Penname: Kbbird22 [Contact] Real name: Kirsten
Member Since: Aug 05, 2013
Membership status: Member
Bio:

My name is actually Kirsten.


I obviusly love writing.


I am a eccentric MJ fan, like seriously.


My stories are usually characters that used to be imaginary freinds or based of real people.


My age stays anonymous :3


I am an artist both musically and, well, art wise.


My favorite number is 2and color is blue


I've run out of things to say, so if there's anymore questions, my ask.fm is ask.fm/kbbird22


Gender: Female
Age: 16-18
Real Name: Kirsten Bonsu
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Never by MichaelManiac Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

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The world says they can NEVER be together, They say NEVER let them shoot us down. Farrah Sinclair is a 16 year old girl that has no say as to what happens in her life but one summer it is all changed when she decides to fall for a man of color. Set in a Civil Rights Era Gary, Indiana, Farrah's whole world is rocked when she meets Michael Jackson the smart, sweet,open minded and handsome gardener when he comes to live with the family for the summer.Over the summer they develop a romance. There's just one problem- Farrah's white and Michael's black and according to the world and their parents they can never be together.


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11535 Read Count: 18341
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2012 Updated: Jan 24, 2015
Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Close to you

Great writing! I could feel the emotions of the story, how farrah's momis a pain in the ass and her love for michael. Good rewrite.
Just want you to know, that not everything your writing is historically correct, especially if it's civil rights time.
By the way when you added the N-word, I almost flipped, beimg black and all.
Thanks for writing this story, not enough history fics on here ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! If you don't mind me asking, what is not historically correct? I would love to know so that I can correct my mistakes and use accurate facts in the future. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Summary:

 

                                                     Temptation.

 

                                                    

 

     Noun.

 

     Meaning: The state of being tempted especially by evil that lurks from within.

 

     Michael Jackson has just finished releasing his first solo album called Off The Wall and he is so happy about making it on top after it had sold millions of copies worldwide and even getting a golden record for all of his hard work and perseverance. But despite the fame, glamour, and fortune, he was very lonely and empty on both the inside and out and longs for a friend so, one night in the Autumn of 1979, he takes a walk in the park hoping to find that special someone only to run into a drug dealer who feels just as alone like Mike. They hit it off real good but as the days fly by, he starts to gain new feelings for the low lifer making his desire very tempting that he can't break away will he stop it or will it take over him completely?

 


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25544 Read Count: 12129
[Report This] Published: Apr 24, 2013 Updated: Aug 27, 2014
Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Nov 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 40. Part 2.

Are u going 2 continue this one?

Author's Response:

Yeah, don't worry I haven't forgotten about the fic just been busy lately and now doing college courses too. Look out for the next one hopefully this weekend.

Summary:


IN THE GARDEN

copyright: celestia

 


Categories: Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: In the garden - The next chapter
Chapters: 130 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 166239 Read Count: 70816
[Report This] Published: Aug 25, 2013 Updated: Apr 17, 2016
Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Amazing, as always.
But why, in your stories is Michael potrayed as effeminate?

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot. :)

Well it has sort of an easy explaination...

I want to bring forward and capture Michael's delicate and sympathetic qualities. (among others) cause I believe there are are very few stories out there that are portraying him as such. In a lot of fictions he's portrayed as the exact opposite, (manly and sort of churlish) and I believe that's very far from the actual truth. His body language was very effeminate, not saying those were his only characteristics, but it never came off a 'manly behavoir', at least in my point of view. By that I'm not saying he never acted masculine cause that's not the case. He obviously used that a lot in his music and dance.

And I thought I'd made him quite similiar to those basics, compared to my other story In infinite expression. where I wanted to pay attention to all of his gentle and unique tendencies (like wearing a fair amount of makeup, false lashes, being very self conscious about the way he looked, his childlike spirit, etc) as I feel that those things are often forgotten or ignored in stories.

Anyway.. hope you found my answer useable. :)

 

Summary:

 

 


Right in the alternate version of the King of Pop, Little Michael never had a happier childhood without his best friend, Nathan "Nate" Reed. But at age six, Nathan's family made a difference, and they officially separated. However, for loosing Nathan so long, Michael was able to make it to fame, with his brothers as the Jackson 5. In 1970, the two boys were reunited once more. Not only were they're bond was fixed, but a few years it became something more special. However, all relationships have their ups and downs.

WARNING: Homosexuality, sexual acts, violence, sensitive issues, rape, and transgender male pregnancy. You fans are likely to turn back if you like. Prequel is sure to come soon.

 

Credit given to djlancegirl of deviantart.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Romance, Slash, Trigger Warning!
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46737 Read Count: 12656
[Report This] Published: Nov 12, 2013 Updated: Feb 23, 2014
Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 10. Part 3.

Don't mean to be a downer but...
Sometjing bad's going to happen, right?

Author's Response:

Soon but not now thanks :)

Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 9. Part 4.

Amazing writing

Author's Response:

Thanks again.

Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 8. Part 3.

I appreciate your research!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Nov 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 8. Part 2.

Question!

Can this actually happen in real life, or is your imagination just that amazing?



Author's Response:

It can happen both ways ;) thank you so much!

Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Feb 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're back! I was just thinking about you last night too! Great chapter honeybuns!

PS It'd mean the world if you went and read and reviewed my stories. You were the first writer that i ever read stories from and I love your work. :3



Author's Response:

Thank you mam I most certainly will and thank you so much again :hug:

Summary:

FORMALLY TITLED: Insanity's Corner thumb


 

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"I ain't do sh*t! ...If anything, that Ni**a framed me!"

"Leave me alone! I'm tired of you messin' with me - Stop it-! STOP!"

"You ain't no friend of mine..."

"Annie... Are you okay?"

"Speechless..... That is how you make me feel..."

"You have never seen my face before.... You don't know me... Oh, no.

You will never see my face again.... You don't know me... Uh-oh!"

"So let the performance start.... HA!"

***Short Stories***

***Also, the Warnings might be off, depends on the story***


*** UPDATE ON 2/5/2014***

The End

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Categories: Adventure, Fantasy, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Song Fics, Lyrics
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Racism, Rape, Self-Harm, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5558 Read Count: 1138
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2013 Updated: Feb 05, 2014
Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Nov 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: The House of Undesirables

It reminds me of an evil and extreme mix of those monster high books. Awesome!

Author's Response:

Thankies! <333

Summary:

 

 


young

 

 

last

 

 

"My father is a much nicer person now. I think he realizes his children are everything. Without your family, you have nothing. He's a nice human being. At one time, we'd be horrified if he just showed up. We were scared to death. He turned out really well. I wish it wasn't so late."

 

- Michael Jackson, in an interview with USA Today, December 14, 2001

 


Categories: Angst, Family, Hurt/Comfort, Trigger Warning!
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2634 Read Count: 1066
[Report This] Published: Dec 22, 2013 Updated: Dec 22, 2013
Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Dec 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Father, Daddy

Amazing! Did all of this actually happen?

Author's Response:

Thanks! Joe jackso has never really spoken about his actions except that his discipline never went into "abuse." I do however know a little about the early twentieth century for blacks in America. In general, black parents have been more strict with their children due to the belief that they would need to be thick skinne to navigate the world they lived in. Trust me I understand. There were reports that Michael and his father were reconnecting at some point, although after the 2003 trial Michael completely secluded himself from most people, which may have included his family. It's sad really, that a father and son could have spent the rest of their years in peace, but instead....

I'm rambling. But thank you again for the review. :)

Summary:

Formerly Titled: Oh Dear...Nine of You?

In the not-so-far-off-future, a thirteen-year-old Stephanie Kisstern has been sent to a large mansion her great-grandmother owned in the countryside in order to escape the terrible electric nuclear bombs of WWIII.

Stephanie also has brought her entire MJ collection, inherited from her family and growing, just in case the young long-time fan has to stay in the mansion for the rest of her life, but she doubts that as she is anxious for the war to end soon.

The mansion is filled with everything, from internet, to lavish furniture, to even a mysterious store filled with beautiful things just a drive down the road. 

So what happens when nine dolls that look EXACTLY like Michael from all his years come to her in the mail?

A large amount of basically craziness and a lot of fun in general, that's what.

But things will get serious anytime soon as Steph and Thriller Era Michael eavesdrop on secret meetings throughout the large home...

A SHOUTOUT TO MIKAYLA JACKSON FOR MAKING THIS WONDERFUL COVER~ :D

A response to the challenge: I Got Mikey in the Mail! Rated PG for later chapters.


Categories: Adventure, Family, Fantasy, Humor, Sci Fi
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Challenges: I Got Mikey in the Mail!
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5418 Read Count: 5922
[Report This] Published: Dec 23, 2013 Updated: Jan 05, 2014
Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Love it! Please update soon.
By the way, the next chapter could be called wakey wakey ;)
This is my favoriye story right now.

Author's Response:

*SQUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* THIS IS YOUR FAVOURITE STORY?! GYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH IJHHAIJSDNFKCANOSDHCFKLASMCFANJSDFNVAKLDSBFACVJDSN.,NBAZDSFBVAZ,GVKAZXVK

Thanks. XD

To Belong by coostorydad Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Michael Jackson is at the height of his career. His new album, Thriller, is selling well, and his popularity has grown a significant amount.

Michael is grateful for his fame and adoring fans, but he's still unhappy. He's just a regular guy, but now one sees him as one, even his own family is a bit starstricken by him. 

On one of his outings, Michael meets a girl. A girl who makes him feel like he isn't just some star, but a real person. Someone who really likes him for him.

They're the best of friends, but as time goes on, Michael begins to develop some unexplainable feelings for her.


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9014 Read Count: 1285
[Report This] Published: Dec 28, 2013 Updated: Feb 10, 2014
Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Jan 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I personally think that If you put an adult scene in there, it will be to soon. I like the rate the story is going at, it seems good and steady for a good story. Nice job so far!

Summary:

Michael Jackson is a young man who has lost faith within his self. His mother has disappeared and his father abuses him in more ways than one. He puts on different 'masks' to protect him but doing that caused him to lose who he really is. He has lost his true self and can't find his way back.

Unique Parker has had a horrible past, always holding this guilt inside that has grown stronger throughout the years. She decides to move to California from NYC to get away from it all. She is lost, hurting and vows to never fall in again.

Will they ever find their way out? Will they do it together and find love on the way?

 

 

  • This story contains adult, abuse, violence, rape, strong language, romance 
  • Michael will become famous

 


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9335 Read Count: 855
[Report This] Published: Jan 10, 2014 Updated: Mar 15, 2014
Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is good i like it! Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much... I will post 2 chapters today 

Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Jan 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your a good writer, more people should rread this. Good work.

Reviewer: Kbbird22 Signed
Date: Mar 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

LOL Love this!