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Michael and Matthew Spinelli
Categories: Adult, Slash
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41371 Read Count: 19084
Date: Nov 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Wow. I LOVE this story. It's funny, because I just discovered MJ slash and I'm surprised to find I really enjoy it, especially since I have no interest in reading hetero fics. I don't like all pairings though, especially with many celebrities that are just repulsive to me, lol. That's why I love how you used an original character.
I really love your characterization of Michael, he seems pretty spot on, though I feel like he may have resisited Matthew's assault a bit more, lol. That part freaked me out a little bit, because Matthew practically raped him and tainted him with "un-pure sex". However, I thought the scene was written very well, and it was descriptive without being crude. It was also strangely hot and sweet, lol. So I look forward to future scenes that are more "consensual" and loving.
I'm also just looking forward to what happens next, and I can't wait till Matthew can admit to himself that's he's been a huge dick, lol!
So I appreciate your story and creative energy, I hope this one's not dead because I'd love to read more!
Date: Jan 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Oh darn, so many misunderstandings! The angst! lol And Matthew's brother, what a twist! UGH, MJ and Matthew need to work things out already! And Michael needs to ditch Audrey, he knows Matthew is the one he wants! And he should know better than to believe the crap in the news! If only Matthew would stop being an ass and admit his true feelings properly, oy, this story's got me goin! :)
Date: Jan 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
OMG, YES! I was so excited to see you updated this story. I was afraid it was dead because my favorite stories ALWAYS die, I swear, lol! I was in a major bummy mood, and this totally lifted my spirits. :) The part at the end where Matthew blabs and tells his driver he thinks MJ's butt is cute, PRICELESS! LOL, that was so funny! Matthew is so totally obsessed with Michael's butt! I really want them to be together, they make an adorable couple. XD Can't way for the next part!
PrincexMJ
I don't know what to write to make you want to read this, so you'll just have to trust me:)
Categories: HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5021 Read Count: 6211
Date: Feb 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Wow, this story is AWESOME! I only read slash stories about Mike, but I was always turned off of the idea of him with Prince. Well, no longer, lol! I was very pleasantly surprised by the characterizations in your story. It's really wonderful and I hope you continue!
Michael and his photographer:)
Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Slash
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1385 Read Count: 1118
Date: Feb 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Lisa, that slut! LOL, you should totally write more!
[Reviews - 92]
Temptation.
Noun.
Meaning: The state of being tempted especially by evil that lurks from within.
Michael Jackson has just finished releasing his first solo album called Off The Wall and he is so happy about making it on top after it had sold millions of copies worldwide and even getting a golden record for all of his hard work and perseverance. But despite the fame, glamour, and fortune, he was very lonely and empty on both the inside and out and longs for a friend so, one night in the Autumn of 1979, he takes a walk in the park hoping to find that special someone only to run into a drug dealer who feels just as alone like Mike. They hit it off real good but as the days fly by, he starts to gain new feelings for the low lifer making his desire very tempting that he can't break away will he stop it or will it take over him completely?
Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25544 Read Count: 12129
Date: May 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 6. Part 2.
Oooh, I like it so far. I think you've captured Michael's character quite well, which is something many authors manage to muck up, lol. I can't wait to see how Roy and MJ's relationship progresses. I always love Michael paired with more of a dominant, brazen kind of guy. My only suggestion would be to make the chapters a bit longer, but thanks for taking the time to write this. I can't get enough MJ slash! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much there Mam, and Of course I will just gotta think of more ideas :) again, thanks for reading.
Twenty-eight-year-old Xavier becomes Michael Jackson's new personal fashion deisgner. However, things become complicated when unwated feelings blossom between the two. Friendships are tested, and people's true colours are revealed. Will Mike and Xavier become more than just boss and employee?
Categories: Romance, Adult, Slash, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15653 Read Count: 4069
Date: Jul 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: chapter twelve
SO darn cute! I loved how Xavier thought of surprising Michael with flowers and candy, awww! XD And how he got MJ's attention at the end, lol, hilarious! I really loved this chapter, and I cant wait to read about their reunion. Your story is definitely one of my favorites, I just have a smile on my face the whole time I'm reading it. ^_^
Author's Response:
Awe, thank you, that means a lot :')
Date: Jun 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 10: chapter ten
Oh, he better have picked Michael! He can see his friend any ol time, for Pete's sake, lol!
Author's Response:
That is an excellent point! :)
Date: Jun 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: chapter nine
Aw, cuuute! they're goin' on a date, yay! Sorry, I've missed reviewing the last couple chapters. Life's been...interesting, lol. I'm totally pleased with the story thus far though, and I ook forward to the next part. seeing you've updated puts a ray of sunshine on an otherwise dark day. :)
Also, is Michael not a virgin in this story? If not, it only detracts slightly for me, since MJ seemed very virginal in his 20s, and I tend to assume writers will portray hims as such, but anyway, just a thought. :3
Author's Response:
I'm glad seeing me update makes you happy :) I want to make Michael a virgin in this story, however I don't I want to make him seem like he's totally inexperienced in the love department at the same time...
Date: May 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: chapter one
I completely agree with Dragdoll. I love the romance/fluff, it's my favorite part!
Date: May 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: chapter four
LOVING this story! Yay! I'm kind of addicted to MJ slash fics, and this one is a refreshing addition. I really like the contrast between Michael and Xavier's personalites, and I can't wait until their relationship grows. It's so sweet how Xavier can't get Michael off his mind. You've got a permanent reader here, can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! I will most likely update today or tomorrow depending on how I feel :)
Date: May 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: chapter five
SO cute, I'm really loving this! Xavier's gonna give up the ho life for Michael, lol. This story reminds me of Starlight Love, except xavier isn't a total jerk, and his attraction to Michael was immediately recognized. Aw, I bet they'll ignite sparks when Xavier comes over, can't wait! I'm really enjoying your characterizations and pacing. They're gonna make such an adorable couple. Keep it up! ^_^
Author's Response:
Starlight Love? Is it on here? I haven't read many stories on here yet, but if it's good, I wouldn't mind reading it :) I'm glad you like the characterizations and pacing, I'm trying really hard not to rush things because I have a terrible habit of doing so -.-"
Thanks for the review and rate!
Date: May 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: chapter six
Ho ho, is there a love triangle blossoming!? OMG. lol I could see Xavier being the jealous type for sure, can't wait to see what their meeting is like. Yippers!
Author's Response:
And love triangle sounds very tempting, but I'm not sure yet :P and I think you may like the next chapter ;)
IN THE GARDEN
copyright: celestia
Categories: Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Slash, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Self-Harm
Series: In the garden - The next chapter
Chapters: 130 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 166239 Read Count: 70816
Date: Nov 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Sweeeeeet, Justin got kicked to the curb! He's obviously just so pitifully jealous and he needs to get over it, lol. I'm eager to see what happens between Michael and Morgan, it's been a while since they've really been alone without Justin looming over their shoulders.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :) Yea, I think it'll take some time for them to digest everything's that happened with Justin around, specially Morgan.
Date: Nov 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Oh my, very angsty indeed! Considering how Justin is acting, I don't blame Morgan for blowing up like that, he's defintely getting out of line. Oh dear, can't wait to see what happens, lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. :)
It was time for him to finally step his foot down, he'd never been bothered by anyone as much as he's with Justin, lol. Poor guy.