Penname: Evening Star [Contact] Real name: Dani
Member Since: Aug 30, 2012
Membership status: Member
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Gender: Female
Age: 21+
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Summary:

 

Brooke (A.K.A. Peaches) Delekta, is a 29 year old sexy, gorgeous, beautiful, young lady. She's happy and healthy, she has a boyfriend, friends, loving parents, and a great job.... Well she did... But once she gets fired from her job, she seeks a new one, Michael Jackson's new assistant, Brooke Delekta. Sounds heavenly doesn't it? Well... Think again.

 

   Okay in all honesty I did NOT think this story was gonna be a big hit,

but apparently I was wrong!

 

Almost 10,000 views, and 183 reviews, let me tell you I am very grateful and I wanted to thank all of you!! I would like to dedicate this story to a few of my readers/friends.

Dri: I Love you girl!!

mikeylover32: You support me through thick and thin an I appreciate that! 143

Michaelsbaby: I always love reading what you have to say ((:

MikeyJackieLover: Thank you for everything you have done! c:

KekeJackson: OMG girrll you just Crack. Me. Up! Bahaha Love you to death!!

 

Thanks again, and God Bless You all. 

 

Much Love,

          Tiffany Lynn

 

 


Categories: Adult, Adventure, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Drug Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43376 Read Count: 25701
[Report This] Published: Aug 19, 2012 Updated: Jul 20, 2013
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Digging my grave - Chapter 14

I just caught up with this story and I must say your story caught my intrest and that song he sings is kinda catcht, please update soon.

Summary:

michael[broken image link]

remembering september 11th and how close we came to loosing our icon even soon the we did

Authors Note: I got the Idea to write this because in the past week there have been a lot of stories on tv talking about that Faithful day and in 2001 and I only found out about 1 year and a few months ago Michael was actually supposed to be in that building that day.   So in dedication to all the survivors that made it out of that building alive this is a story of what if he had gone there that day but what if he survived

this is a story that I will proably only be reposting once a year on this day as a rememberance to those we lost that day


Categories: Angst, Family, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery
Characters: None
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6423 Read Count: 1460
[Report This] Published: Sep 10, 2012 Updated: Sep 11, 2014
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Remember, Remember the 11th of September

wow very very well written. I will never forget that day. The day that happened i was just starting high school and my bus ran early in the morning so i was on the bus to the highschool oblivious to what happened cuz i dont want tv when i first get up in the morning and i finally got to the highschool  went to my locker grabbed my book and walked to my first class and waited seeing myh bus was the first one there early in the morning. My teacher who is always in her class room when i get there wasnt there but the class room light was on so i knew she was there so i went in and sat down and i heard the tv on in the class room and that when i first heard about it, little by little more students walked into the room and finally the teacher walked in and told us that everyone is to go to the gym for first and seconds class periods and they talked about what happened and everything

Chokehold by YANAgirl07 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

She never wanted to be in a situation where she was being completely controlled...

But he changed her.

Now he's got her in a chokehold, and whatever he wants her to do, she obliges.

She's trapped in his grip, and he's not ready to let go any time soon...

PURE SEX SCENE

***Warnings: Bondage, Submission, Restraints, Asphyxyation***


Categories: Adult
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8002 Read Count: 5193
[Report This] Published: Sep 16, 2012 Updated: Oct 03, 2012
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Sep 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG I really looove this story. I would say that my mind is in the gutter but I have an apartment in the gutter so i basically live there lol. Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response: Haha yay! I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow I loved the story hope to see more awsome stories from u :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Haha I'll try and make my other stories as awesome as this one ;)

Thanks for reading it :*

Don't Jump by YANAgirl07 Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Best friends.

You would sleep over, stay up all night, eat all of the food out of the fridge, sing karaoke until your throat hurt, talk about crushs, tell all your secrets to, play truth or dare...

They're your confident.

But you'd never expect that one day you'd be hearing about them standing on the top of a building, about to jump.

Michael certainly didn't.

When his best friend feels that nobody's there for him, that nobody loves him, that nobody wants him; the only option for him is to leave his whole life behind...

But will Michael be waiting there for him?

Will Michael be there saying "Don't Jump" ?

 

**This is just a story about friendship and suicide**


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3929 Read Count: 3401
[Report This] Published: Nov 07, 2012 Updated: Nov 17, 2012
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story!!!! and I want to thank you for introducing me to new music. I have heard of Tokio  Hotel but never heard any of their songs untill now

 

Evening Star



Author's Response:

Oh no problem! Haha, I actually found out about Tokio Hotel when I was playing Guitar Hero, and I was playing their song 'Monsoon' and I instantly fell in love with it!

Their songs are really good. I really like Don't Jump (but thats kinda obvious), Scream, Humanoid, World Behind My Wall and Hey You. :)

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Nov 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow you are talented!! This was a very well written story

 

**Evening Star**

Author's Response:

XD Thank you! I'm glad you think so! So happy that you liked it! :D Thanks for the review! I appreciate it a ton!

Summary:

 

 

 

Michael is known for liking quiet, "proper" women. What happens when he meets wild child?A girl who is willing to show him a thing or two. This beautiful and broken woman who wants nothing to do with love and seems dead set on destroying herself...can he show her love? Can he protect her from the media, from the controlling people in his life, from herself? He can't let her go down this spiral..yet she doesn't fit his mold, physically or mentally! Can he accept this wild child?


Categories: Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: Erotica, Graphic Depictions of Violence, Mild Violence, Nudity, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Child Abuse, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Kidnapping, Physical Abuse, Self-Harm, Sexual Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 118 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91669 Read Count: 40629
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2013 Updated: May 08, 2020
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Jun 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 who is she?

this is a very good story cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

awww thanks love I usually pump out a chapter or 2 a day so keep reading!!

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 who is she?

wow loved the update!!! please continue



Author's Response:

Thanks love, I am trying to figure out what happens next

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 starting over

wow! I can relate to her alot. I use to be out of control.  Cant wait for the next chapter girl! ten stars for u!!



Author's Response:

You're a sweetie pie!! I am a little stuck but hopefully I will have a chapter out for you guys tonight

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 adjust

awww cute chapter cant wait for more and to find out what Michael has planned:)



Author's Response:

Oh baby, Mike has some stuff planned lol

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 who is she?

sry i have not been reviewing but i have been reading and dang!!!!! Dante is such a pig!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying

Summary:

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TO ALL MY READERS WONDERING ABOUT THIS STORY I HAVE OFFICALLY DECIDED OCTOBER WILL BE THE MONTH I WILL FINISH IT

We Never Ment to do it It was an accident... a college prank you know right... it was Hell Week The last night for intiation, My frat and the sister soriority each had the top 5 members give or take from each take the suv up to The old crest House to play a prank on Our two new members

Now PLEASE understand I was Not the lead on this venture I just had to go along because of course I could be ousted out of the frat if i showed far at the time I didn't know the story as much as the others did and when I heard it on the way up there I got uneasy too but I couldn't show it. I wasn't scred easly but THIS night... THIS house, I had a bad feeling in my gut that said get in my car and get FAR away... I didn't follow that feeling

It's been 22 years sense that Night... and here i sit looking at the year book of allumni shaking my head because EACH and EVERY one of Them is DEAD but Me... so i have to wonder AM I NEXT   

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Angst, Horror, Humor, Mystery, Sci Fi, Suspense
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75316 Read Count: 3018
[Report This] Published: Jun 19, 2013 Updated: Oct 21, 2013
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Jul 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Introduction

i understand the whole not being able to find a job its hard to find a job out ther these days and when i had my first job i didn't have a car either and it took for ever for me to fid that first job then finally i got one. Just dont give up on the job hunting and you will get there it may feel like it takes for ever though but in the end things will work out



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your opinion and incouragement it means alot I just don't feel like I'm ever going to get anywhere i feel stuck and have been stuck for over 7 years sense the loss of my mother things haven't gone right and seem to be getting worse, I never get any call backa just repspnse that they went for someone else or I don 't meet the standers for the potion and these are postions that I QUILFY OR and have worked in so I don't know 

but here your chance to become more then just  reader I'm asking my fans to go look at the new story concept and let me know what you think and if you want to contribute some thing to add to the drama of the story line do you want Michael to appear gentle bad or bad bad even thought as the story goes he won't be bad just observed that way which character do you like in the list and in your opinion how do you think they should act and so on 

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Jul 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Introduction

sry i have been a silent reader i looove this story i couldnt stop watching the Criss Angel clips i love Criss angel i was lucky enough to see him in person it was awsome

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Introduction

oooo i looove scary stories i never was good at writing scary stories so i have mad respect for people who can



Author's Response:

Thank you, it's people like you I write for and I would love to get your opinion on each chapter that why i shout you guys out in the end 

Summary:

 

In modern America, the story of Peter Pan and Michael Jackson is internationally renowned. Written by an unknown author, readers of all ages retell the tales to their friends or family to continue the legacy. Little do they know that they stories are about to become real.

Shira Clikman is prisoned in her small town with her abusive mother, Lucy, and her royal sister, Mikayla. She only has her best friend, Mariano Albertino, to protect her and make her feel beautiful. After a physical argument with her sister, she meets Michael in the middle of the night, and he promises to help her escape reality into Neverland, the place where you never grow up. Mikayla discovers this and wishes to come as well, due to secrets even she has been hiding. Hesitantly, Michael brings the two girls, making Mikayla promise to not do anything to Shira, or else she'd be sent as a slave to the pirates.

After their arrival, Mariano is kidnapped by Captain Hook in order for the captain to have his revenge on Peter and Michael, accusing them of taking away his memory. The rescue gives Lucy high tensions of the three, and she will stop at nothing to make sure Michael doesn't complete his private mission, to complete the Wishing Spell.


Categories: Romance, Adventure, Suspense, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Fantasy, Adult, Angst, Mystery, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Death, Emotional Abuse, Rape, Self-Harm
Challenges: Bringing Back Emotions
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44456 Read Count: 1278
[Report This] Published: Jul 05, 2013 Updated: Sep 22, 2014
Reviewer: Evening Star Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I just noticed this story and i loooove it i have been honestly thinking about writing a story pertaining to neverland i just can't get it off the ground awsome job

Author's Response:

There is no such thing as impossible as Michael would say.