Penname: BabyGirl123 [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: May 25, 2014
Membership status: Member
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If you read my stories please leave a review I put  a lot of work in my stories and I answer to every review 


 


 


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Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Reviews by BabyGirl123
Summary:

Michael always had a Fear of Flying. While on a business trip something goes drastically wrong while flying on a commercial airline throwing two complete strangers together sealing their fate forever.

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Categories: Award Winning, Invincible: 2000-2003, Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Drug Abuse
Series: Fear of...series
Chapters: 112 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 371836 Read Count: 59798
[Report This] Published: Feb 02, 2014 Updated: Aug 29, 2014
Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 118

Oh my 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 108 you may kiss the bride

Beautiful 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 109

It's beautiful the moment they had to remember those who didn't make it 

And a beautiful speech about everyone who mean so much to them 

Looking forward to next chapter 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 110

Lol  I was like no she didn't and then there was whinnie the pooh your  a genius with those humorous moments 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 111

This was funny loved it

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2014 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 112

Great chapter loved it 



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 113

Lol can't wait for that night im sure it's fun only hope the staff ain't coming because of the noise they gonna make ;)

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 05, 2014 Title: FEAR OF FLYING

So romantic love this story more and more (definitely my favorite story on this site,  maybe because its the first one I read when I came back to this page after a long time) 



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 115

Awww there goes the romantic cookies with milk moment 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 116

Uh huh mr captain shut up you know nothing about them 

Aww feel sorry for her being sea sick 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 117

Can't wait to see/read what happens next 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 127

Awww *hugs* 

It's beautiful to see you don't just stop after the other chapter but really go on and capture those emotions of grieving proces and  different way of how people react on it 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 127

So sad and beautiful at same time *tears in my eyes* 

 



Author's Response:

Honestly, I cried writing the last two chapters so you aren't alone

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 126 tragic ending

You're welcome 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed
Date: Jul 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 126 tragic ending

Im not getting hateful because that's not who I am I look at the big picture and of course it's really sad but you are the writer you deside what happens

I do understand those others but come on don't be so hateful its a story not a real life thing saying you hate the author that's a personal attack you could have say in a different way like you  wanted a different ending but again it's the writers decision 

By the way looking forward to the sequel of this one and  it still will be my favourite story with or without Mandy because you did a wonderful job hope those hateful reviews wont make you stop writing 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks I appreciate it a lot