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When Michael is admitted in a private detox clinic, he can't help noticing the girl who runs in the back yard all night long, fighting off sleep in any way she can.
For Jamie life was a happy hike on the mountain trails, camping and trekking, until one day changes her forever. What secret does she keep? Why is she afraid to go to sleep?
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This story was requested by my good friend Jamie (Lovergirl95). Jamie, I hope you like this!
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114569 Read Count: 25230
Date: Aug 27, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Would you like me to place the images side by side? The same rules still apply
LAST CHAPTER : Epilogue
All good things come to an end and this is the end of Liberian Girl. First of all, I want to thank my wonderful reviewers and my constant readers for helping me reaching +10000 views! It's all thanks to you PYTs! And, I want to apologize to the ones who were reading the PART 3. I deleted the last chapters because I didn't feel like continuing this story. I think Beverly and Michael went through a lot and now they deserve this ending lol. Once again, thank you all for your support!
xoxox Annie :)
"Naku Penda pia, Naku Taka pia, Mpenziwe!"
Whatever Michael Jackson wants, Michael Jackson gets. It has always been the case since he was a kid. When he meets Beverly Johnson in a hotel in Los Angeles, he sees in her the perfect Liberian Girl. He wants her and he is determined to have her in his short film and maybe more… Who knows?
Beverly Johnson, let’s call her BJ, is a 23 years old model from New York trying to conquer the fashion world. If there's a will, there's a way she always says. When her modeling journey started she was ready to go with flow and take life as it comes. She expected some unusual situations but certainly not crossing paths with the one and only Michael Jackson.
Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Humor, Romance, Song Fics
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83809 Read Count: 25094
Date: May 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I've now read all of your stories and enjoyed each of them. I'm also impressed by how much your English has improved! I can't imagine writing so much in another language. I loved your idea of writing this one from Michael's perspective. TBH, I think the best story of yours to rewrite from his perspective would be Shades of Truth.
I think my favorite moment in this one was when Beverly was presenting at the awards ceremony and pointed out Michael. That was hilarious!
Author's Response:
Hey Redone!
Sorry for responding that late. I'm literally one year late
I can't believe you read all of my stories, that's so sweet of you. I wish you would have finished correcting the typos before you did but thank you <3!! LOL! About Shades of Truth, I don't know if I want to write a sequel or re-write it in Michael's POV. Or maybe both? Write a sequel and have Michael's POV, reminiscing about how he felt while all of it was happenin? What do you think?
Once again thank you again for the support, I'm glad to have loyal reviewers like you. It makes me even more eager to write a chapter and see what you think about it. I now have to correct the typos on 'Twenty Foreplay' then I promise I'll get back to Little WHile Lies!
Love you
PS: This was my favorite thing about this story too lol! <3
Date: Apr 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
You should've seen my face when I got notified of your response. LOL.
I like the last idea - writing a sequel, but alternating perspectives and having Michael recall some of the scenes, from his perspective (obviously). I really liked when you started doing that in your trilogy. Alternatively, you could have "bonus" chapters that go back to scenes from the first SOT, but are in Michael's POV. I hope that makes sense.
Annie, thank you. SOT is what first got me interested in stories that weren't finished on here. You don't need to correct old typos...just keep moving forward. Unless you feel like you learn something from going back, that is.
(I wish that pic was taken at eye level, but he's still lookin' good)
Author's Response:
Heyy, look who"s responding 20 days later. Yup, that's me :/
Yes, it does make sense and that's what I wanted to do. But I still have to think about a plot and how it is going to to end first :)
Argh, I don't know. When I re-read my old stories, I cringe when I see tons of typos. It doesn't take a lot, just to re-read but I'm also so eager to post new chapters and read the feedback that I don't do it. If someone like you ever decide to read all of my stories, I think the least I can do is make sure it's intelligible. But I don't understand, the more time I waste on my old stories, the less I have on my new one. And I know you are waiting for Little White Lies :-)
Oh, te quiero tambien Redone. Significas tanto para mi <3
Thank you so much for your precious advices Redone :D
What happens when the one you let go, comes back into your life?
A Short-er story.
Categories: Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32951 Read Count: 2950
Date: Jan 10, 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Satellites
More, please! She needs to stay away from Martin and at the very least, write Michael a letter. It sounds like talking isn't helping, so maybe a form of communication that another person can't interrupt, is worth trying.....nothing good can come of Martin.
Date: Jan 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Disarray
Not taking her calls makes me wonder just how into her he is. He seems to want what he's missing, but when he isn't missing her and she's missing him, it's a different story. Pft.
Date: Dec 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Stay With Me
This is so good, please update soon!
Date: Dec 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Plunge
I'm melting. I love this story. My one gripe is that you skipped that period. I wanted to "watch" their first date!
Author's Response:
I know. I'm sorry. I wrote the first few chapters one day while I was bored. It just poured out of me and I summarized a lot of the story. It was suppose to be six chapters in all so I didn't put a lot of love into it in the beginning. It was suppose to be short and sweet. I'm thinking of expanding it a little longer now.
If you like long stories, check out some of my other stories; i'm kinda known for long chapters. Lol.
Date: Dec 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Lust
I love this story already. You are excellent at portraying interactions and creating tension.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I appreciate that. I'm glad you are enjoying the story!
Date: Dec 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Friendship
Great start! I'm hoping by shorter, you mean 100,000+ words ;)
HEY GUYS! This is the end of "Like a Moth a Flame..." I wanna thank my reviewers (iam_music, rhythmchild,vickiJ,Dri,Littleriarabbit,camilleainPYT, karoll84,femalien,MickeyJackielover... Sorry for the one I didn't mention but I love you too ) and readers. Thank you for the support and the love! Just like you Robyn and Michael have worn me out, just like you Prince made me laugh so hard and just like you I wish this story had more chapters... But yes, this is the end and I hope you will like the last chapter. The hardest to write... Much love to you all and thank again!!
She needed to pay her rent.
She chose the easy way.
To sell her body.
She did it once and promised herself that it would be the last time.
It was the only time.
She tried to erase this night from her memory.
She succeeded.
But she saw HIM again.
And this time he did not plan to let her go again.
Michael is not famous in this story
Categories: Adult, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62428 Read Count: 23601
Date: Dec 13, 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I'm obviously in withdrawal for an Annie update, so I'm reading past stories for the nth time. <3 them all
It was the best opportunity i'd ever have! I couldn't even believe this would happen so soon in my life!!!
The only problem is... him. In so many ways!!!!
Banner made by MJSHOTZWELL22!!! Much gratitude!!!
The story contains strong language at times!!!
(Michael isn't famous in this story!)
Categories: Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56741 Read Count: 14605
Date: Aug 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
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They wanted a baby.
I was pregnant.
All I had to do was to deliver the baby and give it to them.
All they had to do was to love and cherish the baby.
Unfortunately, there is always a but...
Baby father drama, break up, friendship, fame & love. Everything to turn my quiet and peaceful life into a incommensurable mess
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Lovers Rock
Chapters: 94 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 216303 Read Count: 71460
Date: Dec 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I'm rereading this story from the beginning - I love it that much <3
Victoria LeVaugh has done pretty well for herself as a former child actress. And generally, everyone she's grown up with in the business, she adores. Well, almost everyone. She grew up around Michael Jackson too, but the problem is, she's not too fond of him, and he's not too fond of her either. She finds him weird and full of himself, and he finds her to be an everlasting pain in his side. But can two long-time enemies become friends, or even something more? Find out in Passion's Insanity.
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 189400 Read Count: 21594
Date: Mar 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I just started reading. I love this chapter and their talk about the vitiligo. Please keep writing!
Author's Response:
Welcome aboard! And yeah it was definitely something that needed to be addressed. Thanks for reading and I will! ^_^
Set in the era of Thriller / Bad Era, Michael has just moved out of Hayvenhurst and meets an unlikely friend in Jade Riley, an employee at the Beverly Hills Hilton. Even though, they get off to a rocky start, Michael starts to learn about friendship, love, and committment with some major hiccups along the way.
Categories: Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 196922 Read Count: 367827
Date: Apr 16, 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I wonder how long he can keep this up before the recording industry gets on his back?
The interview was too cute!
Author's Response:
bit cheesy in hindsight! Cute none the less.