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 The Memoirs of Michael and Remi...

Michael meets Remi Blackwood, a librarian working part time at a childrens library.They both instantly hit it off, and soon become romantically involved.The timing of their relationship clashes with Michael's productions of short films,Dangerous tour preperations and other drama.Would Remi be able to handle the sudden fame and attention of being with Michael?

They would have to face the Madness In The Music...

 


Categories: Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 388981 Read Count: 95703
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2011 Updated: Jul 25, 2014
Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 108A

Remi needs to get her ass on a plane and be there for her husband. That man is going through hell right now and he needs all the support he can get. Yes, he 'raped' her but he needs help. Help him first, be mad at him later. 

I get that she's upset but she's being a shitty wife.

Whatever you do, PLEASE don't make them divorce and have him marry Elvis Marie. PLEASE. 



Author's Response:

ELVIS MARIE?????????

Nooooooooo I wasnt ready! 

Remi needs to be strong for this relationship to work. We know its hard an all with whats going on and everything, but without her then who does Michael have? And your right about him still needing help, despite what happened between them two on his bday night. 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gah she needs to tell Michael about the recording. WTF is wrong with her and her secretive ass? It's only going to backfire and he is going to become paranoid and stop trusting her. She needs to be up front and honest with him. She is his wife for goodness sakes. I was cringing as I was reading the last chapter because I can just see some kind of horrible, drama-filled situation coming out of her stupidity. I know it's coming and the fact that it could be avoided makes me want to teleport into the story and scream at Remi.



Author's Response:

Remi's behavior is just ...

You're absoultely right, she needs to tell him about the recording. She's honestly being a lil bitch for no reason and thats even my opinion of her right now lol. She needs to stop beinng secretive, to have a successful long marriage, its not good to keep secrets...well serious important ones from eachother, especially if the other person is involved somehow. Don't worry, Michael will find out, and when he does well...

 

 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 122

Poor Michael! At least now he has Remi there to support him. I hope he doesn't push her away and accepts the support.

Speaking of support........

I'm kinda shocked that Remi didn't strangle him with that bra. I'm glad she believed him cause it looked really bad, worse than what actually happened. That was mature of her. 

Why would Lisa leave it there? Didn't she notice her tits flopping around the rest of the day? That proves to me that she is nothing but a ho.



Author's Response:

Its terrible whats happening to him! Everything just seems to keep crumbling on him and its heartbreaking, lets hope he doesnt push her away but I think with the experience of almost losing her Michael's probably gonna stay tight on her and keep her close for support. 

And hahaha about Remi not strangling him, she should have! I know I would've LOL. Maybe she's just given up on arguing with him and now she just sought of expects these things to happen. I think it just comes from being with someone like him for a long time, she expects girls to throw themselves at him because he's Michael Jackson. It comes with the territory and her only choice is to trust and believe in him. Its very mature.

And LOOOOOOL at the Lisa comment. It was the 90s lol, girls were walking around without bras, it was weird but maybe she liked her tits hanging out lol. Or maybe she had a spare? who knows, but we know she left it there on purpose to get him in trouble, I'm waiting for the day when she's face to face with Remi again. 

;p xxx

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 121

That tattoo was a really sweet gesture of Remi I hope every time Michael sees it he remembers how fortunate he is to have her after nearly ruining the marriage. Remi had her fair share in it too but at the end of the day the things he did and the way he treated her was worse. He needs to make sure he never ever does that shit again. I am so glad to see him being happy again though! 



Author's Response:

Haha yeah the tattoo was really sweet, Michael definetly needs to do something bigger for her. Your right, he almost ruined the marriage and he's fortunate that she's even forgiven him for all he's done. She's definetly had her fair share but she was fast enough to own up to her mistakes unlike him, smh.

I'm sure Michael's learned the true value of his wife and lets hope he never does dumb shit like kissing women behind her back again. And girl I'm definetly happy with you!! its been waaay too long!

;p xxx

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 120

Awwwwww omg I'm so happy they had this breakthrough and are talking again. This story was getting too depressing. They were both hurting themselves and each other too much.

And that Bambi comment had me laughing my ass off. 



Author's Response:

Awwww I'm glad your happy again and yeah things were getting a lil tooooo depressing lol. I'm happy that they're together again and its good that they've both realised they were hurting eachother and themselves.

LOOOOL at you laughing at the Bambi comment, oh yeah Mike will tear her sh*t up LOL!!

;P xxx

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 118

If Michael wants to show Remi he's serious it is time for him to tell the slutbag (Lisa) to fuck off and go ruin a different marriage. As long as Lisa is still around Remi won't and shouldn't listen to him. He needs to cut her out completely, no more phone calls, visits, nothing. Yes he led her on but what kind of woman interferes in a marriage when it's obvious that the couple is having problems due to external forces? A no good one, that's what kind. If Michael gives that slag one more minute of his time it is disrespectful of his wife even beyond what he has already done. If I were Remi I would make him burn every peice of damn furniture in Neverland that Lisa sat on before I came back. Starting with the bed. 

At least Michael now recognizes how wrong he was and that Remi is serious in her ultimatum. The rest is up to him. 



Author's Response:

Hahahhahaha for you calling Lisa a slut bag!!!!! she really has to go away now, outside influences have caused enough trouble for these two, Lisa, Evan, these accusations all need to go. I actually like what you said about Remi not having to listen to Michael if Lisa's still there, thats obviously no respect for her and he really needs to get his priorties straight when it comes to relationships. 

Wait a minute you called Lisa a slag...

Lol at the British slang, and I absolutely agree that if he gives Lisa one more minute of time then its beyond rude. Hahaha at you saying she should burn down all the furniture at Neverland, I wouldnt be surprised if she did.

;p xxx

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 04, 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 119A

Glad to see that Michael is getting the help he needs. I feel badly for him, these allegations are destroying him completely. It's sad that it takes Liz to help him and not Remi, though that is partially his fault. I hope they can now start to mend their relationship. Remi did do a bunch of things wrong at the outset, she was being a shitty wife for a while. Then Michael took his turn being a shit husband, time for them to stop. They need to focus on Skye and their relationship.

He'd better get rid of Lisa. I noticed she wasn't in this chapter. Well, you already know my thoughts on her. I think I'll throw my computer at the wall if he ends up sleeping with her or keeping her around. Enough is enough. 

 



Author's Response:

Absolutely! Its so great that somebody has stepped into save him from his pain. The allegations are really heavying on him and its pretty much destroyed everything in sight except his spirit on stage. *sighs* I agree with you that although he wants Remi there, he pretty much left the door open for Elizabeth to help him instead of her. Both of them were shitty to eachother but hopefully in this interview Remi will let everything out and focus on strenghthening their relationship. 

And ahaha, yeaaah lets just hope Lisa doesn't come back again *side eyes* and trust me, I wouldn't even blame you if you threw your computer looool. Enough is definetly enough!! 

;p xxx

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 117

Good for Remi.

Michael had better fight for her with all he has. He can start by getting rid of Lisa. Her presence has ruined this story long enough IMO. If you make him marry her I will stop reading. 



Author's Response:

Hahahahaha you really dislike her hahaha!!! And we have to sure hope that he realises what he has with Remi before its too late! ;p xxx

Summary:

Cameron Jameson has worked for Michael as his assistant for two years. They had grown close whether she wanted them to or not. Many aren't able to see Michael when he's truly himself. She's one of the only people who knows Michael in and out. From his womanizing ways to his occasional partying. But what happens when she's his next target?


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59025 Read Count: 54872
[Report This] Published: Sep 29, 2011 Updated: Jun 11, 2014
Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story! Cam needs to stop Michael from walking all over her though. He's treating her that way because she let's him! I think part of her enjoys being dominated by him lol. Why the hell else would she follow his instructions so closely? 



Author's Response:

Yea she enjoys it more then she probably should lol but I mean come on look at that face. 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

What a screwed up relationship! I don't doubt that Michael loves her but I can see why she wants to leave. He is batshit! She can be a handful too but he needs to treat her better. 



Author's Response:

Agreed

Summary: Past Featured Story


FORMERLY TITLED I WOULD LIKE TO CALL IT BEAUTY!!!!!!!


Looking at your hands. Hands can understand. Waiting for the chance. Just to hold your hand. A touch of rain and sunshine made the flower grow into a lovely smile that's blooming. And it's so clear to me that you're a dream come true There's no way that I'll be losing. And golden lady, golden lady, I'd like to go there.



Olivia Harris is beautiful, young painter/model from a small town in Virginia. Her whole world get turned upside down when she gets the opportunity to paint for Michael Jackson in 1985 and they quickly all head over heels in love with him. Let's see how Olivia handles living in his world and how Michael handles his sweet new romance.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34783 Read Count: 14497
[Report This] Published: Jan 08, 2012 Updated: Sep 03, 2013
Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Intro: The Normal Morning.

Please update again soon, I love this story.

Michael has no right to be jealous after what he pulled. He needs to stfu and start groveling.

I hope that Olivia fucks with his head a bit. He deserves it. And he needs to realize that his ass can be replaced.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Make-Up

YES you're back! I love this story with a capital L. I'm so glad they made up.

LMAO @ Mr. "Get your damn jaw off the pavement"

 

Monster by femalien Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:


 


A good Catholic from Little Italy, Seraphina shocks her family by getting a divorce from her abusive husband. She is cast away and disowned.


Michael is happily signing autographs in front of Virgin Megastore in New York. In one instance, his senses are captured by a beautiful, quiet and troubled young woman. In his generous attempt to bring her some comfort, Michael finds himself absorbed in a story involving Italian traditions, love and family honor.



Categories: Adult, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95645 Read Count: 27982
[Report This] Published: Jan 23, 2012 Updated: Jul 02, 2013
Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - THE FINALE

A beautiful ending for a wonderful story. Happy tears!

 

Happy Crying

Summary:

Notice To All My Readers:

The Altered Version of Chapter 47

is now uploaded.

 

I’m sorry to tell you that I decided to alter the course of this story starting from Chapter 45.

The chapters are currently being edited and I would upload them as soon as I can.

Don’t be disappointed. I simply felt like I could have done this better.

Take the time to read and tell me what you think.

Sorry for any inconvenience caused.

 

Sincerely,

TheJollyRoger

 

 

All this on the first time she got to see him in flesh and blood.

 

For years she had fantasized him as her Prince Charming,

 

But he discriminated her like a piece of junk he was willing to discard and replace.

 

Her cheeks started burning from embarrassment. Tears pooled up within her eyes making her vision all blurred and hazy.

 

All she could see were their silhouettes now. Her tears were about to get jerked out any second.

 

And she had no intention of crying in front him.

 

 

 

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

 

 

 

“You’re a remarkable person, Wendy,” Michael said,

 

“What I find in you is something unconditional. I don’t want to lose you.

 

And I don’t want to compromise what we have for anything in this world.

 

No matter how many times you say you can’t fit me in with your life, I know you can.

 

Because I know you let me in simply because you wanted.”

 

Skyline-Los-Angeles-Night4

 

 

What if all that you've always run away from happens to be everything you've ever needed?

What if every step you took towards it takes you even farther away from it?

Would you embark on a journey that has no destination?

 

 


Categories: Romance, Family, Angst, Dangerous: 1991-1993
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 181365 Read Count: 19882
[Report This] Published: Feb 07, 2012 Updated: May 30, 2013
Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Beautiful Girl

I'm glad that you are having Michael and Wendy spend more time together I really liked their interaction in this chapter. They are pretty cute together. I still cringe whenever Krystal makes an appearance. Do you know if you plan on changing her character at all in the rewrite? Perhaps make her less of a pain in Wendy's ass? I realize that she is an important plot device but she is just so ugh. Don't even have the words. I've known more than a few girls like Krystal in my time (insecure bitches) so maybe that's why she annoys me so much. 



Author's Response: I agree, they do sound cute together. So decided they should have more chances to be with each other this way before I can bring complexities in to their relationship. I want Krystal too to evolve as a person, but I just don't understand how to do it. She adds to the complexities in the plot so I don't want to overly simplyfy her character either. I know, there are people like her plenty. I have been bullied by people like her who think they are so perfect. I would do something about it. I promise. I'm glad you like this version too. It's a relief, really. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Wow what a kiss! 

I hope Wendy can open up more to Michael from now on. Although she is completely right to remain guarded if he's still banging Krystal's mean ass. He needs to permanently remove that ho from his speed dial. Simply admitting that he sees Krystal as no more than a fuckbuddy isn't enough. I'm not saying that Michael should join a monastery and forever pine for Wendy, but if he wants her to trust him and give him a fair shot he needs to keep his dick in check. 



Author's Response: Permanently remove that ho from his speed dial....! Mwahahahahahaha.... You are so funny! Really, reading your review got me laughing so hard! And I was in the middle of a lecture in med school! Imagine that??? I know this whole issue with Krystal in it messes up what's between Wendy and Michael pretty bad. But no love story is perfect right? I promise I'll do something about it. Thank you so much reviewing! Your opinions really matter so much to me! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!