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Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2011 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 28:Baby Blues

wow alica is going crazy about her weight!!1 lol plzz update!!!

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2011 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Jacksons: A family dynsty

WOW!

Reviewer: Invisible Ink Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2011 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Jacksons: A family dynsty

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Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2011 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Jacksons: A family dynsty

TRIPLETS!!!!!! *faints*(x_x)

 

Hehe wow wow wow<--- three wows for three babies ;) Congrats to Alica and Michael. 



Author's Response: Yep, they've got their hands full! 2 new chapters have been uploaded!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2011 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 27: The Jacksons: A family dynsty

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZZ UPDATE!!!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2011 05:28 am Title: Chapter 26: Tell me something good

Awe yay shes pregnant (^L^) that woulda been funny if she wasn't pregnant and she fainted because of the fight and just wanted some cheesecake afterwards. xD but.....not in this case LOL!

 

Love the chapter <3

Reviewer: Invisible Ink Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2011 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 26: Tell me something good

AWW!!

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2011 01:53 am Title: Chapter 26: Tell me something good

Omg, Malvo & Killmoves? I'm wayyyy too familiar w/ those names ;). I choked because I was laughing so hard. Either way, this is a good story although I think the chapters should be longer and more descriptive but your use of dialougue is great!



Author's Response: Thanks! LOL!!Yes I watch soooo much everybody hates Chris I had to put them in there. That's one of my favorite shows. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Invisible Ink Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2011 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 25: It's obvious

:D Thanks.

Sorry I didn't make it go your way.

OMG!!! MORE.



Author's Response: Don't sweat it hun!!!!! :) I loved it!! It was brilliant!!! I might make some changes like typos but your good. Thanks!!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2011 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 25: It's obvious

That'd be awesome if she was pregnant! Lol she was like "next time it happens, someones getting stabbed." that was funny. 

 

Great update. <3



Author's Response: Just wait and see!! Since I'm not really funny I get most of my humor for comedy shows I've watched. But you never know. Alica just might do it!! Another chapter has been posted!! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2011 02:47 am Title: Chapter 24: Lady In My Life

Yay Alica!!! When it comes to Michael you got to fight off them Dirty Dianas and Billie Jeans (; 

Loved the chapter <3

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2011 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 24: Lady In My Life

GO ALICA!!!!!! PLZZZ UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2011 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1:The Story of us.

Woah, your read count is 1958 ^_^ kool beans



Author's Response: Wow! That's Michael's birth year! It also happens to my dad's too. Cool! That was one of the best years ever!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2011 06:20 am Title: Chapter 23: Wanna be staritn something

Ooh yay errthang is all nice and peachy. Lol that was funny when Alica and Tatiana was acting all cold to each other. Somebody is jealous ^_^ . Well it ain't gonna bother Alica no how cuz Michael and her done started on a new page, and I KNOW he don't want to mess that up. 

 

:) Loved the chapter <3

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2011 02:05 am Title: Chapter 23: Wanna be staritn something

PLZZZZZZZ UPDATE!!!!

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