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Date: Jun 18, 2015 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awesome chapter... :) (And I sense the makings of the song In the Closet that Michael is playing on the piano there, too.)

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Date: Jun 18, 2015 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome start so far... :) I like it. (Plus, I hope that Tig will get the humiliation he deserves, too.)

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Date: Jun 18, 2015 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is really neat so far. :) I like it. And I hope that Naomi and Michael will meet, too. :)

Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)

Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2010 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

that was great please write more

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