Penname: Foolsumflesh [Contact] Real name: Rose
Member Since: Oct 11, 2010
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Co-Workers by Gigi Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 226]
Summary:

Nicole is in love with Michael. He's in love with her. But they're Co-Workers.

 

*** SEQUEL UP NOW, and CURRENTLY UNDER REVISION IN 2017**


Categories: Adult, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103373 Read Count: 41676
[Report This] Published: Aug 16, 2010 Updated: May 20, 2011
Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Dec 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Making His Move

*Squeal* Soo cute! :D I loooove this

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Date: Dec 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Car Ride

I love, love, love!!! This is great, its cute how Quincy keeps teasing him about liking her

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Date: Dec 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The Makeup

Oh snap! Michael, Michael, that bad booy x3

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Date: Dec 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Crossing That Line

Oooh snap. I never understood why he changes so frequently like that. Almost like a light switch. he loves you, he hates you, he loves you, hes upset with you, loves you, then ignores you. Gah its hard to keep up with but I really like this :3

Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Dec 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Is it Over?

I'm sorry to say, but I have the strongest urge to punch him in the face. Gah, I don't get this man. He's driving me nuts and all of this chaos, I couldn't handle it. She's obviously determind to keep his attention and make him realize their relationship. Hope it works out, if not. His loss

Summary:

A Fictionalized Biographical Love Story

Disclaimer: This story is based on some true events. 

Michael meets a dancer and a 22 year love affair begins; but its not the typical happy romance.

                                                  ********NEW CHAPTER 2017******

Included Author's Note and Special Thanks at end.


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 127 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 386192 Read Count: 127734
[Report This] Published: Aug 25, 2010 Updated: Mar 03, 2019
Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Dec 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 49: A One Night Stand

This was absolutely amazing!! I knew they both felt the same way about eachother because they once had a very fulfilling life and daughter. But once that ended they fell a part but it seems like major events tend to bring them closer no matter what. They are soulmates and always will be :3

 

Oh you could always read mine :3 Ones a horror and the romantic lol feel free to read

Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Jan 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 55: The Conversation

Awwww! This is the best chapter ever :DDD

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Date: Dec 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Katherine's Phone Call

Awwww! Finally she's come to her senses :D

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Date: Dec 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Paris Jackson's Birthday

Even though they didn't have Layla together, she'll always be the glue that holds them together no matter what. I just hope things do work out, but it just seems like one big game of cat and mouse lol



Author's Response:

It really is one big game lol  And you're right about Laya- they will always come together because of her. :)

Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Dec 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Time To Move On

Awww I knew that was going to happen. I still don't understand how they could have any sexual relations if they're so distant and have other people in their lives.

I still really enjoy reading :3

Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Dec 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 48: "I'm Still In love"

Oh no! All his dreams and hopes of them getting married is now desheveled ;-;



Author's Response:

Not so soon....

Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Nov 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity

Oh my god! I'm soo happy you continued to keep writing. This is my ultimate favorite story hands down :3

I knew that jerk-face Maurice was cheating on her > < and glad she divorced him. But it seems like Michael wants things to go back where they left off, wanting a relationship wiith her right away. He needs to understand that it doesn't work like that, she needs time to heal emotionally as well as physically. So he needs to buck up and be a man, put his child-likeness aside for a while if he intends on having a decent friendship. Especially for the little one :D

Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity

Holy crud what happened. Just this past weekend you had like a new section up and it disappeared. I was in the midsts of reading it and then when I came back on it was gone :(



Author's Response:

I have no clue. I contacted Admin, but no one has gotten back to me. I am angry about it, and I considering reposting everything but...i'm afarid it might get removed again (For what, I don't know!!!!) 

so hopefully soon, i'll get a response back and get those chapters as well as my new ones up. :)

Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Paris-Michael

My favorite parts are always when Michelle and Michael are getting along and flirting and my least favorite is when they're fighting and people keep getting in their way



Author's Response:

Thank you for your input. :)   And yes, I love writing those scenes when they're flirting. It's always some of my favorite scenes to write. lol

Reviewer: Foolsumflesh Signed
Date: Oct 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Once In A Lifetime Opportunity

You really, really gotta keeping going with this story! I'm completely sucked in!

I don't know if this was your intention, but I kinda sensed that Maurince and Lisa might be messing around. I mean come on, they both end up going to the bathroom and she was druink. Thats what I got.

Yes Michael hasn't always been there for her and broke things off over the most trival things it seems like but she has too. Its like deep down she still truly does love him and same goes for him.