Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 16: Holiday

oh yessssss i cannot wait for the next chapter!!!! plzzz update now!!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 16: Holiday

Ooo Virgin Islands <3 sounds like a treat. Also swim suit shopping xP

 Wow I like Mrs. Harrison :D She's cool. I wonder if they can get along on their holiday cuz it would suck if something went wrong. 

Can't wait. 

Author's Response: I'm working on it now! Mrs. Harrison is a very cool marriage counselor. And I would be wonderful to go to the virgin islands. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.

I understand, school starts back up in a couple weeks for me. :-/ I have enjoyed reading the stories on here. Cuz usually once school starts, I don't get to read on here as often. And I made a new friend. We're friends right? It's okay if we're not xF. Anyway tho, still love your story. 

Author's Response: Yeah were friends :) I've really enjoyed you reading my stories and actually liking them. Your comments are always so sweet. It's really made me fell good about my writing. Thanks for all the wonderful reviews! The net chapter has been posted!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 15: TLC for a PYT

Awww she's ticklish :D  when I read this chapter I thought of the song 'Where Almost There' by the Jacksons... I think. But love your story. I'm so glad you update fast cuz I am in love with your story :P

Author's Response: I'm going to try and upload another story. I'm about to go back to school so I'm trying to make as many updates as I can. I've been on the website everyday all summer almost. LOL. And yes they're almost there! I'm so glad you love it:) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 14: Because I care about you

awwwwww how sweet please update!!! asap!!

Author's Response: I'm working on another chapter now.

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2011 02:36 am Title: Chapter 13: Progress

I smell even BETTER progress. :P I see that Moonwalk has inspired you :). I loved the pillow fight. Too cute (•^_^•)

Lol Michael "Wasn't better than sex" xD dang Michael you funny. Love your story though, they are too adorable. 

 

Cain't wait for next part :D  

Author's Response: Yep they're getting better. Moonwalk has inspired me a lot. I really enjoyed it :) I'm really surprised you actually find it funny because I'm not a funny person at all! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2011 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 12: All I ever wanted

aww they have their cute moments :) hah love it!

Author's Response: :) The next chapter's been posted. Thanks for the review!!