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Summary:

Chapter 9

*Based on the movie Moonwalker's "Smooth Criminal"

 

She was lonely, 

and so was he...

She'd always dream of magic, 

He was going to bring it into her life...

She told stories about the boy who never grew up, 

He was the man with a child-like spirit...

She was hurting,

and he was going to heal her. 

They needed one another, 

Completed one another...

Two lonely hearts, 

Will finally beat as one...

"No, if the angels took me from this earth
I would tell them bring me back to her
It's a chance I'll take, maybe I'll stay
Heaven can wait..."  

A story filled with romance and that Michael Jackson magic...

"He was Peter Pan and she, his Wendy."

UPDATE: 6/14/15

 

 


Rated: T
Categories: Bad: 1986-1990, Adventure, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort, Romance Characters: Michael, Original Girl
General Warnings: None
Trigger Warnings: Domestic Abuse, Emotional Abuse
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 25157 Read: 23418
Published: Aug 03, 2014 Updated: Jun 14, 2015

1. Synopsis by nymartian [Reviews - 6] starstarstarstarstar (148 words)

PLEASE REVIEW IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN THIS STORY HAPPENING! I'm still hesitant on posting since it's my first MJ fanfic...

2. The Characters of Heaven Can Wait by nymartian [Reviews - 1] (39 words)

The story is meant to be seen as not only a story adapted from the "Smooth Criminal" short film in MJ's Moonwalker, but also as a sort of fairytale. I don't quite know how long the story will be, but I'm planning around 15 or so chapters. However, they'll be a bit long or at least more than 1,000 words. Anywho, this is my first MJ related story and I hope you all enjoy!

3. Prologue by nymartian [Reviews - 5] starstarstarstarstar (220 words)

4. Chapter I: Bedtime Stories by nymartian [Reviews - 3] (1474 words)

This is the first official chapter of Heaven Can Wait! Please enjoy...

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5. Chapter II: Michael by nymartian [Reviews - 2] (2715 words)

Alisa meets Michael in this chapter! Hope you guys enjoy!

Chapter II

6. Chapter III: The Storyteller by nymartian [Reviews - 1] (2010 words)

Continuing from the cliffhanger...enjoy...

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7. Chapter IV: The Calm Before the Storm by nymartian [Reviews - 2] starstarstarstarstar (2427 words)

Sorry for the wait! Read & Review please! 

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8. Chapter V: Bella Notte by nymartian [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (3639 words)

Part 2 of Michael and Alisa's date! 

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9. Chapter VI: Will You? by nymartian [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (4009 words)

Sorry this chapter is just about a month late, but please enjoy anyways...

More Michael/ Alisa fluff ;)

 

10. Chapter VII: When It All Falls Apart by nymartian [Reviews - 3] starstarstarstarstar (3690 words)

Almost 1900 views! Thank you so much! 

Enjoy! 

Love Split

11. Chapter VIII: Love by nymartian [Reviews - 1] (2187 words)

Forgive me, my darling readers, for the 3 month hiatus. School was the worst in April and May, but now I'm free for summer vacation! And free to write and post more! Expect a new chapter, every other week. 

Please enjoy and review chapter 8!!!

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12. Chapter IX: Remember the Time by nymartian [Reviews - 1] (2599 words)

Less reviews last chapter, did I disappoint? Hope not, still having fun writing this story!

Oh and BEWARE THE FLUFF! Lol just kidding, enjoy Chapter 9!

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