Penname: BeforeYouJudgeMe [Contact] Real name: Kei
Member Since: Jan 28, 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Michael is my everything.


Gender: Female
Age: 18-21
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Summary:

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Categories: Adventure, Fantasy, Horror, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17568 Read Count: 1524
[Report This] Published: Oct 22, 2012 Updated: Nov 29, 2012
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A perfect Halloween-related story. I really enjoyed it, and I gotta admit there were moments that made me jump out of my skin lol. Update soon!



Author's Response: Aww... were there really? I didn't think this would be scary enough! Lol thanks for the review! I'm so glad you like this story. Much L.O.V.E.

Summary:

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Michael was always a goodie-two-shoes; he was a straight-A student, volunteered at the community center, tutored younger kids, and stayed away from the drugs.

But that all changes after he’s found guilty of a crime he didn’t commit...

His teachers hate him. His peers shun him. His family disowns him.

The court forces him to go to a boarding school for other delinquents like himself to learn his lesson. He’s all on his own.

Being such a good student, he tries to keep a good attitude at the school, but it gets increasingly harder when his roommate, Marilyn, turns out to be straight from the nut house!

Michael soon learns that Marilyn is absolutely Hell bent on dragging Michael into his world of women, drugs, sex, violence, and alcohol. Marilyn keeps Michael trapped in his universe; Michael wants out, and fast!

But then he meets a girl, and everything changes.

Michael changes. Marilyn changes.

Getting out now seems like a bitter-sweet option to Michael, and his world is turned upside down as he continues to explore the reality of a rebel, and begins to enjoy it...

“Welcome to Seacrest School, Mr Jackson...”

 


Categories: Adult, Horror, Humor, Romance, Suspense
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30388 Read Count: 2621
[Report This] Published: Nov 30, 2012 Updated: May 26, 2013
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Update soon! This story has me hooked :D



Author's Response:

I'll try my best :) Glad you like it!

Summary:

This story is a challenge by NatashaRosee. She specified the following:

-A scene where Michael was naked

-A sex scene involving Martin Bashir

-Princess Diana in a pink thong

-One Direction

-KFC party

-President and/or Mrs Obama

I had fun with this short story :D I hope you do to:D


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Fantasy, Humor, Slash, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: Graphic Depictions of Violence, Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Rape
Challenges: Funny Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1943 Read Count: 588
[Report This] Published: Mar 03, 2013 Updated: Mar 03, 2013
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Oh What a Night

Lol I loved this story. It was hilarious and well written. I'm definately gonna read the longer version ;)



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much. I haven't had much time to keep writing the long version but there is a few chapters there. It's called 'Off the Wall', knowing that someone is reading it might just give me the boost I need to continue. Thanks again x mwah x

Summary:

            Michael Jackson is just another band geek at high school. Not popular, not athletic and has never even kissed a girl in his life. But one year when he goes to band camp, there was a sudden mistake and all the popular kids and jocks end up being stuck there at band camp instead of going to their island paradise for summer vacation.

Will he find summer love? Will he be tortured by bullies? Will he become popular? Will his friends turn their backs on him? 

- Takes Place In The Thriller Era -


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Romance, Humor, Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22559 Read Count: 48340
[Report This] Published: Mar 16, 2013 Updated: Jul 10, 2013
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Apr 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Military Cadet

Lol I loved this chapter. The dirty comments were funny and Michael getting revenge was quite sexy. Especially for a "Band Geek" ;)

 

"Girl I'll be whatever you want me to be" - one of my favorite lines XD



Author's Response:

Yeah I basically wrote the chapter all dramatic but then I go back and insert all possible dirty comments LOL

 

and yes michael is a big band geek ;)

Summary:

"You can't help anyone who doesn't want help"

Drugs, violence, and rape makes up this uneducated penitentiary they call, Wimbley St. Thomas High School.

Teachers don't give a damn.

Students don't give a damn.

You have gang members who aren't afraid to bust a cap in yo ass if they feel threatened.

Females who have been raped numerous of times and do nothing about it.

Students fight students.

Students fight teachers.

No one is safe. No one is motivated yet they don't want the school to shut down, why? Because the school is all they got. Some don't have homes so they stay in the school. Some don't have food so they steal food from the school to feed their families.

This school needs help, but is anyone willing to provide it?

 

 

This story is dedicated to Rate who has been everyone's number one fan and biggest cheerleader. I hope you enjoy it


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Mystery, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Racism, Rape, Self-Harm
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23764 Read Count: 4842
[Report This] Published: Jun 10, 2013 Updated: Oct 26, 2013
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jun 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Taking Control

I literally fell in love with this story when I first read the title lol. But please continue soon. You got me hooked already. c:



Author's Response:

Aww thanks so much!!!!! I'll update some time today

Summary:

 

Michael has always taken care of his twin brother Milo, who suffers from an illness that makes him more needy than most. Living in the lap of luxury makes it so that taking care of Milo isn't really all that hard. But when the twins get into trouble, and are cut off from their comfy life, how will they survive? How will Michael take care of his brother then?

 

(Other languages will be spoken within this story. Mostly Patwa(Patois) Translations will be in brackets of some sort. Also my Patwa is horrid and I am using a translator for 90% of what is written so it will not always be accurate. Dont judge me! Lol


Categories: Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7016 Read Count: 450
[Report This] Published: Aug 18, 2013 Updated: Aug 18, 2013
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm in love with this story and the twins. Update soon! :)



Author's Response: We will!

Summary:

Inspired by the Remember The Time Music video.

Queen Madara has never been happy as the wife of Pharaoh Rameses of Egypt. She wants to be with the man she has fallen in love with ever since she became of age, a mysterious Roman magician called the Gold Magician, who disappeared right after he confessed his love for her and the day before she would be married to the Pharaoh. Before he left, Madara only got his real name, Michael. When Michael returns as a performer for the royal palace, their love is reborn, but the Pharaoh is not pleased. How long could they last without being beheaded? All they have to do to keep their love alive is remember the time.


Categories: Dangerous: 1991-1993, Fantasy, Romance, Song Fics, Suspense, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Emotional Abuse
Challenges: Remember The Time Song Fic, Remember the Time Creative Corner!
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21832 Read Count: 3413
[Report This] Published: Sep 11, 2013 Updated: Dec 30, 2013
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: The Flight of the Dove

I hope she soon reunites with Michael. It must be heart-wrenching to stay in a hopeless marriage and long for someone who is so far away. Please continue!

Summary:

FORMALLY TITLED: Insanity's Corner thumb


 

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"I ain't do sh*t! ...If anything, that Ni**a framed me!"

"Leave me alone! I'm tired of you messin' with me - Stop it-! STOP!"

"You ain't no friend of mine..."

"Annie... Are you okay?"

"Speechless..... That is how you make me feel..."

"You have never seen my face before.... You don't know me... Oh, no.

You will never see my face again.... You don't know me... Uh-oh!"

"So let the performance start.... HA!"

***Short Stories***

***Also, the Warnings might be off, depends on the story***


*** UPDATE ON 2/5/2014***

The End

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Categories: Adventure, Fantasy, Horror, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance, Song Fics, Lyrics
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Alcohol Abuse, Anorexia, Death, Domestic Abuse, Drug Abuse, Emotional Abuse, Racism, Rape, Self-Harm, Suicide
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5558 Read Count: 1138
[Report This] Published: Nov 17, 2013 Updated: Feb 05, 2014
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 26, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: The House of Undesirables

The introduction was great. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Summary:

So you're probably wondering who I am, am I talking to you, why am I talking to you, blah blah blah...

Well here's a filler on me...

My name is Jennifer, J, Jen and anything else I'm called...

And I just turned 18...

A lot of unbelievable things have happened in my life, including winning the lottery-but this is by far the craziest. This is my story...whether or not you believe it is up to you...

WARNING: SEXUAL CONTENT!!!


Categories: Adult, Fantasy, Humor, Romance, Trigger Warning!
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: 9 M's + 1 J series
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60314 Read Count: 50539
[Report This] Published: Feb 07, 2014 Updated: Nov 14, 2014
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Surprise!

This is one of the best stories I've read on here. You're the second person I know to use multiple MJ's and honestly, I love these type of plots. You've inspired me to write with different Michael's in one story because I was unsure at first. Your story really helped me :)



Author's Response:

Wow. Like OMG I really can't tell you how much that means to me...

I never had someone tell me that I inspired them. I'm glad I'm able to help you. Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Rock, Paper, Scissors Explaining and Turning Around For the Better

Can't wait for the next update :)

Summary:

With the new found fame after the drop of Thriller and the stress of his manipulative relationship with his life long crush, Diana Ross, Michael returns home only to find a Diary containing the dark secrets to his ex childhood friend that he blew off years prior, and becomes determined to commence their friendship.

Aaliyah is now a sexy, tatted up, bartender at a popular bar. Hearing the name Michael Jackson makes her cringe and roll her eyes and she tries her very best to dodge him every way she can but with a name like Michael Jackson and the man behind it she fails miserably.

Will she be willing to rekindle their friendship and possibly have it blossom into something more? Or will it be a repeat of what happened before?

 


Categories: Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Some Scenes of a Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 165662 Read Count: 21050
[Report This] Published: Nov 14, 2014 Updated: Jul 09, 2018
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jan 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: CHAPTER 1 || Forgiven? Yes. Like? No.

I absolutely love this! Your first chapter has me hooked already, and it's refreshing to see more African-American characters. I'll definitely keep reading!

Summary:

When Michael has to work late on his birthday, his friend Claudette decides to give him a birthday surprise.    



Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Humor, One Shot
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2507 Read Count: 805
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2015 Updated: May 09, 2015
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 05, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Summary: Past Featured Storycenter



Disclaimer: Remember, this is a work of fiction. Dates, events, and people have been changed to fit my vision.


Categories: HIStory: 1995-1999, Adult, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Characters: Lisa Marie Presley, Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: Erotica, Some Scenes of an Explicit Sexual Nature, Strong Language
Trigger Warnings: Death, Neglect
Series: None
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 206484 Read Count: 39779
[Report This] Published: Sep 10, 2016 Updated: Jan 02, 2018
Reviewer: BeforeYouJudgeMe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Mar 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 29, Part 2

I'm glad you updated, I was so excited! I love them as a couple. They're so cute together, espeically when they exchange silly dialogues and kid around. Can't wait for the next chapter.