just as aggressive as he does, but she needs to calm down and appreciate his humble gentleness. Doesnt have to be long but i hope you can atleast finish this story.  You and michaelfan90 stories are my faves and you never disappoint me.



Author's Response:

Thank you! XOXO

Summary:

 

 

 

Join Rayne and Michael on this crazy journey of love, happiness, deceit, and pain.


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Adult, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29170 Read Count: 7907
[Report This] Published: Mar 27, 2012 Updated: Jun 20, 2013
Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed
Date: Nov 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Rain is as funny as hell with all dat dancing and singing and stuff....lol had me in tears..

Summary:

Melissa Clark has grown up in DC all her life. That is the nice part of DC, where the wealth s to be exact. She’s very dainty and has class. A hard worker and a daddy’s girl. In the past she has dated lawyers and doctors. Nothing lower than Middle class. Michael Jackson has grown up in DC all of his life. But in the rough areas of DC. Areas that label the District for having one of the highest crime rates in the nation. Michael is a drug dealing, weed smoking, molt liquor drinking bad ass. The two end up meeting and from there a love blossoms that neither expected. A love that no one likes nor understand.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 112430 Read Count: 66467
[Report This] Published: Mar 30, 2012 Updated: Mar 16, 2014
Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Lol..oh gosh that thing you did with mike and meme at the end..tbat ishs was funny..mein i swear your my fav author.



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

Summary:

Skyler was a small time girl who landed a job at a new york bank. One day her whole world changed. It was the day she met F.B.I's most wanted. Michael Jackson

WARNING! THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE AND GRAPHIC SITUATIONS.  

THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH FOR GIVING US OVER 600 REVIEWS! WE ARE SO GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS STORY. YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 145091 Read Count: 134091
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2012 Updated: May 11, 2016
Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 The Wedding Part 1

awesome chapter... (*and now my tedious and painful wait for the next chapter continues*)

Summary:

Set in the era of Thriller / Bad Era, Michael has just moved out of Hayvenhurst and meets an unlikely friend in Jade Riley, an employee at the Beverly Hills Hilton. Even though, they get off to a rocky start, Michael starts to learn about friendship, love, and committment with some major hiccups along the way. 


Categories: Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 196922 Read Count: 364374
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2013 Updated: Aug 23, 2015
Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 21, 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

What Jade said is true. She needs to start getting active again. In order to recuperate properly she needs to exercise her muscles and get back into her routines. I know Michael thinks he's helping her by saving her the trouble of doing exactly what she needs to. But I can see also where he is coming from, Jade needs to realize too much solitude and indifference are not the ideal conditions for healing. They need to talk things out cause her hostility and Michael's inability to be perceiving will lead to nastier confrontations. 

Thank you and update.

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Date: Jul 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I'm pleased by Joseph's judgement & acceptance, and it's very clear that Michael is too.

 

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol, how he poked his head in questioning the almost odd exhibition of exchange between Jade and Katherine.

Nothing to say really but for you to keep up the awesomeness and update please.

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

This chapter just left me feeling depressed. If Jade doesn't make it, though I hope she does, Mike would just Break. Hoo! all this gloomines. Bleakness, I can't take it, the storm needs to be over soon. Cause everyone's needs a ray of that sunshine.

Other than that I'm at a loss for words.

thank you and update.



Author's Response:

Thanks coco. Youll find out soon enough :) 

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

The storm has passed. I'm feeling that sunshine and good vibes.

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Finally in the comforts of her own home. I'm so relieved for her cause she would've become unbearably cranky and chewed everyone's head off for checking up on her. As we can see the crankiness is starting to target Michael, but it's all for the Love, man.

Thank you annnnnnnnnd!....... *whispers* update.



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you! 

Id be so pissed off in her situation.

An update is on the way, promise :)

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I love how her relationship with Gabby is blossoming.

This chapter was amazing, wow Imagine that feeling of finding The dress.

Thank you and update.

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Jade must be terrified, I can't even bear the image of Open Heart Surgery. The chances of things not working out even if they are slim. That must the scariest thing ever. And will they gain back whatever normalcy they had prior. Ugh! Why, why now?! Things were just fine *sigh* hopefully they are gonna make it through this, they just have to.

Thank you and update.

 

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

It really was considerate of MJ to ask her Dad before he did pull a perfectly planned and executed "stunt" like that. And lol She almost barfed on his shoes, wouldn't the press just eat that up.

 

At least she's getting along with everyone (except Joseph) so far, great job thank you.

Reviewer: CoconutDevon14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 22, 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This was a very good chapter. I Honestly can relate to Jade's insecurities. From the first chapter I was like is this girl writing a fictional tale or a close resemblance to my life story?I am definitely stubborn like her but not as fiesty, bitchy or sarcastic like her since I TRY to make an effort to be as NICE as possible. But IF I kept it raw and non sugar coated,  just like Jade I'd probably only have one loyal friend who puts up with my crap.



Author's Response:

Haha, Jade was originally written based on MY personality, but if others can relate than fantastic. Shes an attitude little bitch, but thats totally me lol. Ive grown up a lot in the ten yrs its been since I've written this, but Jade is still essentially me. Same as me, I also only have a few loyal friends :)