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All you ever wanted to know about an MJ Lover
I love writing about Michael Jackson. He is my inspiration and Muse. I love all aspects of the man his heart, his loving spirit, his talents and his energy. He was a beautiful person in everyway and very human. I love to explore the possibilities of Michael and my depiction of him may not suit everyone but it's all done in love with love.
©2014 Sugar Felice. All Rights Reserved. This story is a work of fiction. Any names, places, and other identifying features are used in a fictional manner, for entertainment purposes only and are in no way representative of actual events in the life of the entertainer Michael Jackson. This work may not be reproduced, copied, transmitted or stored without the expressed written permission of Sugar Felice. All images, songs and or song titles are copyrighted to their creators.
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Boy Meets Girl. Man meets Girl. What happens when battle lines are drawn in the quest for the affections of a mysterious woman from New Orleans?
*I suck at summaries. Dah well.
Categories: Angst, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 149061 Read Count: 12790
Date: Oct 30, 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10--Since Feeling is First
more plz
Dana Jones also known as DJ the most famous actress
Michael Jackson also known as MJ, King of pop, world's greatest entertainer ect.
Both started their career at a very young age
Both their pr teams came with the brilliant idea of getting them together as a couple
Not a bad idea you would think, but truth is they can't stand each other, according to the outside world they're Hollywood's most happy couple but as soon as the cameras dissappear they both have their own side of their apartment the only thing they share is their puppy Sparky
Will they ever going to like each other, or are they Fire and Ice forever?
Leave a review if you're reading, thank you
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Drama, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: MJ and DJ
Chapters: 108 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139141 Read Count: 12673
Date: Dec 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
interesting
Author's Response:
Thank you
Friendship, leads to love and lots of sex and drama. Follow Michael and Mona.
Banner needed I have pics...
Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Death, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 99259 Read Count: 7346
Date: Feb 17, 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
You seem to have great instincts and just for that, I will post the next chapter right now...Lets see what happens next.
Date: Apr 12, 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
It will change his life forever. Try reading The Golden Circle and see how his life continued.
We have all seen those stories that get no comments and those stories that regularly get a handful of comments per chapter. This series will focus on providing tips on how to be one of the latter, not the former!
Newest Segment: Developing Minor and Supporting Characters
Categories: Admin Only
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26875 Read Count: 107154
Date: May 27, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Formatting - It makes a big difference
ur number 2 was a complaint u posted in comments on my story. However when ur reading a book there is no huge spacing in between lines. I someone is getting tired they either need to take a break or the story is boring. If a reader doesnt ant to invest in what the author has to say they should discontinue reading the story like u did.
The content of my story is good and for u to commnt in such a way, if ur an admin is asking to lose writers, quqlity writers simply because they won't do a story ur way. these are novels not scripts... they are supposed to have paragraphs and "" quoatation marks....They indicate speech btw not line spacing1 thank u very much for being a downer insteadof uplifting writers.
Have a good day and get Redone.
Author's Response:
Yes, it does touch on the same suggestion I made for your story. When reading stories that have been published, you'll find that a new speaker = a new line. I'll touch on this more in my next update, but for now, the main point I'll make is that many (most?) readers will find (regardless of the time of day or their level of alertness) that including multiple speakers in a paragraph without starting a new one results in a "talking head syndrome". Characters in a scene begin talking, and after a bit, we lose track of who's talking, where they are, and what the characters are doing. It's essentially a scene of talking heads in white space. By creating a paragraph space you give the reader time to process what they are reading and who is speaking.
As the author, this is clearest to you as it began in your head. Without that time to process, this is much much less clear to the reader. Think of it as a gap of knowledge. When you start humming a song, you know what the song is because it is in your head. Others? Not so much. Maybe after a good spell of time, but not the way that you do. The same is true for each scene you write and each conversation you portray.
I'm sorry you thought I was a downer. I was trying to let you know that I, as a reader and reviewer, wanted to engage in your story but was being held back by something that I thought you as a writer might consider easily modifiable. A lot of writers ask for feedback and want to know what they can do to make their work better; I now know that you are only receptive to 100% kudos (as you are ignoring my compliment). It's responses like this that remind me why so many people lurk, read, and never speak up. It's the fear that if they so much as say something that doesn't involve full-on flattery, they will get attacked. It's an unfortunate tightrope.
Story #1 in the Seven Secrets Series
"Our souls mirror one another's eerily. Our demons dance with eachother sensually in our paradise with skies the color of hell-flames. We could either find our bliss together on the narrow path of hope, or dance deliriously down the wide open path of destruction."
The King of Pop has been the subject of Amber's Starr Esposito's intense passions since she was an awkward and excitable adolescent. Her obsession with the troubled, controversial mega star alienates her from the people around her until her destiny sweeps her up into a whirlwind of love, insanity and drama with the man of her dreams. It is a bizzare chain of events that brings them together, and they end up sharing deep secrets and intense intimacy. She can't believe her luck, but she wants to be more than his secret girlfriend. She longs to be his proper wife and although he loves and cares deeply for her, he knows she can't handle the paparazzi onslaught that will result if they reveal their secret to the public. But then again, things change . . .life happens . . .you never know . . .There can be no certainty of where the path they clear together will lead them, or of whether or not they will even survive each other along the way.
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Invincible: 2000-2003
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Attempted Suicide, Death, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Physical Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: Seven Secrets
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119597 Read Count: 11723
Date: Oct 26, 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Time To Go
I love ur story, it's unique. I love how complex Michael is here.
Author's Response:
Hey :) Thank you!
This story joins Michael on the cusp of the Dangerous tour. He hires an all female opening band called Sekmet and they go on the road. From the very beginning the drummer catches his eye and the chase begins. Adventures ensue from country to country bringing drama and intrigue. Will Mike be tamed by love or will his macho ways leave him alone in the end.
Disclaimer:This story is 100% fiction. There is no copyright infrinment intended.
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Adventure, Drama, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80154 Read Count: 12452
Date: Nov 11, 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Close Call... Come Away With Me
I have been enjoying the story, but o me Mike's language with her is still very rough. I mean if he cares and wants her around, why does he still talk to her in such a crass way? "Now come give Mikey a slice of that pie"? That's not romantic one bit. ijs
Author's Response:
He's still ruff around the edges because he has yet to succumb the fact that he has fallen for her. He still has a ways to go to that and you will want to hate him. Lol but just when you think he can't get any worse he gets that much better then his true self comes through. You will love him in he end I promise!! <333
Date: Nov 10, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Sweet Sweat
He is some HOT SHIT! Love him!
Author's Response:
He's something else for sure. <333
Date: Nov 10, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Ich Liebe Dich Mehr
Oh, I am loving this Mike! Hot sexy selfish and dickbrained! Keep him coming...(he may not be the only one) lol
Author's Response:
Heyyyyy thank you so much for checking out this story. Michael surely started out in full on man whore mode. Lmaoo. He's got a journey! <333
Meet Joan and Michael Jackson. To everyone their relationship seems perfect. From their whirlwind romance complete with excitement and adventure to their budding family, they seem to have it all. However, this perfect couple harbors dark secrets that could potentially destroy everything they hold dear.
Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, 1993-1994
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Financial Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17043 Read Count: 1780
Date: Nov 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A New Start
nice conflict. plz update soon
Author's Response:
i will, thanks for reading :)
Story #2 in the Seven Secrets Series
Prequel to And Secrets So Untold
Brilliant, beautiful, bi-curious megastar, Michael Jackson tells all like never before in this secret, confessional. His adventures and misadventures in love, his secret fears, unknown passions/partners and darkest emotions are revealed in his own words. He gives us what he's never given us before - his real secrets and his private life from his own perspective.
In this beautiful, emotional and humorous memior, Michael divulges his earliest sexual encounters and significant life events, his relationship with a Swedish male model and the dramatic reaction of both of their families.
The dizzying highs and painful lows portend to a fervent conclusion in which he finally meets his true soul mate. But nothing is ever over.
Categories: Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl, Original Guy
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Anorexia, Attempted Suicide, Child Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: Seven Secrets
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13516 Read Count: 1822
Date: Apr 29, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - A Prisoner Like Me
I love ur writing. please continue.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much <3