Penname: meeechveee [Contact] Real name: Chelly
Member Since: Dec 17, 2012
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I absolutely love MJ and Fanfiction =D


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Summary:

Flo

Flo and Michael both share the same problem. Thanksgiving is coming up and their folks are expecting them to bring a date home. They make a deal that they'll pretend to be in love for thanksgiving break. But in reality they hate each other. What will happens when the act starts to become reality for Flo?


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 123487 Read Count: 75399
[Report This] Published: Jun 01, 2011 Updated: Dec 17, 2012
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bad Era Miike looks straight up Latino so i dont blame her. Their fighting and making up is too cute. Mike is too charming for his own good. Sounds like its about to go down. Mike, Flo, and a minivan full of teens? What could possibly go wrong? lol

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

AHHHHH!! Mike so nastyy, doing all that petting infront of mama and granny and ish. Love it!! lol I swear Flo is so slow. Glad she knows Karen stale ass is jealous and Mike doesnt hate her. Hopefully she can understand without being told that Mike wants whats in em draws. lol

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Grandma cool peeps bruh. Now karen on the other hand needs to be skinned alive. Thats some foul ass shit she did with Chris simple behind. Mike cheered Flo up the best way possible. Im ticklish too and tickle fits are the business! lol

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

He got exactly what he deserved for talking all that smack, hurting ma girls feelings. He really got under her skin. It was sweet of her to let him sleep. Where did that candy bar end up? lol



Author's Response: Hahahahaha use your imagination!

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

LMAO! Those kids are so crazy. Mike's good with kids too. oh lawd. Mike's feelin her now, YES!! They are too cute, waking up all snuggled up and ish. lol He knows he liked it. Flo better listen to his mama. She knows what shes talking about.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What an asshole, yo. Felt like straight up deckin him. What he said was really uncalled for but im glad they made up. Im seriously fallin for this Micheal, asshole and all.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

“It’s just a little precaution in case you have crabs” 

lmao!! that was so unexpected. He is so rude. lol Ricky sounds like he could get it. lol I love water balloon fights! Cant wait.



Author's Response: Ricky CAN get it hahahaha

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Call him pied pier cause he got them hoes flockin. lol jk. Love how you made him easily lovable with the ladies aka his drones. And I so wish I was in that bedroom of his. His family seems very nice.

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Date: Dec 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG where do I begin? I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORIES!! Ive spent so many nights wide awake because I could not stop reading these masterpieces. I sneak in a little reading time at work, in the line at the grocery store... lets just say im addicted. The way you develop your characters and bring in elements that we all knew about MJ in the real world into these alternate universes is amazing. The plots are terrific and the way these characters interact have me gushing and blushing and bursting with butterflies. I love how each individual story is completely different, showing different lifestyles from different people and bringing out different personas from his real personality. 

So far Ive read 3 stories in their entirety and am half way through 3 other stories. I have decided that since you appreciate reviews, (You demanding a review with each post gave it away. You really arent subtle) I will review each and every single chapter Ive read because YOU ARE AWESOME.

My only request is that you have to have more frequent updates!!!

So ... here come my reviews!!

-Chelly

 



Author's Response: Oh gosh! Hands down best review ever you are the freaking best! And reading at your job hahahaha keep doing it! Unless of course you get in trouble. Gosh how could I say no to you. I'm gonna start updating more frequently. I will do that.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LMAO!! I love how how sharp his tongue is. His insults are hilarious and a man with a sense of humor is always sexy. Their banter is adorable. Her friends are really cool. Rebecca speaks the truth though lol. Love it! Great first chapter!!

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

11?! Hes immeassurable on any scale. Derek and Rebecca belong together on the real because they always preach that truth. Micheals fake apology had me cracking up like crazy though. 'Really?' He is too funny at this office.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

'Are you sick or blind or gay?' lol My dawg Brit be going ham though, talking bout tapin heads and ish. lol This was quite cute, her causing a scene to drag her in and the slamming the door in Micheals face, the mice sex. Hilarious! And you could tell they really meant their compliments. Had me cheesin and ish.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Aww i can just imagine how cute her southern accent sounds. Im glad she bonded with the ladies in his family. Everything seems smooth so far. His brothers are funny as well. Guess it runs in the family. And thats what Mike gets for throwing people on the floor. Hes lucky she didnt go lower.

Summary:

  Chad    Kenya

 

Monica  Tatiana

 

Kenya and Chad have been mistaken for one another numerous times. But what happens when her brother breaks his leg and can no longer dance on the Bad Tour? Kenya steps in and pretends to be her brother but will she get caught? Can she hold in her attraction for Michael any longer, and will she be able to run away from Tatiana who develops a crush?


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51560 Read Count: 12969
[Report This] Published: Jun 18, 2011 Updated: Mar 16, 2012
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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LMAO!!! This was AWESOME!! lol Kenya is too funny but she almost blew it. Bubbles in this one? (fist pumps) YES!! It was sweet on Kenya to invite him and show him a good time.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Tuna huh? lol Ryan cool peeps. Lets see how far Kenya goes with this overly eager girl. This I have to read. 



Author's Response: You are like reading every story and I am loving you for that. Thanks for supporting this one people usually don't read it and I used to love writing for it. Thanks for all of the love!