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Michael Jackson and Quincy Jones are close friends for years. They're like father and son and trust each other deeply.
But one day, Michael will meet the one who will become everything to him. A young and beautiful woman...who will be Quincy's youngest daughter Kayliah, 17 years old.
Will they take the risk to live this forbidden love?...Will Quincy discover who is the one who make his daughter happy?
Categories: Romance, Adult, Thriller: 1982-1983
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83870 Read Count: 24185
Date: Sep 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Argh! I thought they were gunna get it on! I was so excited! But I guess she's still 17 so I won't be seeing any of that for awhile ;)
The dinner was cute! I feel Kayliah's pain when she couldn't use the chopsticks, lmao! I'm horrible with those! I usually just eat it with my fingers. More efficient that way ;)
Oooh Quincy's really suspicious now! I hope he doesn't find out... and if he does I hope he doesn't get angry because Michael and Kayliah are SOOOO cute together! <3 My favourite couple on this site! XD
Author's Response:
No not yet.Kayliah isn't 18 yet but she will very soon ;)...But I planned an idea that won't be appreciated by my readers I guess lol.
Me too, that's why I wrote this part about the chopsticks.I tried many times but it never worked with me lol. I really feel like Kayliah when there are chopsticks around lol.
Yeah he gets suspicious...I mean really suspicious.You'll see in the next chapter.
Really your favorite couple on this site? Well I'm more than honored and happy :-) Thank you girl!!
Date: Sep 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Ooh I knew she'd get scared about it! I can understand though, I mean, not only will the intimacy changed in their relationship, but so will a lot of things. Like you mentioned, it won't be illegal anymore so they won't have to worry as much.
Lmao! The part with janet reading off the list had me smiling and laughing! I can only imagine how awkward that would be! At least it was Janet though, and they're close so it probably wasn't as awkward as I thought it was. Haha!
So good, one of my faourite stories ever! You write so well! You don't rush through anything and you move at a really good pace! Plus the grammar and stuff is pretty good! I really like this story; a lot! I'll be waiting anxiously for the next update! :D
Author's Response:
Yeah I think it's pretty normal she's scared about this. A lot of things changed after a first time.
I liked to write this part with Janet.In my stories, Janet is always the one to who Michael is the closest with and there are always funny moments like this.
I'm really happy you like this story so much.Thank you very much.About the grammar and stuff, I try to do my best, being french but fortunately it seems to work pretty well lol.
I like to take the things slow sometimes. I know people are waiting for sex scenes and sexy things but I don't write sex scenes for writing a sex scene lol. I think that a story can be good without a lot of sex scenes...But don't worry, that don't mean my story won't contain naughty scenes lol.
Date: Oct 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Adult chapter
Omj that definitely wasn't what I expected! :O But I think the fact that they didn't necessarily go to the end might have been good in a way. It proved to Kayliah that Michael doesn't just want her for the sex, but because he really loves her (like he said) <3
Lmao I like how you added that it's not from a personal experience
The wait between updates can be good though, because it just makes me more excited when I see it in the recents! :D
Author's Response:
Yeah I know, I wanted to try different things and their age difference was something that allow me this. At first, I wanted Michael to say he loves her when they were having sex but it could be too expected.
Yeah it was my funny line of the day lol...You'll think I'm kidding but on another website, a girl asked me this in a joke you know. And I was like, they will really think I used my own experience? xD lol
It won't be as long as it was this time anymore.It's just that I got family's stuff last week and I catched a very bad cold to my cousin's wedding this weekend. Now I'm fine and back with my updates! lol
Date: Oct 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Aww! <3 I love how sweet Michael is. I really like Brianna too! She's such a great sister to Kay!
I'm happy that Kayliah has realised now that's it's normal and nothing to be embarrassed about! I think everythign will go by smoother the next time ! :D
Author's Response:
Yeah Michael is so sweet...I can't write another Michael than that. I would like to try in a next fanfic but I don't know if I can't write a no cute Michael lol.
Now she totally understood it and she just has to let her fear aside and trust Michael. He proved her she can do it so we'll see next time.
Brianna is great indeed :-)
Date: Nov 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Adult chapter
Aww! <3 I loved this! It was so sweet and hot! So good! I love love love love this! I'm glad that it worked well and that Michael went slow for her and took it easy, making sure that she was comfortable XD
Author's Response:
Thank you sweety, I'm happy you loved it!
Yeah he took everything slow and she was comfortable, even more than that lol. She had a perfect first time I think lol
Date: Nov 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Wow, I'm so stupid! I went to go read the next update and I saw that this chapter didn't have a review and I was like "whoa, I review on every chapter, how is this possible?!" So I checked it out and I realised that I missed it some how! Sorry! :(
Anyway, I loved this chapter. I'm glad Michael's helping her! I think it'll totally strengthen their relationship all the more! Hopefully Kayliha will be able to make a career out of this! :D
Author's Response:
You don't have to be sorry girl. I know you're reviewing everytime so I won't be mad at you if you forgot one chapter lol...And when there's a sexual chapter, the readers often forget to review on the chapter before this one lol.
It will strenght their relationship and will bring something unexpected...
Date: Nov 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Oh my God... While reading this chapter I was all happy and I thought this was going to be one of those cute chapters and then all of a sudden HERE COMES QUINCY and ruins the happiness! Wow... I can hardly believe this! Honest! Oh my God... I hope thye do something about it because a month is a long time and Michael's right, Quincy's gunna be totally on them!
Author's Response:
I know this chapter began really well but then Quincy arrived! I didn't want it at the beginning but I thought I needed him to come back in the story.
They're living a forbidden love, hidden from him so sometimes this kind of situations has to happen. It keeps the drama...
About Quincy being on them...Well we'll see...
Date: Nov 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Yay! I'm glad Michael's reaction was good!
What Janet said was so true, Kayliah is like Quincy's little princess. It's even like that in my family, so I could totally relate to that! lol!
Telling Michael's mum wouldn't be too bad... I mean, Kayliah probably wouldn't mind since her mum knows, but the last sentence when it said that it could be dangerous is totally true. The more people that know the higher chance that the secret might get out before they want it to..
Author's Response:
Yeah it's good but he didn't have the choice...And to see that someone close to Kayliah took the news well was a relief for him...
Yeah I know what is it, being the only girl in the family...1 brother, 2 cousins and me...I'm the little princess lol
I didn't write the chapter yet about Michael telling his mother, but I think that more persons will be involved...You'll see...
Date: Dec 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
Phew! I'm glad this chapter endedd on a high note! I was afraid things were just going to fall apart!
I have a feeling this isn't the last of Ola...
I hope what Michael said was true, that all he did was flirting, and he never felt anything more than that.
Author's Response:
And I feel you have a good feeling lol...I let Michael did this with Ola in his trailer, because I maybe have something else planned with her...I don't know yet ;)
Yeah he only flirted...He was very attracted to Ola that's why it went a little out of control in his trailer...But he doesn't have a real crush for her, not enough to leave Kayliah.
Date: Jan 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Ohh gosh! When Quincy said that he knew about her secret my jaw dropped! I was seriously freaking out! But then when he continued and specified that it was the secret about being a model I was able to wipe the sweat from my brow there, lmao!
Yay! I'm happy Quincy approves! But something tells me he won't be so approving when he learns about the real secret that Kayliah is hiding from him...
Happy New Year to you as well! :D
Author's Response:
I know all my readers felt this lol...They nearly all had a heart attack whe Quincy began to speak lol....One secret at once lol.
He's approving for her to have a real model's career but I think that your intuition for the real secret can be true...We'll see this in a few chapters.
Thank you sweety!! :D
Date: Mar 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
Yay! I'm glad that Quincy has come to his senses and the two of them can be together again! And it's so great that Michael has forgiven her and everything is finally back on the right track! I hope it stays this way! This was a happy chapter :DD
That's too bad about your friend though :( That sucks when things don't work out as planned. I'd be sad too :(
Author's Response:
Quincy finally realised that he went a little too far about their relationship. They're together again, happy and it will stay that way :)
Yeah it really sucks sometimes but we'll see each other next time I hope :)
Date: Mar 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
:( Noooo! Why is Kayliah just letting herself go like that? I bet it's her new model boyfriend smh -_- I don't even remember his name except for the fact that it starts with a B.... a B for BAD INFLUENCE!
I hope she'll listen to Michael and fix their relationship :)
Author's Response:
I think you're right...Blake, her new boyfriend, will maybe be the cause of her troubles. I didn't get the thing with B of Blake and Bad influence...It's well done, you're right lol.
You'll see in the next chapter sweety :)
Date: Mar 07, 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Awwww :') The beginning of the chapter was kind of sad, but now it's still kind of sad because she got herself in that situation and she's so upset, but at the same time it's happier because she's going home :DDD
I think that since Michael was able to get her to see that the lifestyle she was living was wrong Quincy will be more accepting :)
Author's Response:
She's indeed very upset because of what she did.The parties, the cheating, hurting Michael. She now realises all the wrong things she did and she can't stand it.
Quincy will be more accepting but not right away, and not for this reason...Not only.
Date: Mar 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Aww :') Yay! I'm glad that things are slowly starting to get better and Ola didn't freak out over the truth because I kind of half expected her to be extremely upset and angry, but I'm glad she's bigger than that! :)
Haha I'm kind of craving French toast now :P
Author's Response:
I wanted Ola to be upset at first but I didn't want to keep her very long in the story.She was just there as a transition for Michael. Kayliah broke his heart and she was here to help him to overcome this.
And moreover, Michael never really promised her a real and strong relationship.In a chapter, he clearly mentionned this. He was about to change his mind but Kayliah came back and Ola understood she had no chance.
Yeah French toast...and made by Michael, the king of the French toast lol
Date: Feb 23, 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
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No. Just. No.
MICHAEL DON'T DO IT! Ugh, see, this is what I think is gunna happen, he's gunna call Ola and they're gunna get together, but Kayliah is so sad and upset for having hurt Michael that she breaks up with Blake, comes back and kinds that Michael has moved on with Ola and then now SHE'S upset and then Michael feels guilty and then it's all just a big mess. >:(
Author's Response:
Your analyse is pretty good but it won't happen like this. Michael will call Ola and be with her but for the rest, there are things you didn't plan and nobody can find about.
You'll have to wait and see ;)