Penname: TheJollyRoger [Contact] Real name: Cerine Kyrah Sands
Member Since: Sep 13, 2011
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm gonna be exactly what you want to see, It's you who's haunting me,
You're warning me to be the stranger in your life
Am I amusing you? Or just confusing you? Am I the beast you visualized?
And if you want to see eccentric oddities I'll be grotesque before your eyes,
Let them all materialize.


Is it scary for you? You know the stranger is you.
Is it scary for you?


Gender: female
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Reviews by TheJollyRoger
Summary:

This is a story set that begins during the Bad tour in November 1987. It's a Comedy/Drama with a lot of risque smut in it, and it deals with alot of controversial topics. The story also has a strange twist within it that you may or may not pick up on but will become clearer as the story plays out. Written in first person from both the main character, Jean, and Michael's POV. (And occasionally the lesser characters as well)

**CHAPTER 22 IS UP!** ...And more coming today as well.


Categories: Adult, Angst, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 28027 Read Count: 9394
[Report This] Published: Aug 31, 2010 Updated: Sep 02, 2010
Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Oops.

Oh my god this was sooo funny I couldn't stop laughing! I love your style! It's so natural and yet so profound. Very expressive! I LOVE this story. I loved the parts "my heart jumped into my throat, then out of my mouth and onto the floor where it spontaneously caught fire in smoldering ash" "now you've impressemld me. Not many girls make it to thid point without a dinner and a movie first" and "if i could die and crawl into a hole and fall all the way to china I would" Hahahaha. They are all so raw and so funny, which makes everything about this chapter so appealing! I'm a fan!

Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Costume Girl

Wow. Great start. Great writing! I've got a feeling this is going to be one of my new favorites!

Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Who is it?

Yeah that sure comes as a surprise doesn't it? Seeing a portrait of yourself drawn by man who you barely knew one hour ago. LOL ;-)

Forever With Me by Andrea Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

A poem I wrote for Michael because I really do feel he is always with me, guiding me, taking care of me, inspiring me...


Categories: Angst
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 217 Read Count: 55
[Report This] Published: Sep 01, 2010 Updated: Sep 01, 2010
Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed
Date: Aug 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! You know what? Great poets make good writers and great writers make good poets! I see that you love him so very deeply. That's why you can capture emotion so well! Another job well done girlfriend! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! XOXO

Can U Feel It? by Andrea Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Because hope dies last...


Categories: Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230 Read Count: 197
[Report This] Published: Sep 01, 2010 Updated: Sep 01, 2010
Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So much of passion in such simple words! You are a master at work! Hats off to you sis-tah! Much L.O.V.E.

Summary:

A few lines wrote to Michael right after the anniversary of 1 year from his passing.

Inspired by Jericho Rosales' song - Beautiful in my Eyes


Categories: Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1541 Read Count: 81
[Report This] Published: Sep 21, 2010 Updated: Sep 21, 2010
Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful in my Eyes

Speechless, speechless, that's how you make me feel! Girl! You brought tears to my eyes! Every word you've written manifested such a perfect picture in my mind! Your writing has so much life in it! Reading it makes the art come to life! You are SO AMAZING!!! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! XOXO

Summary:

Misa is a lonely teenage girl. She moves to America to get away from all the bullying. When she thinks she's alone she meets Michael who seems to be on the same track as her. She hides her past from Michael but can Michael break through her silence


Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Angst, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1297 Read Count: 392
[Report This] Published: Jan 24, 2011 Updated: Jan 25, 2011
Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would like it if you added a bit more detail to the scenes. It's never too late to modify your work. ;-) Much L.O.V.E.

Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I want to know what happened in this girl's past that made her who she is now.

Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Self inflicted injuries? Now there's a point to explore more in this story. I wish you would continue this story. Much L.O.V.E.

Summary:

Twenty three year old Lynn, is Frank Dilieo's niece. One her and international superstar Michael Jackson meet, the two quickly become friends and lean on each other when they are lost and lonely. Can the two become more than friends? Or will they let the worst get the better of them?


Categories: Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2224 Read Count: 777
[Report This] Published: Feb 07, 2011 Updated: Feb 07, 2011
Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I want you to continue with this story. Much L.O.V.E.

Summary:

Addicted to music and to...Michael!


Categories: Dreams
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2890 Read Count: 265
[Report This] Published: Feb 10, 2011 Updated: Feb 10, 2011
Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A MASTERPIECE!!! That's all I can say! THIS IS AN EPIC MASTERPIECE!!! You are so amazingly talented! You should be a professional writer!!! Or are you one already??? Because girl your work is epic!!! Magical!!! I think I'm in love with you! Your work is better than all the top ten stories and authors combined!!! Hands down to you. It's really pathetic that this site doesn't really appreciate art in its true form. All they want is just slutty romance with bad grammar and bad spellings and even worse logic!!! The admins need to reconsider their standards! You've raised them too high! YOU ARE MY HERO!!! Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours! XOXO

Summary: Michael and Becka have been friends since they could remember. They have always been in love with each other but were always afraid to say it .When Michael falls for a rude, money hungry gold digger; Danna Watson their friendship begins to fall apart. Becka's heart is broken when he is engaged to be married to Danna. Will she be able to convince Michael that she is the one for him? Will she be able to save her best friend from heart break?









Rating could change as story progresses. Rated for language and mild themes I like hearing from you guys so more reviews are wanted and lets 's shoot for 5 stars!! Just tell me what you want more of and you've got it!!!!! :) Chapters 3,4,5&6,7,8 and 9 are up!!
Categories: Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Bad: 1986-1990
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5498 Read Count: 23510
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2011 Updated: Jun 06, 2011
Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: It's a Love Story

Aww... a sweet story. :-)

Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Say, Say, Say.............

Awww... he took a stand!

Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Get it together, or leave it alone

Too late Michael! Too late to reconsider your options now!

Reviewer: TheJollyRoger Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Have your cake; and eat it too

Ou boy. Poor poor Michael. He's such a love struck puppy.