Penname: Gottobethere [Contact] Real name: Bianca
Member Since: Oct 08, 2010
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Age: 21+
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Summary:

This story takes place in the eighties. Starting in 1981.

Tinsley Jones is a beautiful, young make-up artist who has always been a huge Michael Jackson fan and she lives a lonely life in New York, until she becomes friends with the famous Diana Ross. Despite all the luxury, being friends with a beautiful, charming superstar isn't always easy.

Michael Jackson is aware of that since he is friends with Diana as well, but he is actually helplessly in love with her. And Diana's manipulation isn't making it easy to get over her and go on with his lonely life.

But maybe Diana could bring their two lonely hearts together unexpectedly. And even if so; will they both ever be free from Diana's manipulations and realize that they might make each other happy, without her?


Categories: Romance, Suspense, Adult
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 196162 Read Count: 31420
[Report This] Published: Aug 08, 2010 Updated: Jul 29, 2011
Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Yaaay!! Tinsley and Michael are finally engaged!! ;D
Oh I'm so happy, it was sooo beautiful!!
And Mike's song For All Time is absolutely perfect for them! Wow!
I'm speechless right now.. they are just the PERFECT couple!

Robyn's wedding was quite something, though .lol
but then again, so is she and her mother xD
I'm also reeeeally glad that Tins and Mike made up!
It all sort of became clear in this chapter, all the drama iin the previous one..
Wow, I hope they'll find that guy and lock him up real soon!

Update soon sugar
You know you're killing us when you make us wait ;P

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Date: Jan 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Yay! Updates updates UPDATES! ;D

Yes, I know, I obsessed ;p

Can't wait to know what's gonna happen next!

Hopefully Tins will get her weight undr control again xx

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Date: Jan 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I really loved this chapter, it was very well-written!

And a lot happened! I can't believe Michael got in touch with her father! that's crazy! she hasn't seen him since she was 4 years old!

God, I hope everything is gonna turn out fine and they're gonna find a way to work on their relationship while they're alone together, at last!

and Michael's speaking to Diana again? Hmm.. Hope there won't be any drama unfolding there soon!

This is so exciting! I can't wait to read what's next! xxx

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh my Goood I loved every word you wrote ;D

I loooove tis story so much, i just can't describe it!

It's everything! How you write it, how well you think all this through, how everything always seems to fit

And it's so human, too.. I really keep getting the feeling as if this is all based on a true life story ;p

I wish Michael would've found someone like Tinsley in real life, they are the PERFECT Couple!

But I hope they'll make love again because those chapters get me melting every single time! I'm so addicted xD

Please update soon ;)

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow that was so damn awesome! I must have read this chapter at least four times in a row xD

AMAZING JOB girlie! You know just how to keep me hanging and craving for mooore ;P
Can't wait for the next one, once again ...
Not only was this thing hot as hell, but it's also very sweet how Tins' father thanked Michael for everything and how well everyone is getting along like a real family.
I find that so beautiful!

And now Michael kinda-proposed to Tinsley!
Damn this really just made my day! Thanx :)

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Date: Feb 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh nooo!! How aweful that Mike needs to get back to work already!! I hate Frank and his dad
But I hate Helen even more! Ugh, what is up with her thinking she knows it all best?
She has no idea how much Michael and Tinsley have been through together so she has to keep her bitch ass out of their business!
And that woman is gonna be a grandmother soon..
Anyhow, loved the update and the cute moments between Tins and Mike! They're so cute together! I love it!

Update soon xx

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Date: Feb 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Wow, that sure was interesting xD
Diana is a bitch though, I'm so done with her always trying to come in between Mike and Tins and getting on everybody's nerve!
She has no damn idea what she's talking about!
I'm glad Tinsley punched her, she needed that badly! but it was funny as hell, though .LOL
And yes, Michael getting all angry sure was sexy, hhaha, but I hate Tinsley's mom!!
All these bitches really have to get offa their case..
Greeeat update, I'm already waiting eagerly for the next one xx

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh my gosh, that sure was interesting
so much happening in one chapter! which is a good thing, though :D
I wonder what that phonecall in the beginning was all about and Michael getting all angry and rough, WOW
I can understand him though. Curious to find out what that magazine thing was all about..
And yes I also thought the angry sex thing was hot xD
Great writing and update, can't wait to find out more x

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Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

YAY! FINALLY an update to this story! I missed it SO Much!
Aw, poor Tinsley and Michael that she has pre-eclampsia!
I know somebody who had that too when she was pregnant with twins..
I hope they'll be fine though ;(
Anyhow, LOVED the update, hoping for a next one already!

P.S: I also love the new pictures x

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my god I am so in LOVE with your story!!! I just created an account just so I could review on this and let you know just how much I love it. You are a very talented writer!!! I could tell when I first read this story from chapter 1 that this was a wonderful story that had really only just begun, and for the first time EVER xD I was right! But this thing just gets better and better..

Keep up the wonderful work, it's my addiction! xd

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Date: Jul 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Oh my God! I'm so happy you updated to this story again!
I rly missed it! And the classic, wonderful dose of drama..
Cause DAMN! Stephan and Diana r both back and Mike isn't around to save the light of day??..
Trouble!! As for his brothers talking him into going out..I'm afraid the hormones might cause even more drama in the nearby future.
Oh God Mike has to end the tour and come home to his woman Quick! lolz
Update soon xxx

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Date: Jun 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Lovely update, girl!
A lot of fun to read how Michael got all worked up and frantic when talkin to Jermaine in the dressing room xD
I could totally picture that too..he is just Too cute ;)
But Diana..ugh..I don't know what to think of her. I really dont!
I hope she's being genuine this time, I mean after all she Is giving Tinsley her Wedding Dress!! but it's hard to tell if there's more behind it or not..
I'm already waiting for the next update girl! Can't wait to see how this continues.
Cause I sense some more DRAMA bubbling back to the surface ;p

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Date: Mar 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Uh-ho, I smell trouble there..
It's true that Tinsley needs to trust her man and his people..
And if it turns out that Brooke is in fact the brain behind all this, I hope she gets punished, REAL GOOD! ;p
No but seriously, she's caused enough damage already and now that Michael and Tinsley are finally happy and doing well,
she really needs to stay the HELL out of it!
And LOL on Liam trying to moonwalk and dance like Michael xD

Keep up with this story girl, I LOVE it so much!
& the tribute to Liz was very beautiful nd touching x

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Date: Mar 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I loved every second of it.. This was a great chapter for them!
Michael was adorable in the pool, especially when he was bonding wit the baby, that gave me chills ;p
And about Brooke Shields, that bitch better stay out of it this time! Mike and Tinsley are doing so well now
She better not scres it up now or 4ma kick some ass x)
And her friends and Michael's brothers were just a hoot..
Don't even get me started about the ending, though
I had to die laughing when I read that.. It was too cute nd funny
Update Soon girl!! I can't get enough of this story x

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Date: Oct 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

The cutest thing I've ever read! I could easily imagine this happening in real life too.. it just seems so real! Oh, what more can I say? I LOVE it, once again ;D