Penname: Ellah [Contact] Real name: Ellah Rosalie
Member Since: Jun 19, 2011
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"ITS ALL FOR LOVE....L.O.V.E!!!"photo


Hi everyone,First of all thank you so much for spending your your precious time in viewing my account...I love to read stories and write stories ofcourse!! really sorry for my english in my stories because I'm neither American nor English...lol.


I'm a great Michael Jackson fan...."who the hell dont like Michael Jackson?"!!!


 


Please review my stories...Now I'm working on my first story in this website:):).


 


                                                                                                  With so much of


                                                                                                                     L.O.V.E,


                                                                                                   Ellah Rosalie.


 


 


 


 


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Summary:

"Michael Joseph Jackson"

Just the name alone holds The Dignity, The Pride, The Courage and The Power.

A story that focuses on the life of the one of the greatest Stars that ever lived. The Man who created his own path and registered his feet in History and also the Man with Splitting-unpredictable-personalities. He is very bright yet self-destructive, he has an extremely high IQ yet a terrible temper, he is Childish yet Domineering, he is innocent yet a cautious businessman, he is rich & powerful yet also an insecure child. However he can be angelically sweet and cuttingly cold.

 

lbts

 

*Plot Summary For The Story (Part I):

Being in the spotlight for more than 20 hours a day wasn’t a big deal for Michael, as he was used to that. But the life behind those flashlights was really uncomfortable and perplexed. People constantly gossiped, disturbed and humiliated him. His Extra ordinary life with hallucinations confounded him. Though he was a pop star, his life wasn’t a Fairy Tale. 

The story initiates with the Young, Jacksons Era Michael Jackson and Ends with the Very Successful Bad Era Michael Jackson with the title of The Most Famous & Successful Man on Earth, after his rocket fame. He meets someone during the audition of the movie ‘The Wiz’ and as young tender love blossoms between them, he wants to spend the rest of his life with them. May be his life won’t be so bad if he share it with them.

 

Note: This story starts from The Jacksons Era and ends with Bad Era.

(I’m trying to write his entire life, with fictionalized personal life… so I really appreciate your support)

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DISCLAIMER:

This story is Not Complete Fiction as it contains the real life incidents of Michael. The Characters I used other than Michael are 100% Fiction. Any Resemblance to any person living or dead is purely Co-Incidental. All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original Characters and Plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended. I'm in No Way related to Michael, and The Source for all the things I use in this Story is Researches and References alone.

 


Categories: Off The Wall: 1975-1981, Thriller: 1982-1983, Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Hurt/Comfort, Humor, Romance
Characters: Michael
General Warnings: Erotica
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19796 Read Count: 3062
[Report This] Published: Jan 25, 2012 Updated: May 09, 2012
Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter A (6): Talks Till Dawn: Unchained Melody

Good job!!!! :) i liked the song its so perfect girl... keep it up! cant wait for the next chapter! seriously what gonna happen after they meet? ahhh!!! :D



Author's Response:

Hey Ellah....... Thanks a lot!!! It really means a lot to me girl! Its a great song isnt it? haha I appreciate your curiousness! lol! Lets wait & See ;) Thanks again hun... for reading and reviewing!!! Much Love, Monisha :P

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

TRD

Love stoned with Diana Ross, Michael Jackson faces bad break-up with the only woman he trusted most, all his life. He paces the next stages of his life, walking wounded with a chip on his shoulder; grieving over his past and heedless about his future. Appalled by the pain of love, he vows to himself that he would not ever fall in love again as he continues to be a player since he became a pleasure seeker for his needs. At this time of dried and withered, an young doctor passes his path like a breath of fresh air... He wants her, he gets her and before they knew a steamy sordid affair begins as he lays out ground rules that their clandestine relationship will be based only on sex. But without his realizing it, it poses a threat when he finds himself falling for her. When love hit him like a freight train for the second time, he fell hard.

"Sex is the only consolation you have when you can't have love"

NOTE: All of the above are discussed in this story. I do realize that this is a very senstive and controversial subject but I want to let you know that I'm in no way trying to portray or paint Michael in a bad light or executing an over exposition of his private things or embarrassing him. My sole intention of this is just trying to vindicate Michael by learning as much as possible to at least get and give a slight view of why he made the choices the way he did and a little spotlight on the troubled life he lived behind the curtains.

 


Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adult, Romance
Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 318445 Read Count: 42849
[Report This] Published: Jul 02, 2012 Updated: Sep 13, 2017
Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 27, 2014 Title: Chapter 32: ♥ Chapter 32: ...And To Love. ♥

Im so damn happy they re back togetherrrr!!! LOVEly update!

 

 

Happy belated b'day to yoU! :)



Author's Response:

Hey Ellah :) Me too :P Thank you so much sweetie!

Aw, thanks girl! *hugs* Thanks for the review!!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 31: ♥ Chapter 31: One Life To Live... ♥

OH MY GOD NOOOOO!!!!

You HAVE TO bring my nita back!!!!!! Or I will find you and MAKE you do it!! How could you girl! This is my favorite story and nita is my most favorite heroin!!!!PLEASEEEE UPDATEEE!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm So Sorry girl! 

We'll see! LOL everybody's threatening me these days lol! ;) Alright, alright, cool down, you read next chapter I've updated it! :) Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 24, 2014 Title: Chapter 30: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥

Im so glad to have you back! Have been bored of this site when you didn't update. Im definitely on Nita's side. What else was she supposed to do when he hide things from her? I cant wait to read what happens next.



Author's Response:

HEY Ellah :) Girl how are you?! LOL Thanks so much hun! My dear god, everybody's on Nita's side. I agree with you! ;) Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Oct 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 27: ♥ Chapter 27: Take Me Far, Far Away... ♥

O.O That was my reaction when I finished reading this chapter! Holy Shit this is not a STORY not a FICTION it's a freggin DOCUMENTARY OR BIOGRAPHY!!!!!! I feel it right here! Jeez! 

I could feel for Michael but he needs to man up and LET HER IN GODDAMIT! How long he's going to cower like a coward?! He needs to OPEN UP!!!

“So wh—who’s Joseph?” She asked again. She was curious.

This time the answer was swift. “The man who tormented my childhood"

Nita couldn’t help the perplexity wrinkling her brows. “What do you mean? Why didn’t you tell your father?"

"Joseph is my father.” He said nonchalantly and turned back to her.

BANG!

“You did say I was adjusting my features like every other people said.” Came the vile reminder.

“Because I didn’t know about you anything more than other people knew. I thought I did. But no. I still don’t know you!”

WOW!

"Why?" he sneered, his words mocking. "Because I'm unhappy? I don't know what even makes you think I'm unhappy?"

Nita let out a sad smile, her eyes turning glossy. "How pathetic it will be Michael... if you don't know it yourself..." She paused, sniffing. "Do you know what I first noticed about you?" She asked blankly.

And that question made something change in his demeanor as his eyes looked straight into hers, almost eagerly. "No. What did you first notice about me?" Your dots. Your nose. Your clothes. He was expecting all these familiar answers. But what came through her lips was nothing he ever thought.

Nita pushed the lump down her throat and bit out, "The pain in your eyes." She took her coat and dashed out of the room before he could even realize what she said.

10/10!!!

And I loved the Yatza flashback! Yatzabamizi is so cute unlike her name LOL You asked who she's reminding.... well the moment I laid my eyes on her, she KINDA reminded me of Blanket. Is that what you were expecting? :PP Her mother is EXOTIC! Now I know why mike had that THANG for East-Indians LMAO!!!

BUT I SURE AS HELL WOULD NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS ACCEPT WHAT HE DID FOR MY POOR NITA! THE BOY NEEDS SPANKING RIGHT NOW!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

LOL I can imagine that face Ellah! WOOO THANKS! That's exactly what I've been working on! :P I thought Michael needs a biography about his personal life! Exactly he needs to let her in to see his pain... she's not going to magically know it all. He needs to let her see. And trust her enough for that. LOL! That scene just popped in my head when I was reading a story lol!

I know she's the one for him. I hope he does as well... I'm not going to divulge anything more than this! *mouth zipped* you girls literally drag out the words in my head you know lol! I need to save it all for the next chapter :P

Haha, its an African origin name! Wow Blanket? Hmm... we'll see ;) LOL I know! 

Hmm... Right. He could never get forgiveness but we'll see... :D Haha spanking?! LOL! I'm really laughing! Thanks for your wonderful review, Ellah, as always, life up my sprits! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: ♥ Chapter 14: Between The Sand And The Sky ♥

Mike and Riya are so sweet. <3



Author's Response:

Hey Ellah, Thanks Chicka :) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥

IMAO! Warner needs his ass kicked out and Nita did just that! So I'm happy!!! yippee! And they are going out on a real date! CANT WAIT! UPDATE!!!! Omer and Mike are sooooo cute!!! And that big speech by Michael was really moving! I'm sure any girl would have moved :) Again, UPDATE!!! HUGE UPDATE! :P



Author's Response:

LMAO! Ikr? Warner isn't the one for Nita!! She got sure of it... but does she know that Mike's the one for her? No. She's isnt sure of it yet!  I'm working on the update girl :) Thanks so damn much hun:) Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: ♥ Chapter 12: Leaves Of Grass ♥

Michael should stop being this chicken shit about love and be a man! Seriously! Nita's now going out a freaking date with another guy and he should do his best to stop it otherwise his girl might change hands...

Story stealers... smh! Girl I'm telling ya' don't even think when you come across them! And Ideas stealing... I know what and who you are talking about. You dont know, this is been the case since this website started. People use other people's ideas... and the real authors feel crushed and leave the website without finishing it breaking the readers!!! You are right if you are a real Michael Jackson they really wouldn't have interest in doing this, damn them! But don't let them get you! You need to face things girl... you need to continue this story no matter what!



Author's Response:

Yeah you are absolutely right Ellah! He needs to voice his feelings to her boldly!!! God, he's 26 for christ's sake not 14! Hehe I hope he manage to keep Nita to himself ;)

 

Ellah :) Thank you, Thank you and Thank you! Girl You are so comforting! I know about the authors that have left due to things like this! Because I have met a wonderful author in MJJE who was very successful in MJ Fiction and she told me about why she left this site after that incident. I personally prefer MJ Fiction, I feel more home here, more warm and welcoming here than other websites. But the moderator should take a look at things like this! I guess a month before I have seen an author posting about 'Violation of Copyrights' of her story since the girl had posted the same story in this very same website!! I mean WTF? I don't remember the author's name or the stealer's name but now I feel the pain and anger the author must have felt when she found out! Yeah, he was a man who was always honest and personally hated his immitators. But don't worry girl, I would never do a thing like discontinuing this story or disappearing from you guys! I would never do that, I promise! MY readers means the world to me and I will never break their hopes!!! Thanks again pyt! You made my day! Lots of love <3 xx And a Big hug!!!

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: ♥ Chapter 11: Shrouding Me Alive ♥

You write so well... and the scenes are very little and normal but they are very sweet and captivating like the scenes in this chapter! Thank goodness MICHAEL finally realized his love...



Author's Response:

THANKS SO MUCH!!! I really appreciate that girl... I mean it! Yes, but will he tell it out? We'll see ;) Stay tuned! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: ♥ Chapter 10: Deserved Punishment, Earned Revelation ♥

Now Nita won't forgive him! And I'm glad that she understood his feelings better! He's the best girl for her... she even forgot about what he was there wow! why was he still waiting???? Lovely update sweetheart!!! And the O-BEE bit was AWESOME!!! Never red anything like it in a fan fic!! :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's betrayal there! NO GIRL CAN FORGIVE IT SO EASILY!!! Yeah you are right! She's the one for him but she needs to realize it!! He's scared about love!!! Thanks so much sweetheart :P Love ya' girl!!! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥

Nita's going to rock I just know it!!! And I kind of trust Michael now but i can't wait to read more. Sorry girl I'm back! its been really long since i red this story due to goddamn school... today I'm gonna finish it finally!!



Author's Response:

HI ELLAH!!! Girl I'm SO glad that you are back!!! How are you? lol! IKR? Mike was an ass with Diana! You will see soon!! Thanks so much hun!!! I really appreciate it! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Nov 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: ♥ Chapter 8: Yesterday's Echoes ♥

LOL! Their conversations at the start got me laughing as hell! Nita is too funny and Mike is such a prankster! And they make a great couple! I love the photoshopped pics too! If haven't heard about Photoshop in my life I would believe they are real! Great job!



Author's Response:

LMAO! Ikr? Mike and Nita- SMH! Aw, THANKS SO MUCH girlie! Love you! Gosh that's flattering :) Stay tuned! Next update will be sooooooon <3 Lots of love!!

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Dec 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: ♥ Chapter 16: Stranger On My Land ♥

WOOOWWW! This story is getting better and better with each chapter! No wonder I love this to pieces!!! You knock me off my feet with something in every chapter. Infact I read the story again and again whenever I feel bored. I will re-read this chapter for god know how many times!! Oh yeah getting to the story...

He didn’t respond by words. His hands gripped her sides and pulled her into a hug. Nita placed her head on his chest appreciatively with a relaxed sigh, closing her eyes as he buried his head into the crook of her neck and tightened his grip around her waist. “This…” he spoke silkily into her ear. “This is what I want. Just hold me tight for awhile will you?”

Aw sweet!!

I don’t want anything like that. I know you don’t too. I want something more… more permanent, special… and magical. Something that would last for a lifetime.” He licked his lips, as Nita stared at him with much expressions covered on her face but mostly confusion. Deep confusion and deep thinking that the dark green eyes darkened even more. He continued without any rush. “I have been having a bad tendency to see the worst aspect of things and believes that worst will happen lately after seeing so many things in my past. I know I’m confused. But I know one thing for sure. I want you. Hell, I need you!”

Man he almost proposed there!!!


“Bro, I like your music!” he exclaimed when he was standing next to Nita.

Michael peered at him, calmly. “I’m not your brother…” He snapped shaking his head on either side in disapproval

That was HILARIOUS!! I know if Michael was really there that's what he woulda said!!!

Bill shook his head and sighed, giving up. “Keep doing what you are doing Michael. And one day, you’ll be a lonely, miserable old man with no one to care about you and no one for you to care about. I have tried to understand the way you have chosen to live your life these past two years because I know how devastated you were by what Diana did to you! But its over. Finished. She’s somewhere happily with her husband and you are grieving here scared like a coward! Don’t hesitate in these things Michael. Girl like Nita are too rare to find and too easy to miss. And also remember she have guys lining up for her!” his voice was honestly warning. 

100 Percent TRUE! I love Bill Bray for making some sense to Michael!

Michael started to run to her house, hastily. He didn’t want to run into conclusions though what he saw was exactly what it looked like. He felt like an atom bomb waiting to explode as he entered her door, ticking, ticking and ticking. He didn’t even call out her name, he climbed the stairs and ran up to her room, and opened the door on the spot, to see her standing their without a pant and buttoning her shirt before she turned her head swiftly and gasped a loudest terrorized gasp when she saw him. The ticking had stopped as Michael looked at her, his eyes so ached, and the bomb blasted inside him as he realized that she was cheating on him!

I know this is not much promising to believe. I want to read you next update before I judge Nita. I don't think she cheated on Michael. OH excuse me she's not his girlfriend at first place! He's the one that went for Diana hag ass when they were actually 'pretending' to be in a relationship!!! Though, yes, that was a shocker indeed! But I want to read the next update! SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! <3 <3 <3

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Author's Response:

WOW! Jesus Ellah THANKS!!! SO FREAKING MUCH!!! I loved every way you read by point by point! Is there anything more rewarding for a writer more than this?!! Thanks so much sweetheart! LOVE YOU SO MUCH! Mmm... You won't judge Nita now? Okay we'll see ;) Nope you guys can get nothing out of me. *Tight lipped* Hehehe! Thanks again PYT! I don't know how could I ever say it enough! Lots of love <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥

Lovely Chapter :) if I were Nita... I would have never even started it :P I know i'M LYING. Seriously if Mike talk like that and do things like that... god is there any girl here who would fall for him?????



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Ellah :) Haha, girl u're funny! :P  Right... I agree it with all my heart lol! <3 xx

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: ♥ Chapter 5: In The Veil Of Night ♥

Woowww!! Michael on your door step!!! you certainly know how to keep your readers in a desperate need for an update :P! I freggin' love this story plzzzzz update!! I cant wait to know where they are going tomorrow :))))



Author's Response:

Hehe IKR??? :P Thanks a lot Ellah :) Really means a lot to me hun... <3 I guess you gotta wait to know that lol :D Stay Tuned, next update is almost ready... hope you will like it. xx