Penname: Susie [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: Mar 23, 2014
Membership status: Member
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Gender: Female
Age: 16-18
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Reviews by Susie
Summary:

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He just needed someone to talk to...


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Drug Abuse, Physical Abuse, Rape, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28543 Read Count: 6395
[Report This] Published: Jun 26, 2014 Updated: Jun 04, 2019
Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I like this so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you Susie!! 

Royals by BluJayWay Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary:

It's 1984 and Michael Jackson is on top of the world...

But newcomer Destiny is right behind him. Her vocal and dance skills have shot her to a level that has surpassed Prince and Madonna, threatening to knock him off of his throne and sparking a rivalry between the two-at least in his mind. When they meet at The Grammy's, Michael is taken aback by her genuinely sweet nature, not to mention her talent and striking beauty. However, as their friendship develops, heartbreaking details about her past come to the surface and Michael makes it his personal mission to help her heal and know the meaning of true love-and heals his own wounds in the process.

Michael and Destiny:


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Adult, Trigger Warning!, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Anorexia, Emotional Abuse, Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26265 Read Count: 15379
[Report This] Published: Jul 06, 2014 Updated: Feb 03, 2015
Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm, I wonder what the beginning part was about? I guess we'll see soon. But I love Destiny, she's adorable, such a sweetie pie. The Jackson's + her on tour will be great!

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 06, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it so far!

Inked by TutThreeSevens Rated: MA starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 360]
Summary:

Michael Jackson became the biggest super star on the planet with his music.  What happens when he desides to walk away from it and tackle his other passion?  He meets a young tattoo apprentice and the chase ensues...Will it be love or pure regret?

•Warning:Strong Sexual Content and language.•

This is an AU story.  The timeline of Michael's success has been altered to fit the story.  This is all a work of fiction.

 

award winner


Categories: Award Winning, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 152372 Read Count: 29071
[Report This] Published: Aug 25, 2014 Updated: May 15, 2015
Reviewer: Susie Signed
Date: Mar 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 40: My All In Matrimony...Just Married...

Mrs. Jackson wjsjfjajejfnsjwj im screaming!!!

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Uhm...I Don't Think So...

I'm so glad I finally got to catch up! I've missed these two and this story just gets better and better. If this story is going to end the way I feel like it is, I know you're going to write it beautifully; you're such a great writer. I can't wait for Michael to propose, their love just keeps getting stronger and stronger.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!  Yaayyyyyy I'm happy you got to catch up too.  Still teatering on the edge as to how I'm going to end it all.  I know their love is unbreakable with them being strong for each other.  I'll be updating soon!! <333

Reviewer: Susie Signed
Date: Oct 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Inked-Let Me introduce my self...

Just leaving this review to let you know that I have been fiending to read this freakinng story but the struggle of not having internet is real(I don't like to start a story if I can't properly follow it). As soon as I get my phone service back on, I'm reading this all in one day 😩



Author's Response:

I'm looking forward to when you get to start reading hun.  I hope it will be entertaining for you.  You know I'm all over your stories boo.  Just come on in whenever you get the chance. <333

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Just Another Love TKO...

I came up with a theme song for this story...it's Already Taken by Trey Songz lol. This chapter.....this damn chapter....Michael is too sexy in this story. Pen finally took him off probation they're about to be humping day and night like horny teenagers 😩😩😩😩😩 help us Lord the cold showers will be REAL. Lmaooo great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Bb.  Yessssssss these two going to be going at it.  But the drama will ensue :((((( OMG that song is perfect for the story.  He don't want to be a player no more.  SPRUNG!!!!  Thank you for reading again hun. <333

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Plain Plane Plans...

This chapter was hilarious lol I've missed this story and yes I'm reading from the beginning while writing ETUB1 so it's taking me a while. Goodness I love these two😩

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Film And Momentary Satiation...

Uh uh! How are you gonna just put up a story this good and think it's okay?! This story is greattttt! Took me a few days to read all together but it's so good I didn't mind. I always know a story is good if I think about the characters at random times like in school when I'm supposed to be paying attention in class or something and I definitely did. Also, I love a story where the female lead is memorable and likable. That's definitely Pen. I love how your characters have personality and your description is sooo good that I can literally picture everything that's happening (#GOALS!). The sex scenes...good LORD the sex scenes are deliciously descriptive. I barely ever actually look forward to sex scenes or should I say I can barely ever say they're one of the best aspects of a story/books but this story right here..it. is. one. of. THE. best. aspects. Like damn, who did you learn from? Lmao. No but seriously there's a 100 things–big and small–I could  list that I love about this story (especially the humor. I actually laughed out loud more times that I should have in more public places than I should have 😩 looking like a lunatic Lmao!). You're a great writer. There's about a handful of authors on this site who add true FLAVOR and STYLE to their writing (I would be shady and name them, but no nooo no shade *nicki voice*) and you are definitely one of them. LOVE it! 



Author's Response:

I don't even know where to begn to thank you for the monumental compliments you paid me in your review!!! THANK YOU!!! Thank you so much it means alot to hear YOU say that seeing how I'm a fiend for Mike and Nikki. LAWDDDDD!!!  I always like to put a little of my personality into the stories I write and humor is a big part of who I am.  I love to laugh and make people laugh and I'm easy going and laid back.  As for the sex scenes those come from my dirty , dirty mind LMAOOOOOO My imagination due to experience takes me places especially when it comes to the BAE These are the things on some level or the other we wish we could have accomplished with MJ...Personally LOL.  I'm happy you enjoyed it.  And thank you again for the kind words. <333 ;)))  you make me feel like------>

Reviewer: Susie Signed
Date: Mar 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 48: It Was All A Dream...I Use To Read Word Up Magazine...

*lets out breath* we ain't friends no more! Lol great chapter!!!

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 39: My All In Matrimony...

You did an amazing job with the marriage certificate! This chapter was awesome, you are the GOAT!

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 52: Family Life...All In...

Okay ... so much I want to comment on. Tut, thank you! For sharing this beautiful piece of your imagination with us. This story and its characters will forever stick with me! So memorable! You are the GOAT and don't you forget it. Inked is officially a masterpiece. Bravo!

Reviewer: Susie Signed
Date: Mar 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Crossing The Line...And Getting The Boot...

NOOooOoooOoooOooo !!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Falling Down...

HOLD THE HECK UP

Reviewer: Susie Signed
Date: Mar 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Crossing The Line...Made It Home Safe...

Lmao! At first I thought the puking was a side affect of all the meds and her condition but as I got to the middle of this chapter I was like .. my baby is pregnant! 😂😂😂