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I just simply love Michael Jackson; everything about him.
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Trinity lives an unfulfilled life as an outcast, under the ever so watchful eye of her strict father, who also happens to be the mayor of her town. But when her curiosity sends her to the eerie property of the mysterious and delightfully charismatic Maestro, her life is forever changed. And an entire world of magic and mystery opens up for her as her true destiny becomes revealed.. Join Trinity in the adventure of a lifetime as she deals with magic, destiny and love in this supernatural romance,
Let Them All Materialize!
Categories: HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Adventure, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Kidnapping, Physical Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 332835 Read Count: 40937
Date: Dec 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 20: And So It Begins
whoaa dude so much happened in this chapter. Finally, things are starting to heat up (not complaining about the long exposition; your writing is awesome no matter what).
Also, the Latin was really cool. Can you put like translations in the end notes though xD I'm really curious as to what they're saying.
Great chapter!! :D
Author's Response:
Yessssss and things will only progress further from here! And yes lol, I will put Latin translations in from here on out :D I'm glad you're enjoying the story! And yeah, it takes me forever to get to the juicy parts of a story lol. But nonetheless, if you like it then I'm happy! Thanks for reading! ^_^
Date: Dec 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Astoria
Just saw your new banner, holy hell that is awesome.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Man it was definitely time for a banner change lol. This new one is a lot more relevant to the story lol. Thanks for noticing! ^__^ <3
Date: Nov 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Doppelgänger
Finally caught myself up after such a long time @_@
This is by far the best Maestro story I've ever read. Keep it up! :D
Author's Response:
Lol I'm glad and thank you!! I try and put my all into this fic, especially since I know there aren't a lot of supernatural MJ fics to begin with lol
Date: Nov 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Friend?
Damn you and your cliffhangers T.T Now I gotta think about what the hell Kyle is, and how did Melody get the weird vibes yet Trinity didn't? (these are the questions that plague my mind)
Author's Response:
Lol I adore cliffhangers and add them in whenever I can lmfao. You'll get your questions answered soon. Thanks for reading! ^_^
Date: Dec 16, 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Keeping It A Secret
Lol poor Trinity, she hasn't even mastered her flying ability yet and then she gets another one xD
And what do you think is so wrong with this chapter? Sure, it was a little slow, but it had to cool down after trinity went through all that shit.
Author's Response:
lmfao ikr? the poor girl is already stressed. And I don't know, I just...thought it was shitty. But I think I wrote it when I wasn't that inspired. And yeah sometimes we all need a cool down chapter :)
Date: Jan 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Unexpected Assistance
You know, the thing I like most about your stories (or story, given that this is the one only I've read so far :P) is that there's a lot of dialogue, and the dialogue isn't staticky or bland. I prefer letting the dialogue tell the story, rather than a bunch of description.
And Maestro's dialogue is just flawless IMO. That elegant, older way of speaking (kinda like Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen. I used that because I forgot what that time period was called), yet still modern and not overly pretentious. Lol, I don't know how else to explain it, but you nailed it perfectly.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
This is probablyone of the best reviews I've read so far on my story :D I really appreciate it lol. I HATE writing long descriptions in a fic (and anyway I'm not good at it), so it's better for me to let the dialogue tell everything. And much easier lol. I thought hard about how I wanted Maestro to speak lol. I've seen a lot of movies and since he's from around the 16 or early 1700s, I knew he had to speak in a manner that was from that time, while still putting a modern twist on it since he is living in our time as an immortal in the story. But yeah, thanks so much for reading! His dialogue is flawless lmao. I love him too mcuh :P <3
Date: Jan 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 25: A New Ally
Lol, I totes called that Clara bear would make an appearance again, esp after Daniel started talking about a bad luck demon.
and I can't express how much I love the concept of the two different worlds, and how the children were transported there. Much like superman, but the first media that came to my mind was supernatural.
anyways, great chapter; can't wait for the next update (and if Clara doesnt get her ass kicked in the next chapter I'm gonna do it myself @-@)
Author's Response:
Yeah!! It's a lot like superman actually LOL! Well tbh, this story has elements from several other fantasy/supernatural stories/shows/comics ;D and lawd Clara is ridiculous but there was a reason she came back ;D thanks for reading! ^_^
Inspired by the Remember The Time Music video.
Queen Madara has never been happy as the wife of Pharaoh Rameses of Egypt. She wants to be with the man she has fallen in love with ever since she became of age, a mysterious Roman magician called the Gold Magician, who disappeared right after he confessed his love for her and the day before she would be married to the Pharaoh. Before he left, Madara only got his real name, Michael. When Michael returns as a performer for the royal palace, their love is reborn, but the Pharaoh is not pleased. How long could they last without being beheaded? All they have to do to keep their love alive is remember the time.
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Fantasy, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Challenges: Remember The Time Song Fic, Remember the Time Creative Corner!
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21832 Read Count: 3413
Date: Dec 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: The Royal Trap
Oh my god, I love this story xD You're a really talented writer.
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you.
Date: Dec 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: The Longing
Just watched frozen yesterday so I finally get all your references. Olaf is my favorite character besides Elsa xD.
gahh this story is so awesome @-@
Author's Response:
I love Frozen, too. I tried to get my best friend to see it but tickets were sold out. Better luck for next time. And thanks. I know, Olaf is the best.
The year is 3005. Most of the world is in ruins. What’s left of the previous century is rusting and almost completely underground. But one city still stands strong and proud. Metropolis, the gleaming city of the future. Here is where the Humans and Androids reside, but inside this great city brews a ferocious heat. As far back as the late twenty-first century, there has been a silent war going on. Androids were seen as nothing but mere savages, electric slaves to their society. The Humans, in their mind, are the advanced race and they hold control over the entire city. Androids are watched closely, and sought after if they break the rules. Cindi Mayweather, a young Android, and Michael Jackson, a Human, test their boundaries when the two decide to fall in love. Can their strong desire for one another outshine the fascism and tension that Metropolis has created?
Categories: Romance, Fantasy, Sci Fi
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9039 Read Count: 9798
Date: Nov 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Backwards Society
This is gonna be interesting; I can just feel it. Great chapter, and great concept for a story!
Author's Response:
Dude I always wanted to tell you that I think your stories are amazing!! Haha, but thank you, I hope you like it!!
Michael never ignores his fans, even after his death. So what happens when a fan visits his grave?
"I love you more, dear Anne."
Categories: Family
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 738 Read Count: 503
Date: Dec 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Aw god now I'm gonna start crying. But finally you started uploading your writing; I was so excited when it popped up in my inbox!
It's a great concept and you pulled it off beautifully. I caught a few minor things, though, like his death date (I feel bad for even bringing it up).
If you want, I can reread it and dive into a whole analysis of the story. It's short-not that that's a bad thing-so I think I can do it. But if I do it, then I want you to go through my stuff-critique it, point out dumb, awkward stuff that I wrote, the like.
And hey, don't ever say stuff like, 'Oh, the summary and the story sucks.' For one thing, that's not even true; this story was great.
Author's Response:
Really!? I can't believe it! My fav writer is really that excited!? OMG and sorry for not uploading anything earlier :( I just can't write prologues so....
...I CAN"T BELIEVE IT!!! HOW CAN I DO SOMETHING LIKE THIS D: thanks a lot for correcting :) but now I feel bad for Michael... :(
Really? Thank you so much :D I just love 'em critiques! But I'm not so good in critiquing people's stuff...so... :( but I'll try :D
And, THANK YOU AGAIN! :DD
Date: Dec 13, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Do you have an email I can send it to? I put the story on Evernote, screenshotted it on my iPad, and then wrote and underlined all over it on paint lol, so it's one big picture, and I doubt you want me to upload a critique onto this website for everyone to see.
You're just soo nice :D thank you!! And I'm so sorry for the late reply, laziness caught with me :( anyways, please don't laugh when you see my email address >.> I was really bored and as google suggeted the name, I took it...and it is (again, please don't laugh T.T ) P.S - And thanks again :D
Author's Response:
Nothing can compare with an exorcism. Especially one that's gone bad.
Categories: Horror
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4607 Read Count: 176
Date: Dec 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It's an interesting concept, although the chapter ended rather abruptly, even for a prologue. Make sure you stay in one tense, too; you jumped from present to past tense, and back again.
But like I said, interesting story, I'll be watching its progression :)
Author's Response:
TQ so much for your kind support and you put a very nice input for my grammar, I really appreciate it. Happy Reading
Date: Dec 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Great chapter (you're going to be sick of me saying that soon, but what else is there to say?); love the dialogue.
It's going great; you fixed the tense problem, but now it's the subject verb agreement (and I don't think I'm using the right term, but it's hard to explain otherwise. English is so confusing, isn't it.)
Since you're keeping the story in present tense, it should be "I cough." When it's the narrator speaking, you don't need to add an 's' after every action.
I starts to put it down on the table and Beeman quickly pulls the frayed rag away.
You can take out the 's' for Michael's action--I start to put it down--but keep beemans action the same. For other people, the 's' remains.
I don't know the actual terms or how to explain it correctly, but I hope it makes sense to you xP.
Author's Response:
Honestly, I'm so honored for your kind support, Jenna. Because you're one of the great author in this site and your stories, WOW..just WOW. I'm crazy about them especially for the truth, the purity. TQ for the correction :^)
Date: Jan 01, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Good chapter! Just make sure you watch for sentence fragments; it makes it kind of hard to follow what you're trying to convey. It'd also be nice if you could elaborate on who all of these characters are; you're kind of in the habit of introducing all these characters without any background.
you update really fast though, I'm impressed. Keep up the good work!
Ps. I read your response, you just made my day. I'm so glad you like my stories ^.^