Penname: Zendaya [Contact] Real name: Breanna
Member Since: Jun 06, 2012
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Age: 18-21
Gender: Female
Real Name: Breanna
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Summary:

Two Dancers, One Love

Ciara Harris is very passionate about dance. Graduated from the University of California in Berkeley with a bachelor’s in Dance and obtained a choreographer’s license. She still lives in California with her best friend and two siblings nearby. She is a huge fan of Michael Jackson, and when the opportunity to meet and dance for him is offered, she jumps at the chance.

Michael Jackson is known as Mr. Thriller and has sold the biggest selling album of all time. When life gets hectic, he turns to dance as escapism. When he meets Ciara, he is smitten by her beauty and dancing ability. He has to have her, and will stop at nothing to get her.

These two will have you laughing, crying, and pissed. Join them as they endure love, fun, good times, hell, and drama.

 

Ciara  Michael                                                                                  

This story is set in the 80s, but modern technology is used and most artists and songs of today and after the 1980s are used.


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Dangerous: 1991-1993, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48068 Read Count: 9168
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2014 Updated: Sep 21, 2014
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: The Real Michael Jackson

Lord!!!! I'm sitting here reading this with my eyes wide as fuck. Mike was blunt as hell. Damn. He was like fuck it ima be the real MJ now. Kml. You go boooooy!!! And the lines you used from one of his short films was from Ghosts. I love that part cause he scared the hell out of them poor towns people lol. Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

I love that part in Ghosts; especially when his eyes went wide when he said "Game time". 

You'll see more of blunt Mike, cause I like blunt Mike......

and gangta Michael---if you know what I mean Zendaya!!!! LOL

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: I'm In Trouble

Damn! That was hotter than hot. Ooh wee Jesuuuuus! This chapter was on point. But she just had to tease him. CiCi, you did your thang girl. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks Zendaya. I'm loving your story by the way. 

I'm so glad you brought it back.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 15: I Gotch You

Thanks for the shoutout lol. It's so. Ute how she stutter around Mike so much. And Mike just can't control his hormones every time he's staring at her ass. Please continue.



Author's Response:

You're welcome. They make each other nervous when they are close like that. 

Mike is gonna get his though. Thanks for reviewing Zendaya.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Thinking of a Master Plan

I really and truly think is plan was clever. Like he really didnt make her do anything but being a nervous wreck, anxious and knocking down people all because she thought he had something planned. Now that's what you call a genius.



Author's Response:

LOL I know. She now knows what Mike is capable of; she better watch her back.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: OOPS

Oh God. I believe she ripped something. Lmao!!!!! Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

You'll know when the next chapter comes!!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: May 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Are You Fuckin' Kidding Me?

Oh no Mike. Why on Earth so do you do that. Lawd. I wonder what he got up his sleeve. Excellent chapter. Please continue. 



Author's Response:

Thank you Zendaya!!! I will definitely continue.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Let the Games Begin

OMG!!!! I'm dying of laughter over here. They really had him doing Crazy in Love by Bee and doing exactly what she did in her video. Then got Mike twerking and shit. Rotf! Just picture him in real life actually doing all of those things. That would make my damn day. But the chapter was great/hella funny. Please update soon cause I'm anxious to know what Ciara has for Mike. Lawd! 



Author's Response:

I'm super glad you enjoyed the chapter; hopefully next chapter will have you laughing harder. I will most definitely be updating soon.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Sweet Revenge

I really thought she was gonna have him dressed as a drag queen but I it turned out to be Prince. I thought this chapter was hella funny. My favorite line from this chapter is when Mike told ciara "Pick up your mouth, baby. Don't wanna catch flies" in Prince voice. I was dying. But excellent chapter. Keep up the good work :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Yes

Awww Mikey Mike is blushing. They so cute. I wish they hurry up and get together already. Im dying for that to happen but of course, they have to take things slow. And good chapter by the way. 



Author's Response:

Thanks you!!!!

Like almost every romance story, the guy always gets the girl.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: I've Lost Control

Omg. It's getting hot fr fr lol. Please update soon. Story is amazing so far :)  



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I will update soon, I promise.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: What the Hell?

Sweet Chris and Aaliyah are so cute together. And I see Mike and Cici about to steal a peck from each other. I wish they hurry the hell up and get together like fr fr. Like soon. Great story by the way. Update soon. 



Author's Response:

I kinda wanna take things slow for Mike and Ci Ci; but they will be together.

You have to be patient with me sweetie pie. :)

I will definitely update soon, and thank you for loving the story Zendaya!!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Phone Convos (Part 3)

Ciara and her siblings are such strong people. I mean, to lose both of your parents then two years later your grandmother. Those three are real soldiers foreal. This chapter was wonderful. By the way, sorry for the mess up typing from last review. Lol. The keyboard on my Kindle tablet is always making corrections for me. Anyway, keep up the good work! *Two thumbs up*



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetheart!!! At least you still got your tablet; my Kindle is fucked up. Hahaha.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Phone Convos (Part 2)

Now they done went to pleasuring themselves, lol. And Mike's fantasy of CiCi. Laawd! And of course it would be sexy as fuck to see Michael watching me pleasure myself. Hell, instead of watching he should be thrusting Mikezilla on and put of me. I'm just saying. Lol. But great chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL. You are hilarious Zendaya. Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Friendship

Mike is a total mess. Kml. Always gotta be messing with ciara. 



Author's Response:

Of course he has to; he's a big kid, and Ciara is just as bad. LOL

Thanks for reviewing!!!!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Phone Convos

Lawd have mercy. These two are NASTAAAAY!!!! Kml. Also, I love the Jackson's Variety Show. Great chapter. It got me feeling some type of way now. 



Author's Response:

LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it. There will be more.