Date: Sep 24, 2012 04:37 am Title: Chapter 57
welcome back. i hope michael and miranda have the talk about the miscarriage. i hope she forgives michael and hope he forgives her. they acting childless and i wish they make up already its not healthy to fight in an relationship cause it leads to breaking up. its just my opinion. :) enrinque is hott and so is michael. wonderful chapter dear and like i said i still enjoy the story. continue :)
Date: Jan 27, 2012 11:05 pm Title: Author Note
this story is awesome i feel that way sometimes that people don't review my stuff im lucky to get even two reviews.but your story is great u have 180views something i wished i had lolz but anyways you checkout my stories if you want u can review and rate and let me know u think of them which i kindly apreciate. support alot of authors on here that doesn't even take the time to even read my stuff but it doesn't stop me sometimes i wanna quit but i just keep on going because i know sooner or later i'll be a better writer. and this is my second time reading this story lolz it's so good. :)
Date: Dec 08, 2011 09:45 pm Title: Characters
Will You Plz Help Me Write A Story AboutA 11 Year Old Girl Names Vanessa Who Has Lukemia And Michael (bad era) adopts her and they have ups and downs but have a great time till.......taitiana thumbzen comes in after her and mike start talking and try to mess up the father-daughter bond but Vanessa acts like Macunley Culkin in home alone then everythinng else escaltes
Date: Oct 30, 2011 12:06 pm Title: Characters
This storie is one word 'AMAZING' I mean 'AMAZING' :)
You are such an awsome writer I feel the feeling you describe when I'm reading and I really wanted to cry when she had that miscarriage I nearly nid because my family's huge lots of young children and I want a big family, and if that happened to me I'd die well not die but be very depressed but you described it all very well it's just amazing this storie is :) I could of punched Nicole myself LOL I was literally on the edge of my seat you have also decribed your characters very well Bruno and Enrique sound very HOT! and so does Michael ;) But I hope she gets pregnant again soo because I think that will just make there relationship better again but am I right that when they were having sex (in the hotel roow) that protection was not used so is there a chance that she could be pregnant agin I'll pray and hope for them :)
So I cant wait for more *big grin* and I really hope you update soon I need more this is amazing please do update pretty please :) <3
Author's Response: OMJ! Thank you soooooooooooo much! Oh this is so sweet!<3333 thank you!! I appreciate all your compliments!:) I wanted to cry as I wrote the chapters to do with the miscarriage. It's a very upsetting subject and I did shed tears over it:/ but I understand, I'm happy and sorry that I almost made you cry! Sorry because I don't want you to cry and happy that my writing was able to evoke emotion like that. But to be honest I don't feel this story is amazing or whatever. It's alot better than my first MJ fanfic which I've deleted(sorry!:L) but I feel I could write sooooo much better. And I will, when I update there'll be a few changes to do with how my writing style is:) I hope you notice it, the changes I mean. Anyway yes Bruno and Enrique and Michael are very hot! Mainly Michael for me!:) Ives used Bruno Mars and Enrique Iglesias as the portrayals by the way just invade you didn't know:) but I'm glad you think I've described them well because I was aiming for that. And yes you're right, they didn't use protection!:) good you noticed that because you've given me an idea now! Actually I'm gonna use the idea now. Thank you for inspiring me! But honestly this has given me the kick up my ass to write and update. It's really busy, but I'm gonna have an update later this week hopefully. I feel so bad that I never update! I'm gonna soon don't worry! So thank you soooooooooooo much! Really sweetie, this has made me real happy:)! I'm so glad you like the story so much!:) A lotta drama coming up! Hope you stick around for the entire story because this story is gonna be quite long! And there's gonna be a surprise when the story ends:) thank you AGAIN! For your incredible support! I love you very much! LOVEEE
Date: Oct 05, 2011 01:24 am Title: Chapter 56
,,...sorry if it ain't that good."
NO,your story isn't GOOD.....
Your story is AMAZING/FANTASTIC/LOVELY/ADORABLE and I could go ON and ON about it....
How can you say such thing?
I MISSSSSSED YOU SOOOO MUCHHHHHHH!
SWEEET AS ALWAYS!
P.S. : Don't worry,take your time....it will be all just GREAT!
Date: Oct 04, 2011 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 56
I think you may be dwelling for too long on this arguement...
Author's Response: Really? I thought it was going fine:) but then again you're the reader so I'll take that into a account. Don't worry, arguments like this are bound to be quite long. It's not about something that you can say sorry about and it's done. To be honest they're not arguing anymore, she just wants him to talk about the miscarriage. Thank you for the review, I appreciate your advice:) LOVEEE
Date: Sep 24, 2011 06:08 am Title: Chapter 55
I hope you cheer up look deep inside your beautiful heart and michael will be there. :) just called his name he came running. Sorry i hadnt been reviewing lately i been having bad headaches. Btw this story is beautiful and magnicent. Sorry if i offended you in the last review i left. When i said its was getting good i meant its getting there. I meant it when i said your a great writer. I becoming a fan. :) i feel michael with me everyday. Its a wonderful feeling. I cry for him almost everyday. He appears in my dreams letting me know hes there. I miss him also. Just know he always be there. Cant wait for the next chapter. Have a great day.
Date: Sep 24, 2011 04:22 am Title: Characters
sweetie....darling.....dear.......DON'T LET YOURSELF DOWN......BECAUSE EFIA GIMBYA IS STRONGER THAN WE KNOW!.........I hope that you will succeed with your work....I KNOW you will.....have luck!........don't let ANYONE to upset you,because life is too short.....and you DESERVE to be HAPPY,not sad......love you sooooooo much MORE!
Date: Sep 22, 2011 01:17 pm Title: Characters
look...here's a video that might get you feel better....it's not about Michael...it's about Mark Gungor,a pastor which helps people understand men an women...in a very funny way...personally,my favourite part starts at 1:01:24......I hope I can help you and don't hesitatet to watch other videos of him...they can really help you to laugh again....love you SO MUCH,more than you will ever know...
1-01 Tail of Two Brains 1 - YouTube
Date: Sep 22, 2011 11:28 am Title: Chapter 55
WHATTTTTTTTT????????????????????????? YOU'RE CRYING?????????NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..........WHY?HOW?WHEN?.....oh,my.......Efia......you almost made me cry too........think about your problem for a few minutes.....then put this questions...and of course,answer the TRUTH ,because the truth is always the BEST choice,even if it hurts...... : Does it worth it? What's the real reason? Who did the wrong thing?Did we both made a mistake?......you just have to listen to your heart sweetheart....listen to it,because NO ONE knows you better than YOU....you know every little detail about yourself....your YOU!....you're UNIQUE,BEAUTIFUL,INTELLIGENT,SWEET,CUTE,FUNNY,POLITE,SINCERE,S TRUSTFUL PERSON AND A VERY LOVELY GIRL.....AAANNNNND A PERSON LIKE YOU DOESN'T DESERVE TO CRY....just because it's a boy...now I know...I know that you're probably going to say that I don't know him or something like that,and I won't contradict you,but...think about it...did he really deserve you?a special girl like you? maybe not.....If a person LOVES you TRULY, then ...he shouldn't NEVER but NEVER make you CRY....at least that's my opinion and not only mine...many others said that......he should make you happy,not sad,but HAPPY......maybe...as I had said earlier,he didn't deserve you.....but then again,thst's my point of view....when two people are loving each other,they should NEVER EVER upset the other.......
I tried my best to support and help you my dear,lovely and beautiful Efia,and I give you my word that what I'm saying now comes STRAIGHT from my HEART........I wish I could be tere to do ANYTHING for YOU....ANYHTING.....you're my best friend,my support,my everything....you're my world and there will NEVER be ENOUGH words to THANK YOU for what you have done to and for me......I WISH very muchthet one day,we will be able to see each other...in person.....who knows what the future can bring to us?......
LOVE YOU TO DEATH,my darling and once AGAIN ( :)) ).....I hope that you will be happy once more......you just simply DON'T and I repeat, DON'T deserve to cry........
Your fan and friend forever.......! :X
Date: Sep 22, 2011 10:45 am Title: Chapter 55
Oh efia, what has happened? This chapter is amazing by the way. What is wrong honey? Don't cry, you know i hate it when you do! Is it about the *guy*? :( cheer up and don't let him get to you xx your so much better than that loser xx Hugs