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Love stoned with Diana Ross, Michael Jackson faces bad break-up with the only woman he trusted most, all his life. He paces the next stages of his life, walking wounded with a chip on his shoulder; grieving over his past and heedless about his future. Appalled by the pain of love, he vows to himself that he would not ever fall in love again as he continues to be a player since he became a pleasure seeker for his needs. At this time of dried and withered, an young doctor passes his path like a breath of fresh air... He wants her, he gets her and before they knew a steamy sordid affair begins as he lays out ground rules that their clandestine relationship will be based only on sex. But without his realizing it, it poses a threat when he finds himself falling for her. When love hit him like a freight train for the second time, he fell hard.

"Sex is the only consolation you have when you can't have love"

NOTE: All of the above are discussed in this story. I do realize that this is a very senstive and controversial subject but I want to let you know that I'm in no way trying to portray or paint Michael in a bad light or executing an over exposition of his private things or embarrassing him. My sole intention of this is just trying to vindicate Michael by learning as much as possible to at least get and give a slight view of why he made the choices the way he did and a little spotlight on the troubled life he lived behind the curtains.

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 318445 Read Count: 42849
[Report This] Published: Jul 02, 2012 Updated: Sep 13, 2017
Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥

Hey Girl!!!! OMG is all I can say! Really I don't know what to say. Well first off im sorry Nita for judging her, and you most of all XD Michael knew this was going to happen with this man. Men are scrum im sorry except Michael hes special. Nita is very lucky to have a friend like Nita in her life. I know I have a close friend like that too and they can help you see or realzie anything. Why can't Nita realize she loves Michael? She needs to get off her high horse pick up her big girl panties and tell Michael she loves him!!!!! Uh I just don't understand her?!?!?! Michael cares for her so much but she just won't see it. If it was me I would welcome him with both arms. How did Michael take it when Nita told him to get out. Was he crushed? He probably was cushed like he was with Diana. This whole situation is just so sad. Another great chapter under your belt. I wanted to tell you, your writing style is so wonderful. You go very indepth with your writing you go through each emotion and movement of the chacter, which truly makes a great story. Because you feel like your there experincing the story. I love stories that makes you feel that way. Great job on this story. XD A plus plus!!!!

Author's Response:

Hey hun :) LOL! I'm sure Nita accepts all our apologies :p Except Michael's hehe, just kidding! Yeah girl you are right! Most men are douchebags when it comes to patience and serenity at a situation like that! Yes Friends are very important in one's life. LOL My bestfriend's name is Jenny that's why I used her name hehe Oh yeah she will does that soon I guess. Hehe Ikr? I would welcome him with open arms as well :D Too bad she isn't his greatest fan! Of course, Michael should have been crushed, you will see ALL of that next chapter though *Mischeivous girn* So much drama in the next chapter! You guys better be up for it lol! AW, Sweet!!! THANKS SO MUCH mywaymj83 Love you so much girl! Your words are very energetic and enduring!! That's what my goal is... and I'm glad u guys are feeling the story because you see I'm not a good writer at all :P Anyway, Thanks again love <3 I REALLY appreciate it! Update will be very soon ;) Btw, girl do you think world's gonna end in 21st? XD Lots of love <3 xx 

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 30: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥

Ok wait....wait! *Takes deep breath* Ok, so when I saw you updated I was like, "Screw studying Spanish and adv. bio, I am reading this!" Lol! When I reread the ending to get a feel for this chapter I screaming at my laptop screen going "You BASTARD!" haha! Then when I read it was Jermaine's (never liked him anyway,) I was majorly relieved.

Very seldom do I read a story that has me crying along with the characters as yours does to me. When I read about the vasectomy, I was going "No, No!" As well. I just.....your story is, and I mean this, the best story on here. You should have chose the writing profession instead of being Miss Doctor and all. ;) Everything that Michael was saying about trust and relationships is so on the mark. I actually took to heart some kernels of wisdom myself, because I can see Nita's point as well - partly because I am the same way about being trustless with the ones I love. But in her defense he is surrounded by people all day, including attractive females. I don't know, I am playing Switzerland on this, because they both have good points. But the ending.....my heart is completely sunken, if I was Nita I would, run down the hall where he's going, grab him, pin him to the ground to show him how dedicated I am to him. ;) lol

You have seriously brightened up my day after being very down in the dumps and this made me laugh - first time all day. I need to pull a misery thing here and find where you live, hobble you, and make you write me more chapters! LOL! Joking of course. ;D
Oh my gosh, I feel like I just got a B12 shot, I am so happy now! This story is just AMAZING!!!! Nothing short of perfection, on Christmas break I need to spend time rereading it again.

I just could go on talking about this chapter but now I REALLY need to study Spanish now, I am just so AHHHHHH!!!!!! You're brilliant, the story is brilliant, and I need MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

A billion million hugs and kisses to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxo

Your #1 fan!
(another misery quote - lol sorry, just had too ;)

Author's Response:

OMG GIRL!! :) LOL I never liked Jermaine too! I think he often tried to mimick Michael, in ALL aspects!!

Aw, girl, you are a darling! THANK YOU SO DAMN MUCH! Lol don't worry I don't think I will be a good Miss Doctor, so I'll never leave writing :P Yes, its very easy to have those problems between couples. And I think especially our generation is so spoiled and we often have high expectations for our partner. We often feel insecure in our relationship, mostly because who we think as 'our' guy casually flirts with another woman right before our eyes! Yeah, jealousy is a bitch! And it didn't spare Nita! Yes, he's going to surrounded by attractive females, supermodels, 24/7 and if Nita's going to get insecure everytime he's like that, what're they gonna do? I think that's what Michael thought. AH I would LOVE to meet you, even if it's to hobble me! :P LOL! Oh I'm sorry luv, for eventually making you sad :( But they have to face facts don't you think? obviously relationship with Michael isn't going to be anywhere near the word 'normal'. Haha, we think alike ;) That's what I would have done if I were Nita! :P

WOW Thanks again, my god, girl, my thanks aren't enough for you! You're making me blush! I was SO damn tired, felt like life sucked out of me! And the moment I read your review, I felt like jumping and dancing! :D You are wonderful! That's what make me so happy, that I was able to make you smile :) 

Yeah, you REALLY should study Spanish now! Good luck for whatever hell you're facing, exam or..? Haha I will definitely give you more and so much MORE! Don't worry the story's not going anywhere and I suggest you now to study, lol, before you put yourselt in an awful misery :P 

A billion million hugs and kisses back and another billion more ;) (Guess, we'll die before completing LMAO)

I LOVE YOU! My one and most favorite fan! My favorite reveiewer :) Have a nice day! LOADS of love your way <3 xx

 

 

 

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 27: ♥ Chapter 27: Take Me Far, Far Away... ♥

Oh my GOD!!!!!!!! Where do I begin? First of all, I am so so so sooooooo sorry for not reviewing on the previous chapters, you know how life and school is. But oh my gosh like it is so much to take in!!!!! I cannot believe how much Michael is being so cold and distant towards Nita. I know he is hurting and in pain but come on man give the woman a little bit of slack would you?!?! My heart literally breaks for the two of them literally. I really want to commend you on how you are describing and portraying Michael with his Vitiligo. That is a really touchy subject to write about, but you write it flawlessly, but I would not expect anything less from you. ;) I honestly have no doubt in my mind that Michael did not go through this period of sadness and anger at one point in his life. You just make everything so believable and not to unbelievable you know? Also, will this story have a sad ending to it? Cause right now I am not seeing it lol! I honestly am just speechless right now about your writing. I know that you are a medical student but my god you rattle off all these words and procedures and I'm like what!!!!!! I am in total awe of you at this moment, because not only are you making an amazing story but a story that you can learn things about. I am taking a health course for school as an extra credit and some of the words you use really help me understand more of what I am learning in health so a big fat THANK YOU! :) Oh and then.....and THEN! We get to the end of this chapter! Ok can I just say right now that I seriously want to slap the you know what out of Michael at this moment. Any benefit of the doubt I gave Michael in the previous chapters GONE! Haha! Gurl, you need to help me restore my faith in Michael again. ;) I cannot wait to see how he gets himself out of this pickle. Oh and I also sent you an email regarding my story, I don't know if you got it? My email has been acting weird lately so can you maybe tell me if you got it so I know its working? I just cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!!!! Oh and I hope you get feeling much much MUCH better!!!! See you in the next chapter ;) Your loyal fan!

Author's Response:

Hey girl, mywaymj83 :) Oh that's alright... sure I missed you but I know what school's like lol! It's not your fault in the first place so you don't have to apologize :P HAHA didn't have someone to scold Michael lately and this has been a rollercoaster experience to finally get my precious readers who love Michael to pieces to finally scold him!! And I have to tell you its a pretty good feeling! ALL my readers are on Nita's side now :P I'm so glad you feel bad for both of them, really! Aw, Thank you, hon!!! Girl you are so sweet... seriously every time you review, I feel like I'm on a high hehe! Ah.. don't you think it's little too soon to talk about the ending girlfriend? :P Haha I'm a medical student but I also told you that I am a very very horrible one lol! Sometimes I don't understand lots of medical terms either haha! WOW That's really something that stays in my heart... thank you girl, really, I mean it!! Wow, at least I'm glad you're a good student, unlike me :D Yeah, the end really got you huh? I could picture your face lol! I can feel ya and I definitely know what you want to slap out of Michael ;) Oh, I will try my best, but I dont think my readers are gonna forgive Michael too soon... :P Oh yeah got the mail hun and I mailed you back :) Hope you got it! So sorry for the late reaply well you know me ;) Oh I'm working on the chapter but I will update it as soon as possible... I am feeling very better now, thanks to you!! :D Oh yeah, see you in the next chapter as well chika ;) I LOVE YOU!!!! <3 xoxo

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed
Date: Nov 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 28: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥

Oh no!!!! I am so sorry hun! :( I will pray you get feeling better soon. Get better girl I mean it!!!! :) sending big hugs your way, hospitals are not fun.

Author's Response:

HEY GIRL, mywaymj83 wow You are BACK!!!! I missed you!!!!! Thank you! Aw That's so sweet love, I'm feeling much better now :P Thanks for the warm hugs *hugging you back tightly* HAHA definitely not fun when you're the patient LOL! It's like everybody have something to order to you in hospital IMAO!! But I'm glad its finally over!! Take care, love you <3 xoxo

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 23: ♥ Chapter 23: Sugar And Spice ♥

OH MY GOSH GURL, YOU ARE UNSTOPPABLE!!!!!!!!!!! When I saw you updated again I was like :O then YAY! XD Let me just say you totally deserve a review for this. This chapter was like really sad, hot, and intense all at the same time in my opinion. Like some major shit has hit the fan here XD But my heart totally broke for Michael when Nita had broke the news to him about New York. I can see his point of view, then being a female I can totally see Nita's point of view. I do have mixed emotions about here going to New York fearing somebody will harm her or little Omer; but if she uses that knee to the safety deposit box trick she will be fine ;) But between you and me, I feel Michael will surprise her in New York with the shooting of BAD......maybe huh? ;) and I still am sticking with the story of Michael taking sleeping pills, and that is what he has tell her. But I am still put off by his resistance of marriage. Why? I mean, I know he is married to his work, but come on man, put a ring on her! Unless......oh my gosh another thought, unless he did have that vasectomy and he's afraid how she will react. But I highly doubt that. Anyway, another great chapter as usual! Thanks for the update, this really made my night, because i'm having my wisdom teeth taken out tomorrow and now this will take my mind off of it, so a big fat THANK YOU to you. Also, I was wondering something, and I know your probably incredible busy being Miss. Doctor and all ;) But would you mind taking a look at my stories and possibly telling me what I could do better? Because I really trust and respect your advice as a writer. But if you can't I completely understand. GREAT JOB!!!!!! Another A for you :)

Author's Response:

HEY Chicka! There you are :) LOL. Thanks hun! Haha I love how you predict things. But you are going to wait and watch. I'll try to update today or tomorrow :P Hmm... we'll see ;) Oh god, wisdom teeth?! Take care of yourself girl. My experience was a nightmare but I hope yours will be okay :D Hehe I'm nowhere near being a doctor, lol, I'm just a first year and a horrible student :P Oh sure hun, I swear when I get time, I'll definitely read it and leave reiviews ;) Thanks so much love, for always being there. I really appreciate that. The drama's about to unfold, stay tuned ;) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 22: ♥ Chapter 22: A Fool For You ♥

HI GURL!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my gosh, I am like so excited you updated!!!!!!!!!! You have no clue how happy this has made me!!! I have been dealing with some personal stuff lately and this chapter truly just made me relax and not think, kinda like Michael feels. Right now I have many things to say about this long and delicious chapter of yours ;) Well first of all I just want to congratulate you on the length of the chapter because I can honestly say that within the two years I have been on this site, I have never seen a chapter this long ever, so you get the A+ for today ;) Second, you writing and story is so out of this world that it truly is indescribable! Your use of adjectives and description of every single thing is phenomenal! I also loved the passion filled scenes.....they are always my favorite, especially your because you write them so beautiful and desirable that it doesn't make you feel like your reading porn or anything XD Anyway, I thought this chapter was one of your absolute bests, just every single thing. I love how Michael is portrayed how he is so sweet, shy, egotistic, and demanding at times. Plus I love how Nita challenges him, that is always such a hoot to read. But I also love Nita that she has so much common sense for her age. Nita is one of my favorite heroines because she is not dippy, not a gold digger, has common sense, head strong, and just overall a great person. I wanted to ask you, how did you know all those medical terms? Are you a medical student yourself and is that how you drew Nita as a Medical student? Also, those pictures you have is just astounding! How you ever do that I will never know. And that drawing of Nita, is so gorgeous, I can see why Michael likes her so much ;) XD But how did you ever have that drawing and put Michaels name to it?!?!? Like I have been sitting here literally and racking my brain over it :) But I am starting to get concerned for Michael. First of all when Nita didn't have any contraception and it seemed liked he looked nervous, then he doesn't want to marry Nita any time soon, then him being so tired. I personally feel that he was not using any of his sleeping pills during this trip and without them I think that's why he was so tired, but....we shall see. I cannot wait to see what your brilliant mind comes up with next. I honestly do not mind waiting for your story to update because when you do update it is exceptional writing and that makes it all worth the wait. Any reader who reads this story can honestly tell you definitely put time and effort into this story. A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ For you today ;) Thank you for the wonderful update, your loyal fan always mywaymj83

Author's Response:

OH. MY. GOD. That's all I could find to say.... :) Girl you made my day! Wow... Thank you, thank you and thank you so much love. :D Mwah! Yeah, I have been dealing lots of personal 'dramas' lately as well. You can tell me why I take this loooong to update :P Haha LOL I know. I couldn't edit the chapter lol. Wow thats a lot of appreciation... I tell you this is my the best review I have ever had :P Of course, I'm a medical student :D, I really should update my bio :P Just recently finished a exam, that's why I can't get these crazy medical terms out of my mind lol! Yeah, I designed Nita more from me, that's what we are good at aren't we, explaining our ownself? hehe. Haha, the picture and Michael's autograph...? its supposed to be a business secret but... Photoshop is wonderful *.* Mhmmm you are a very keen reader girl, every time, every review of yours doesn't even miss the tiniest detail of the chapter. I love you, mywaymj83. But you will see ;) Get ready for drama chicka... I can't wait to write the next chapter :P:P See now thats why I still continue doing this even in the middle of all the dramas going on in my life... despite the things you go through and the time and effort you put into it, when a reader come up and say something like that, every hard memories just disappear and only happiness remains. Thanks again, love <3 Have a great day! Lots of love <3 xx 

 

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 21: ♥ Chapter 21: Somewhere, Anywhere, Everywhere, Nowhere. ♥

HEY GURL!!!!!!!!! Your back, I'm so happy!!!!! Like when I saw you updated, I think my mouth hit the floor then back up again. XD Ok first off WOW, WOW, and WOW with this chapter! And like Oh God, how good is this chapter?!?!? I love how Michael and Nita interact between each other, it is so funny XD Although if I was Nita I would tell Michael to knock that flirting crap off you know? But I guess its ok if its JUST for funny. You had wrote a sentence that Michael had said that I can so relate too.


Michael let out a breath. "Because I'm shy, basically. But… I do the stupidest random shit when I get comfortable with someone."

Like, I cannot begin to explain how true this statement is for me. I know this is weird to say, but I'm weird period XD Anyway, I have to ask this which I know everybody is thinking, Is there going to be a sexy love scene? Pretty please with sugar on top!!!! If you do I will bless you in my prayers XD Also where do you do these photos of Michael and Nita? Do you do them? Or does someone else do them for you, because let me tell you, I have seen TONS of photo shop pictures and these do not hold a candle to them. AMAZING WORK! I love seeing their relationship progress and go forward. These chapters is such a treat you have no idea. Also, I did not know about that Jolie woman. Like wow, I did not know Michael did that, he was one smart cookie wasn't he. Anyho, i'll stop foaming at the mouth now XD I cannot wait for an update. Keep up the good work!!!!!! See you on the next chapter gurl, I'm hoping i'll be raving on how well you'll love scenes are XD See you!!!!! FYI this was a higher rating I would give you 10++++++++++++++++++ ;)

Author's Response:

HEY YOU!!! mywaymj83!! Girl I MISSED you and ur wonderful reviews!! LOL! I have to apologize to everyone of my readers because its just too much! I ve been such a lazy butt hehe!! THANK YOU love :) Hehe Ikr? I can relate myself to that sentence as well :P I get that u r a shy person as well... but have a problem with controlling your tongue when u get to know a person! Because thats exactly me :L Definitely there's going to be a love scene, of course, who are we talking about here, hello Michael Jackson?! lol Awww... A very special Thanks for the comment about my photoshopping skills. Of course I do them. No one else do something like that for ya'. When I started to photoshop for the first time, I sucked obviously. But it just got better. Thanks to the hundreads of tutorials I watched ;) You will see chicka XD Thanks again Pyt. Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 30: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! There you are!!!! I have missed you hun! Gosh, you have made my Sunday night fantastic now! I am so sorry for all your troubles, life really sucks sometimes. But to your question, a hundred thousand billion times YES!!!!! Cannot wait to see it!!!!! Smooches!!! xoxo

Author's Response:

OH MY GOD GIRL!!!! :D :D How are you!!! I MISSED YOU! I couldn't even been able to reply to your last mail, I'm ssoooo sorry!!! Lol at least happy to make ya glad! :P Ah, it's okay now, I guess, though life still sucks haha! ;) Gosh Thanks luv, oh I gotta finish this story!! I know I have to and the update's 'almost' ready, and hopefully up tomorrow :P *Hugs and kisses*!!! I hope at least your life is going well, or at least may be less-sucking lol! As always, your review made my day, luv!!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Sep 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 24: ♥ Chapter 24: BAD I - New York, New York. ♥

Hi gurl, I was feeling a bit better and I wanted to tell you that you have nothing to worry about with your story. I truly think your story is the best on this site and that you should feel very proud for creating such a mind blowing story. But I totally get where you are coming from, sometimes as writers we feel what is the word? Unappreciated I suppose. But don't loose hope on this, just remember you will always have me as a fan :) Honestly don't worry, everybody on here understands that people are busy. :)

Author's Response:

Hey girl :) Thanks for stepping up and saying such words... and being always there for me, I really mean it!!! Yeah, I guess almost all writers in MJ Fiction have problems with this. Aw, honey, I'm so lucky to have you ! Much love <3 xx  

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 20: ♥ Chapter 20: Man Proposes, Woman disposes ♥

WOW, just WOW!!!! Another great one. I love how Michael is being so protective of her, I can so see him being that way in real life. But I am a little confused about the ending??? Is Michael getting kidnapped, or is it a suprise for Nita??? Right now I don't know if I should be excited or scared??? Keep them coming girl!!!! Btw how do you make those photos with Nita and Michael?? It looks so real.

Author's Response:

Hi Chicka :) Thanks so much hun... you light my mood always! Hehe I'm sorry I have been confusing guys so much lately. You will soon know why though ;) Hehe you should be both excited and scared lol! Aw, the photos... Thanks girl. Photoshop is wonderful. You can't say how grateful I am to that software... :D More photoshop pics will be in next chapter ;) Thanks again hun for your lovely review! A big hug for ya! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

Okay where can I start???? First of what the F*** is Nita doing with that man?!?!?!?!? Now I will give her the benifit of the doubt and say he could have raped her?? But if that was his intention earlier Nita would have ran to Michael for protection, not to tell him to leave her alone!!! Does she need sex that bad that she'll randomaly screw a co-worker???? Poor Michael after he finally realized his love for her and now this. Its now probably going to take a while for him to rekindle those feelings for her again. I swear this story gets more interesting as you continue to write! This story is one of the best of read on this site. Plus I want to thank you for for updating today, I have a bad cold and this lifted my spirts up. This chapter was not boring at all, this was a great and shocking chapter, great job. Two thumbs up!!!!!!

Author's Response:

HEY Girl!!!! Hehe Calm down... easy there Chicka! LOL! You will see! That's all I gotta say about Nita's part :D Michael's shattered, that's for sure! The madness needs an end don't ya think? And its not too far away. In fact its real close ;) WOW Thanks SO much hun :) Gosh that's too much! I really appreciate it! Love ya' girl! Oh god, really? I know how cold is *sighs* Take care of yourself girl. Have some hot soup and more chicken with pepper and chilly. Avoid the oily ones though. Hope you feel better soon :) Ah Thanks again girlfriend! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Btw, I love the pictures at the beginning at each chapter, I love them!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much hun... I thought it would be easy for you guys to visualize :) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥

Lol! Michael is so funny when he's jealous. I wish he was jealous over me *sighs* I can't wait to see the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

Hehe IKR? :P Thanks for reading and reviewing hun :) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: ♥ Chapter 12: Leaves Of Grass ♥

Oh I hope they can become a couple soon, and be happy togehter. I can't wait to see more.

Author's Response:

Hey girl :) Just one more chapter... and all your questions will be answered trust me ;) Next update will asap <3 xx

Reviewer: mywaymj83 Signed
Date: Oct 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥

Me being the stupid air head that I am wrote in my first rewiew for this chapter put "Not saying he love her" I mean saying he loves her. Okay I'm glad I got that said now.

Author's Response:

Haha, I dont know but I know one thing for certain, you are not an airhead :P Oh! Yes, his heart's saying he love her but his lips never utter those words out easily :D We'll wait and watch how it turn out... *.* xx