Penname: Zendaya [Contact] Real name: Breanna
Member Since: Jun 06, 2012
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Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
Real Name: Breanna
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Summary:

Regina McNeil has worked as Michael Jackson's personal chef for 5 years,and their chemistry is evident. But what happens when Michael falls for one of Regina's enemies? Will they ever be together, or will the stress and drama of their lives be too much to handle? 

Dangerous/Bad Era, 1990

WARNING: SEXUAL CONTENT/ MATURE LANGUAGE.

Disclaimer: I own nothing except for the plot of this story. No copyright infringement intended.

 Michael  Regina Alicia Miranda Webb


Categories: Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 102381 Read Count: 26922
[Report This] Published: Jan 03, 2011 Updated: Jul 27, 2014
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 25, 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I'm so glad you started back writing. I so love this story its really great. Please update soon :)

Summary:

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Image created by; MikesPYT because shes the best ;)

 The Memoirs of Michael and Remi...

Michael meets Remi Blackwood, a librarian working part time at a childrens library.They both instantly hit it off, and soon become romantically involved.The timing of their relationship clashes with Michael's productions of short films,Dangerous tour preperations and other drama.Would Remi be able to handle the sudden fame and attention of being with Michael?

They would have to face the Madness In The Music...

 


Categories: Adult, Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 388981 Read Count: 90316
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2011 Updated: Jul 25, 2014
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 117

Omg! I hope they dont get a divorce but then again Mike fucked up and Lisa's in the picture which her ass need to go, like, now. Lol. But i hope they do work things out. And please dont let them get a divorce please. Im beggin ya. I love Remi and Mike together. I will literally cry my ass off if they do. :( :( :( I hope you update soon. 



Author's Response:

Zendaya is such a beautiful name!!, I'm sorry ;D

And ummm I really hope that they don't get a divorce too. Michael definetly has fucked up with the Lisa situation and he needs to let her go. I'm sure Remi has a small place in her heart to forgive him, she's loves him too deep. And pleeeeeease don't cry if they do!! *hugs you* Lets hope they work it out.

;p xxx

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 118

I so love this story. And the phone conversation the Mike and Remi had, had me a lil scared. It sounds like she wanted to give him a chance but then again dont. And Jennifer and the paps, hell I'll be cursing them out too. But I'm glad she talked to Remi about her decision on divorce and everything that's going on. I mean, to me it would be a mistake. All this shit started just from that kid and the accussations and stuff and now this thot (Lisa) that it's tearing them apart and i dont want that. I hope Remi come to her senses and realize what she's doing isn't worth giving up on her marriage. And once Michael recovers from his surgery, he WILL definitely need to step up and really save is marriage, not try, he NEEDS to. Divorce IS NOT an option!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Oooooh Breanna I'm really happy you love this story!

Thank you so much and I really appreciate that, it makes me all pumped up to write more chapters lol.

Back to the reviewing, I get what you mean like it was good they spoke on the phone, but the conversation didn't really go anywhere or at least come to a decison. He pretty much told her he loved her but she's still not convinced and her defence she kinda has a good reason to. The divorce thing is a serious decison to make lets really hope that these two have a serious mature conversation about it. And you're definetly right, this whole mess all spawned straight from some kid Remi met at an arcade, Jordie Chandler. Its really sad. 

As far as Michael recovering from scalp surgery, he needs to be careful with himself regarding medication.

He needs to step it up!!

 

;p xxx

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Apr 03, 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 119A

Awww poor Mike breaking down made me want to cry. Im so glad he has such a wonderful friend like Liz. I love her so much. She's been there for him through hell and back and its great to know that he have someone like her in his life. I'm also happy that Remi watched those tapes. She really needed to in order to see all the great times that she and Michael shared together and that she shouldn't give up on him so fast all because of his wrong doing. I mean, he's not perfect so of course he's gonna make some mistakes in life. But she really cant put all of the blame on him cause she's made some mistakes as well too. But im happy that she realized that Mike is the only man she's gonna ever love and she is the only woman that he's ever gonna love until death do the part. 

Question: How did you know my real name was Breanna? :)

Great chapter by the way. I can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Awww Mike makes us all want to cry. Its really sad whats happening and his wife's not physically there to support him only makes it worse. Least he has Liz, imagine if she wasn't there?! :O they've been friends since he was a teenager so if its not Remi or his mother he'll listen to then its her. And yeah I glad your happy that she watched the tapes, it really did slap her into focus and make her remember all the great memories they've made. Michael's not perfect and neither is she.

Annnnnd Breanna, I found out on your user page loooool. I like to address people by their first names, makes it more personal and fun! ;p xxx

Thank you for liking this chapter and hope you like the next one...

Summary:

The city of Brookyln, the home to all sorts of gangs, including the notorious "Rebels" led by Mini Max and his best friend, Michael Jackson. They stick together like a family, but one night when Michael is walking the streets alone, he gets outnumbered and jumped by men and left in an alley for death to take him away. Fortunately, help came his way and he finds himself falling for this beautiful stranger. Will his buddies kick him out of the gang because he isn't "bad" anymore, or will his love for his crush make him forget about them and the world denying his love?

*Based off of the "Bad" music video

PLEASE REVIEW!!! YOUR REVIEWS MAKE ME SMILE!!!

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The Rebels


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 83462 Read Count: 51984
[Report This] Published: Jul 28, 2011 Updated: Oct 24, 2011
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jan 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I Love thisthis. keep up the good work!!!(:

Summary:



The Sequel to Who Do You Love?

Summary:


Leaving all of the Jacksons behind, Lexi is forced into Secret Protective Services in order to protect herself from the mysterious attacker that has been haunting her since the beginning of her relationship with Michael.

Unable to completely cut ties with the only true family she has ever known, Lex refuses to go far and when she reenters their lives with her appearance altered, their grief keeps them from recognizing her and she is forced to watch helplessly as the people she loves grieves.


What will happen when Lexi discovers the "death" she was forced to fake after her shooting has destroyed Michael, making him dependent on prescription drugs and how will she react to finding Diana has taken advantage of her absence to prey on a grieving Michael?


How will Janet deal with the death of her closest friend and the knowledge that she treated her so poorly before she lost her?

What will happen when Lexi finally exposes her identity? Will Michael and Janet be relieved, or cut her out of her lives for not sharing she is alive?  Will her attacker finally be exposed? Or will they eventually track her down and finish what they thought was already done?





     



Disclaimer:
All publicly recognized characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are property of the authors. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: My Best Friend's Brother
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 80736 Read Count: 19437
[Report This] Published: Jan 15, 2012 Updated: Jan 19, 2014
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jan 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty-Two

great story

Summary:

For 8 year old Madelyn Johannson, a father's love is something she's always wanted and never known. To her, her father's identity is a huge mystery.
After many years of suspicion and longing she finally decides to uncover her father's real identity who turns out to be
Michael Jackson the 24 year old caviler, sarcastic, self centered and womanizing bachelor that is secretly a sad and lonely superstar.


How will Michael take being a daddy?????
Will he except Madelyn as his daughter??
Will Maddie finally experience the fatherly love she's always longed for????

Read to find out!!!! Photobucket


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Hurt/Comfort, Humor
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Death
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8850 Read Count: 9974
[Report This] Published: Jan 28, 2012 Updated: Nov 23, 2013
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jan 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Daddy's Day

good



Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary:

Razlina Bridges is a young, wild and smart mouth teenager who has to leave her home down south to move up north because her mother has been offered a job that she couldn't refuse. Being Razlina is somewhat of a tomboy, she was not really accepted at home and she thinks of herself as a loner. But what happens when Razlina meets Michael Jackson, the most popular guy in school, who is also a smart alec? Will the two go slashing at each others throats or will they begin to gain feelings for each other?

*Michael is not famous in this story*

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of giveintothefire. The original characters and plot are mine and should not be used without my permission.  I am in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 327869 Read Count: 56242
[Report This] Published: Mar 14, 2012 Updated: Oct 03, 2014
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Home Sweet Home...Or Is It?

This is my first time reviewing for this story but I'll like to say this story is Fantastic. I love it. You should keep updating as much as can..like everyday if that's possible for you but keep up the good work though. And Raz cousins better not try nothing with mike n ike cause all hell is gone break loose. Please update soon i wanna see some drama!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Awww well thank you honey. I'll try to update as much as I can but my life is really busy :/ And you'll see what happens very soon. Hopefully I'll be able to update this weekend ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Oct 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 59: How Come He Don't Want Me?

The chapter was very good. Hope you update pretty soon



Author's Response:

Thank you honey. I'll try :)

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Dec 25, 2013 Title: Chapter 62: I Fucked Up

Damn. Raz really did fucked up. Poor thing. And mike aint making it no better but i feel where he's coming from tho. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

She did :/ And he's just as bad *sigh* but he did have a point. And I'll try!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 70: I Don't Want Nobody Else But You

Damn, that was hot. Lol. You did such a wonderful job writing this chapter. It was so...incredible. 



Author's Response:

"Damn, that was hot."<--

lol Thank you!!!! I try. I try. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 71: You Play Too Much

Mike and Raz are so cute together. Gosh, I just love them. They remind me of me and boyfriend minus the sex. Lol. But keep up the good work. 



Author's Response:

Awww really? You guys must have a very entertaining relationship lol! But thanks!

Summary:

I decided to come out of retirement for a little while, and write a sequel to the previous Mike/Keisha story Rocked Worlds.

Michael Jackson and Keisha Devin-Jackson have everything they've always wanted, but what does change mean for a couple who thrives on consistency?  What happens after marriage and kids?


Categories: Adult, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131032 Read Count: 30761
[Report This] Published: Nov 04, 2012 Updated: Jul 04, 2014
Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50--Untitled

Michael has really gone CRAZY!!!!!!!!! I don't even know what to say. Everything is just crazy as fuck now but i still love the story. 

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 51--Sugarcoating

Smdh. Like, are they seriously gonna get a divorce now? Noooooooo! Mike, your stupid ass need to do something. Why are you doing this to Ki and the kids? Man, he's fucking up BIG time. Like, he's literally tossing out of his life like they are some fucking trash. Maaan!!!! I'm mad/upset/angry/ everything but happy now. Fuck you Michael Joseph Jackson. I can just eff him up.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52--The Moon Song

Oh my God. Ki is preggos!!!! And Mike is so into keeping tabs on her and shit. Like, nigga? Did you not tell the woman to leave your ass and find somebody else but you can keep tabs on what she's doing? Who does that? Lol. Girl keep up the good work. I love this story.



Author's Response:

he told her to leave...not to find someone else...hahahaha.