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Fever by pixiedust Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 412]
Summary:





Tatiana/MJ: "I feel your fever from miles around."


He grins, that glint in his eyes teasing, leans in and kisses her like that, in his bed, with her wearing nothing but his bedsheets, her hair like a tornado around her, "You’re what keeps me bad," he whispers.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83383 Read Count: 67327
[Report This] Published: Feb 04, 2010 Updated: Oct 20, 2013
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed
Date: Apr 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story was always so good. I hope you return!!

Summary:

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For no mere woman can resist the beauty of the thriller...

Ola Ray once said that she fell in love with him during the making of "Thriller." That she wishes now that she had told him so. That their relationship was close and intimate, but never romantic.

This is my version of a what-if, if MAYBE things had gone a little differently. If she had the courage to tell him how she felt. 


Categories: Romance, Adult, Angst, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24087 Read Count: 10991
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2011 Updated: Dec 22, 2013
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Eyes

I am sooo glad your back! It's understandable that it is difficult to update sometimes but I really love the story and. The way your write so I hope you continue with this. It is a really good idea. 

 

Much love. 



Author's Response:

reviews like this are what inspired me to finish the next chapter i just uploaded. :) thnak you.

Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The First Time

I dont know if I ever reviewed this and I am so sorry if I didnt because I read it as you were updating and fell in love. I was so glad when you returned now I just crave more. Youre a phenomenal writer, absolutely amazing, and the last chapter of this story so far, "Handsome" was probably one of the best passages I've read in a long time. The imagry, the pace, the wording, all incredible. I hope to see you back here soon!! Much love!

Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Hours Before

Gosh I swear your writing is poetry!! Easy to visualize--soothing to read! I love love love love this story!!  Keep up the AMAZING job! ~Much Love



Author's Response:

This may be one of the sweetest reviews I've ever received. I'm so touched and honored (to quote MJ) It's reviews like this that keep me going. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

My Bully by AtMJsHouse Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 699]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Yahara

 

 

Yahara has always been a nerd in school. She has had many bullys and being teased is nothing new. But when she goes off to college she and her life starts to turn for the worst. Especially with the bully of all bullys picking with her. What happens when Yahara begins to fall in love with her bully? Will he love her back? Will it work between them?


Categories: Humor, Romance, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: Jazer's Library
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 121316 Read Count: 164229
[Report This] Published: Aug 02, 2011 Updated: Nov 07, 2013
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed
Date: Apr 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hope this gets updated soon!! I love this story!



Author's Response:

It will hun Im working on it. Thanks for reviewing.

Summary:

7 year old Michael is now dealing with fame at a young age, now that the Jackson5 are big! As they attend school, they have a hard time having a normal life, but there is one girl willing to treat Michael like a friend. Her name is Margie and even though she loves the Jackson 5, she sees Michael as a normal kid, but as a crush too. Until one day, they meet by accident, she turns out to become one of Michael's first friend, and Michael also becomes her first friend, but after that day, they don't see each other again for a long time. 16 years pass, what will happen between them? Will Michael remember Margie, or will it take him a while?


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: First friend, First love
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32144 Read Count: 31949
[Report This] Published: Sep 25, 2011 Updated: Jan 03, 2014
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: INTRO

I loved reading this! I hope yuo bring it back!

Summary:

 

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Categories: Family, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126308 Read Count: 20306
[Report This] Published: Oct 19, 2011 Updated: Jun 24, 2018
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 20, 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Love Never Felt So Good

Oh Im so glad your back!! I absolutely love this story an I'm glad you updated, I almost thought yall were gone ;) Anyway I really can't wait for more of this it's AMAZING!!

~Much Love!

Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed
Date: Jun 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Was so surprised to see another one of my long-time favorites updated. I will be rereading it! Thank you so much for the journey! Hope to hear more from you soon in general. <3



Author's Response:

I must admit hearing “favorite” and my story in the same context is such a touching thing for me. As a writer who has quite literally grown with her story, it is one of my biggest feats. I thank you for taking the time to love this story as I have. Love always. MJlegacy14 

Summary: Past Featured Story


FORMERLY TITLED I WOULD LIKE TO CALL IT BEAUTY!!!!!!!


Looking at your hands. Hands can understand. Waiting for the chance. Just to hold your hand. A touch of rain and sunshine made the flower grow into a lovely smile that's blooming. And it's so clear to me that you're a dream come true There's no way that I'll be losing. And golden lady, golden lady, I'd like to go there.



Olivia Harris is beautiful, young painter/model from a small town in Virginia. Her whole world get turned upside down when she gets the opportunity to paint for Michael Jackson in 1985 and they quickly all head over heels in love with him. Let's see how Olivia handles living in his world and how Michael handles his sweet new romance.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34783 Read Count: 14497
[Report This] Published: Jan 08, 2012 Updated: Sep 03, 2013
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed
Date: Apr 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Intro: The Normal Morning.

I hope you return soon!

Summary:

Razlina Bridges is a young, wild and smart mouth teenager who has to leave her home down south to move up north because her mother has been offered a job that she couldn't refuse. Being Razlina is somewhat of a tomboy, she was not really accepted at home and she thinks of herself as a loner. But what happens when Razlina meets Michael Jackson, the most popular guy in school, who is also a smart alec? Will the two go slashing at each others throats or will they begin to gain feelings for each other?

*Michael is not famous in this story*

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of giveintothefire. The original characters and plot are mine and should not be used without my permission.  I am in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 327869 Read Count: 60303
[Report This] Published: Mar 14, 2012 Updated: Oct 03, 2014
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Matchmade

WOW!!!!! I've been following this story for a while and I always enjoy the updates but I honestly feel like this is the best chapter so far. I really loved the amount of romance that this chapter displayed and it's pretty obvious that these two are in love. I love how trhe song reflected on Michael's life as well as how sweet he is and how much he loves Razlina. They are just so cute together!! I loved everything that Mike was telling Raz late that night and how he thanked her for everything she changed and improved in him!! That was really sweet and I loved how you wrote it!! This story is in my favs and I LOVE IT!!!!! Keep up the amazing writing!



Author's Response:

Well thank you! Mike and Raz are growing stronger and stronger. Michael used his experiences to influence his talent *winks* And Mike told her exactly how he felt about her. He proved his love for her. *_* "That was really sweet and I loved how you wrote it!!"<--

Thank you lol. And I'm honored to know that my story is one of your faves! <3

Summary:

 

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They could say whatever they wanted. 

 

 

They would never know.


Categories: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2007 Read Count: 1320
[Report This] Published: Mar 03, 2013 Updated: Mar 03, 2013
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: They Would Never Know

I. Am. Totally. AMAZED!! Once again you have impressed me. You really never fail to make me fall in love again and again with your writing! There is real poetic talent in the way you deliver and write. This short story was incredible honestly and extremely unique. You have once again struck GOLD!! And don't worry, the story made sense. ;) I really enjoy taking the time out to read your creations!! Bravo, my friend, bravo!

~Much Love~ 

P.S. I am asdfghjkllanbdham-ing over here!!(Loved it! Can't stress it enough!)



Author's Response:

Oh, my dear PYT, you are too kind and gracious with your words to me! It means a lot that you like the stlye and the plot, and THANK GOD it makes sense! lol! As long as people like you keep reading my creations, I promise to keep making them. :) Much love right back to you!! <3333

Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: They Would Never Know

I came back to CRY. Ugh. One of my favorites. I do hope you’re well whereever you may be. Thank you for blessing us with your creations. 

Summary:

 

Since I had you honey there hasn't been no other woman.

Since I had you baby there hasn't been no other woman.

Since I tasted your loving I haven't seen no other woman.

Since I had you baby there hasn't been no other woman.

 

This is a story about two friends who find their way back to one another, despite the odds. Loosely based off of the Marvin Gaye song, Since I Had You.
Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2103 Read Count: 148
[Report This] Published: Jul 24, 2013 Updated: Aug 06, 2013
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: How It Was.

Years later, I still love this. Thank you.

Summary:

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He used to know her. He used to love her, but she ran away from him with no explanation and without a word. Can he ever win her back?

This is a story about how love changes through the years, how the people involved cope with that change and the struggle to get back to the way they were.


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Poetry
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Neglect
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16245 Read Count: 1007
[Report This] Published: Jun 02, 2014 Updated: Jun 08, 2015
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1

Hey you're back!! I loved this one! Glad to see you've returned! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! It really means a lot :) 

My Kind of Love by MjjRose Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

From the author of Don't Stop 'Til You Get Enough 

 

A one-shot story based off the song My Kind of Love by Emeli Sande.

 

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Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Song Fics, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2544 Read Count: 892
[Report This] Published: Jul 01, 2014 Updated: Jul 01, 2014
Reviewer: MjjPYT Signed
Date: Sep 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Honestly, I'm shocked this hasnt gotten more reads or reviews! I loved this one shot, especially loving the use of Sade in this short. I read this a while back and neglected to leave a review ;( but WOW! I thought it was beautifully depicted and  well written! Great job! 



Author's Response:

Awww thank you MjjPYT!!! My apologies for the super late response, I'm just now seeing. 

Thank you so much for your words. I lovvvvvve, Sade! 

Muah! :D